I had thought I will go unreserving by serial order but now I am updating my comments based on d length of the chapter cz u knw I m too lazy 😆Chapter 11- Chotu but great chapter 😆
Loved the trick Sukku used on Nisha to wake her up 😆
Also it was wonderful to know that the mere mention of Kabir's name can make Nisha alert and that too in a good way😆 Looks like our Kabira's charm has started working on Nishu😆😉
In one swift movement Nisha was up and standing on the bed. Her eyes scanned the room for that familiar smirk but she could not find it.- I think only one line will fit this context- Nishu ki aankhein taras gayi hai Kabir ko dekhne ke liye 😆🤣
Maa said she would spank me with the ruler if I didn't obey her. Anyways it was a dead end for me either you would thrash me or she would I chose the former. Maa spanking me with a ruler would not look decent" Nisha chuckled at his response- Sukku's reasoning 🤣
I was just imagining how it would be like, Maa running around you with a ruler"-This certainly would be a treat to watch 🤣🤣
She found it strange that none of the cousins had come to see her this morning. "After last night it was practically impossible that Dolly Di, Umesh Bhaiya or Kirti wouldn't come to support me today before I went down. Atleast Jwala and Bunty would be present out of curiosity. What made them stay away."- Well this is something I adore about the cousins and their bond with Nishu. Although they may guide and help Nishu whenever she needs them, they do not try to enforce their opinion or likes/dislikes on her. They give that space to their Captain Jugaadu and allow her to take her own decisions.
Nisha was getting ready in her room. She had thrown in a pair of black jeans and a peach coloured tunic. She decided at least the casualness in her dressing would take away her anxiety. She stood in front of the mirror pensive about how she would handle the situation how everyone would react to her decision. She stared at herself in the mirror as if her reflection would start giving her answers and pacify her that her decision was right. - U have described Nisha's thoughts and her apprehension and confusion very well guruji 👏👏👏 Beautufully penned down 👏👏👏
She anticipated that Ramesh would ask her about her decision, she wanted to discuss it with him but she felt her father was in no mood to ask her about it. "Don't you want to know my decision?" Nisha asked Ramesh, her voice was growing edgy unable to bear Ramesh's silence. "No I don't. The decision is yours. You have always taken your own decisions and I have never questioned you about them, not because I didn't care or didn't want to interfere, because I knew you would take right decisions and if you took a wrong one I knew you had the courage to correct it. This time is no different."- Love Ramesh's parenting style and the bond he shares with Nishu😳 Love his character
"I know Uncle she wouldn't tell you anything she wouldn't want to worry you. - The way Kabir understands Nisha and is able to look beyond her tricks and see the gem of a person Nishu is commendable 👏👏 Also the way he wants to ensure that Ramy doesnt misunderstand Nishu and her actions and nothing happens to RN bond is what us makes admire and adore his character
"I am her father Kabir. I know everything, all that she wouldn't tell me, all that she wants to, but cannot tell me." Kabir smiled at Ramesh and shook his head. "Like Father, Like Daughter. - Ramy😳 RN bond is priceless🤗
"You first" Kabir beckoned Nisha. Nisha flinched at Kabir's words. She always felt uncomfortable whenever he got serious about something.- Kabir is so sensible. He can be fun-loving when he wants to and at the same time can be sensible and serious when needed
Nisha started to speak in a cautious tone "You are a very good person Kabir. I could not see the amazing human being that you are, behind that fun loving Kabir. I am sorry I tried every possible trick in the book so that you would turn me down. But you just refused to do that and chose to know me better, not only that you even helped my family members be it Papa, Suku or Dolly di. Trust me Kabir I would never be able to do that if I were in your shoes. You are a kind of person anyone would like to get married to. But do I wish to get married to you? No I don't!"- Loved this part😳. What a climax 😆😆 I m really curious to know what happens next. Although I knw Nibir is the end-game, I m eager to read how u have planned the last part 😆😆
Sometimes ur chotu parts can also be a boon and this chotu chapter worked well in my favour 😆😉
I knw I have been the one who has stopped u from posting the next part soon, so it gives me immense pleasure to say this line to u which I was wanting to say since so many days 😆
" Continue soon😉"
Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago
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