NIBIR FF- || Months of Happiness || UPDATED: EPILOGUE - PAGE 46 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
for coming back so soon with what from the prologues looks likes to be yet another story




UA n baccha party

Newly weds Dolly n Saurav

Siblings Keerti n Sukku

And humaare NiBir unke Nibir ke saath

Kabir was right that kid has perfect timing in the wring way

Mamma's boy Nibir

I loved it when he gave a scolding look to Kabir Oooii could have added a pic of a boy pouting

He kissed Kabir na toh chocolate could have transfered to Kabir's cheeks

Nibir sent to wash up and Nishu could have helped Kabir remove the chocolate from the cheek 😉

Chalo It was really good

A cool update on such a hot day
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Prologue was awesome
Can't wait for the story to start
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Hey, I am so sorry Nikhad for the late comment
Very interesting concept... Aww Nibir is so cute😳 (I meant the kid... 😆)
Oh so Nisha is gonna give Kabir a good news ha?! I hope its what I am thinking from your title 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Awesome prologue👍🏼... Waiting 4 d update... thnks 4 writing this 1 Nikhad😃...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
asusual its an awesome start.. continue soon nikhad..
excited..👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
OMG!!!
Ijust want to live in that apartment now
Awesome begining👏
n the black dress think was amazing.

this feels like a cont. of your prev FF

n whats the news? pls let it be good.

upd8 soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
nikku
first of all sorry 4 the late comment
i was busy 2days so not able to come online
read ur prologue am very much excited to read ur update
its very very intresting different cncept loved it
Nisha N kabiraa ka Beta NIbir❤️ aur ma papa ke pyar ka dushman🤣galat time pe entry
n all r celebrating 31st
nisha gonna give news @12am
loved all other couples too
eagerly wiatng 4 ur update Nikku
thnx 4 the Pm
love u nikku
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
I am really sorry, I became too late...but was busyyy..WOW AMAZINGGG...I AM JUMPING WITH JOY...SO MUCH LOVE...I WILL SURELY UPDATE TONIGHTTT! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Heyyy! I am here with the first chapter! ...

CHAPTER 1

It was almost 9.00 pm...Everyone was thinking where Nisha and Kabir were...Tiya was getting restless for Nibir, as for her Nibir was the most precious thing in the world...She just loved him too much...Meanwhile they were thinking of giving them a call, they felt some footsteps behind them and turned around...They found Nisha and Kabir with their Nibir...Nibir ran to Tiya and Tiya took him on her lap, kissing him on his cheecks...Nisha came to Tiya...
Nisha: Awwwh, so got your Chotu?
Tiya: Yeah, Nisha maa...But why you guys are so late?
Tiya took Nibir and went to play.
Aman: Tanu go and play with Nibir and Tiya...*giving Kabir and Nisha a naughty look*
Tanu: I won't go mamma, I want to be with Choti maa...*hugs Kirti*
Tanu and Kirti had some special bonding, Kirti was too much attached to her as well as Tanu too with her...
Kirti: Awwhle my baby, Choti maa is here only but now go and play okay? *Kissed Tanu's cheeck*
The kids went to another corner of the rooftop...

Saurav: So Nisha and Kabir, I wonder if I and Dolly are 6 months married or you guys...*teasing*
Dolly: Exactly...I actually wanted to tell Tiya and Tanu, what there Nisha maa and Kabir papa were doing...Hahahah..
Nisha: *blushing* Shut up you guys!
Kabir: What Nisha, you should be happy to get such a romantic hubby *winks at Nisha*
Nisha: Kabirrr! *glared at him* Umm by the way, we should begin the party i guess...*trying to ignore the topic*
Suketu: Yeah yeah Nishu di...*teasing tone*
Everyone laughed out loud...

Umesh: Ah okay guys, dinner time...
Kabir: Yeah, I am dying to the eat food cooked by the famous chef of the country...
Umesh: Arreh, anything huh?
Nisha: What Umesh bhaiya, he is right...You are so famous and Aman is too..I am proud of her, even after quitting her job how she is still maintaining her passion..
Umesh: Yeah, that is true..*gave a admiring look to Aman and Aman made a funny face*
Umesh was a famous chef, so was Aman but after Tanu was born, it became really difficult to manage both the kids and work outside along with the household works for her...So, she now give cooking classes at home and she is doing just a great job...Nisha was a famous sports icon...She was a star in the archery field and Kabir was a famous choreographer...He had his own dance school...Dolly and Saurav had their own big handloom business and was very famous for their work in the social medias too...Bakali House was full of famous personalities...Kirti and Suketu often used to make fun that only they were the general people in that Bakali House family and all of them always used to say to the crazy pair of sibling that after completing their undergraduations, those very talented would also become celebrities...Kirti would become a very famous economist, they all knew it and Suketu was doing great in Business studies...He would become a successful entrepreneur...

