NIBIR FF...AASMANON PAY LIKHA(Epilogue 2 is updated on page no 87) - Page 24

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Posted: 10 years ago
nyc update dr😉!!!
continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nisha ne anu ko gira diya 🤣

Lekhs who is hardik 😉

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...AASMANON PAY LIKHA...

Part 5

(Nishu was thinking about their first date)

Kabir-r u mad me n dance tu pagal h kya

Nishu-kabir m ur GF yaar and we r on our 1st date

kabir-so what m not gonna do that

Nisha-baby plzz...pretty plzzz

Kabir-cuteness ki dukaan chal,oye but music

(nishu played a song on her phone)

(nisha almost pulled kabir towards her ,kabir held her by her waist and nisha's hands encircled kabir's neck. they both r lost in each others eyes and they starts dancing)

Hum tujhe ek pal bhool na jaaye

Sootey hue bhi khayal tera

Humene kabhi jo aankhein kholi

Tujhe hi ko dekha pehle dafa

Ek pyaas h ek dard h bin Tere na Tere bina

Tere saath hi mera Naam bhi asmanon par hai likha

Asmanon par hai likha

(nishu rested her head on kabir's chest and kabir gave a soft kiss on her forehead)

Baarish ki boondon mein

Chaand ki hatheli mein

Dekha hai tumko mere humnawa

Resham ke daagon ne rishton ki dori ne

Chun liya tumko humsafar mera

Ek pyaas hai ek dard hai

Bin tere na tere bina

Tere saath hi mera naam bhi

Asmanon par hai likha

Asmanon par hai likha

(song ended)

Nisha-lets go kabir

(suddenly kabir pulled nisha and she landed on his chest)

Nisha-kabir what r u doing

Kabir-i guess our first kiss is still pending may i

(Nishu hugged him tightly .kabir lift her chin and he rubbed his thumb on nishu's soft pink lips nishu closed her eyes and then their lips met.The kiss was a sweet soft kiss but later it turned out to be a passionate one.Nisha digged her fingers in kabir's shoulder and her nails were hurting him but who cares they both were in heaven in an another world)

Anu-mamma mamma

Nisha-(came back to present)what happened princess u want something

Anu-no mom where is dad

Kabir-m here princess it still hurting

(anu nodded in a yes)

Anu-thola sa

Kabir-aww thola sa okk first have something

Anu-i don't want anything

Nisha-anu no more drama okk have ur juice

Anu-dad

Nisha-pila do shayad tumhari sun le(and she left from there)

(Kabir felt very bad he know that she is still upset)

(the no u have trying is currently busy.Lekha throw her phone in frustration,what the hell mr hardik Sharma tum kis ke saath busy ho then she heard her phone's ringtone and she saw the caller id finally waqt to mila)

Hardik-hii lekha

Lekha-what the hell where were u itna busy bandi pata li hai kya

Hardik-stop stop miss rajdhani express and ladki pata li means what

Lekha-it means r u dating someone

Hardik-what the..i know the meaning yaar hua kya hai miss lekha .can u plzz elaborate itni calls

Lekha-wo i need some help

Hardik-(almost in panic mode)help...r u okk .everything is fine na wait u r fine na

Lekha-arey m okk i need some suggestion

Hardik-ohh suggetion... yaar tum ajeeb ho dara diya

Lekha-can u plzz stop

Hardik-yeah yeah tell me

Lekha-hardik u know na my frds nisha and kabir

Hardik-of course i know

Lekha-look i think.. actually na m sure that everything is not okk between them

Hardik-ohh god miss Sherlock holmes whats ur problem.They both r married and u r trying to interfere in their personal life

Lekha-hardik its not like that u know they both were fighting

Hardik-so what they both r hubby n wifey na so its their right

Lekha-not that cute wala fight yaar the fight was very ugly.Nishu was crying

Hardik-ohh u mean koi major issue hai

Lekha-yeah

Hardik-so what do u want from me

Lekha-india a jao plzz

Hardik-r u mad .m very busy...i really don't have time yaar

Lekha-u know what u r useless..uselesss

Hardik-hey m ur boss okk

Lekha-ohh yeah actually u r right u r my boss wait useless bosss(angry expression)bye😡

Hardik-okk m coming😉

Lekha-thankss u know what thats why i love u😃

Hardik-what😲(almost fainting)

Lekha-sorry i mean bye😳(and she cut the call)

(next day-jenny n sukku's wedding venue GF saw rathore family n anu)

Viren tauji-anu beta what happend to u

Ramesh-haan kabir ye patti kaisi h

Jwalu-anu come here she lifted her in arms

Kabir-nothing much tauji wo yesterday she fell from the stairs

Dadi-hey bhagwaan tumne bataya bhi nhi

Nisha-dadi u all were busy na so we thought

Rupan taiji-arey batana to chahiye na..anu beta u okk na

Anu-yess nani

Rupan-dont call me nani beta

(everybody laughs)

Anu-aniket mausaji(dolly's hubby)where is Aryan

Aniket-he is with bunty...anu u r ill na so take