In the dinner, Umesh and Aman cooked 8 dishes which were just mouth watering...Dolly also made a dessert...Nisha and Kirti also wanted to cook but as Kirti had a exam and Nisha had a press conferance so Aman and Dolly did not let them too...At the end of the dinner, Suketu came with his made chocolate shake...Everyone enjoyed it...Suketu used to help his sister in cooking, so he could make some stuffs too...
The men were gossiping and the kids were playing, suddenly the ladies took Nisha to a corner...
Nisha: What happened?
Kirti: Nishu di, tell us the report results...*excited*
Aman: Yes please, I can't wait more...
Nisha: Amm..
Dolly: Oh, Nisha please fast na...Though we are sure but still...
All on a sudden Suketu came there...
Suketu: What is up ladies? Secret meeting huh? *detective look*
Kirti: Uffo Sukku, *irritated* why you came here...go...
Suketu: No no, tell me also...
Aman: Sukku...*giving him angry look*
Suketu: Uh, okay okay...Uff these ladies...
He was about to go...When Tanu came there...
Tanu: Mamu, mamu...Saurav papa is searching you...
Suketu: Why?
Tanu: You are going to play the guitar for Kabir papa's song na?
Suketu: Oh yeah, I forgot...Hey ladies, come on lets go...
Nisha: Yeah yeah, Sukku lets go...
Nisha almost ran away from there and the other ladies made a defeated face...

They all sat together...Suketu started playing the guitar and Kabir started to sing the song which were very close to his and his beloved wifey's heart...

Tujhse hi to mili hai rahat
Tu hi to meri hai chahat
Tujhse hi to judi zindagi
Teri yaadein hain kuch adhoori
Saans aadhi hai kuch hai poori
Aankhon mein hai kaisi ye nami
Mera mann, kehne laga
Paas aake na tu door jaa
Chhoone de, honth tere
Zara saanson mein apni basa aa...

Kabir looked at Nisha with romantic eyes and Nisha gave him a soft romantic smile while blushing...

Hmmm..
Tujhe apna bana loon
Tujhe tujh se chura loon
Tujhe khud mein chhupa loon, Sahiba!
Ik mujh pe karam ho
Tu hi mera sanam ho
Teri mujh pe nazar ho, Sahiba!
Hmmm... aa aa...

Saurav held Dolly's hand and Dolly hid their hands with her scarf, grabbing Saurav's hand tightly...

Mar main jaaunga, reh na paaun
Gham judai ka seh na paaun
Aye tujhe pyaar ka vaasta
Teri yaadein hai kuchh adhoori
Saans aadhi hai kuch hai poori
Aankhon mein hai kaisi ye nami
Raat ke chaand tale
Aagosh mein meri tu aah...

The kids were dancing on the song and all of them were enjoying their dance while Kirti opened a text on her facebook and smiled reading it...Nisha noticed it...

Baahon mein le lo mujhe
Zara sapno mein apne basa

Mera mann, kehne laga
Paas aake na tu door jaa
Chhoone de, honth tere
Zara saanson mein apni basa aa...

Aman, whose shy natured hubby was looking at her all through the song but could not do anything, she pulled his cheecks and laughed looking at him...

It was almost 12 at the night...Nisha took Kabir to a ralling side and holding his hand while enjoying the new year eve's Mumbai city said...
Nisha: Kabir, I was thinking we should check out if Nibir's new born clothes were all right or not...
Kabir: Why love? *confused*
Nisha: Umm...*blushed*...Because...*She took Kabir's hand on her abdomen* ...
Kabir: *Surprised* WHAAAT?!!!!! ARE YOU SERIOUS NISHA???!!! *going mad in happiness*
Nisha nodded her head as a yes...
Just then the crackers bursted out everywhere as it was 12...Everyone screamed Happy New Year and started cracking the crackers they all brought for the celebration...Kabir hugged Nisha...Both of them were emotional...They were about to experience the happiness again...The journey again...They both gifted each other the best gift of the world once again that day...While they were hugging suddenly Nibir came from behind and held the legs of his parents together like hugging them...

Nibir: Mamma, Papa...Happy lew yeal (Happy new year)...
Nisha and Kabir broke the hug and took their son on their lap together...Just then all the others took out some pictures of babies from the box of the crackers and screamed all together...
''HAPPY NEW YEAR, NEW BABY''...
Nisha and Kabir smiled like the sun seeing them like that and were surprised too...Nibir did not understand much but he got it that a new baby will be added to their life...His eyes glowed and he clapped with happiness...
Nibir: lew babby, lew babby (New baby, new baby) *Still clapping*
Nisha and Kabir kissed Nibir's cheecks from both sides together...

TBC...

Edited by Nikhad003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Awww yeh kita cute tha...
Nik Baby.. It was so adorable.. I am in Awwee.. Especially Nibir is so cute.. It reminds me of my li'l brother is also as cute as Nibir.. 😳
I love it Nik .. 🤗
Continue soon
Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago

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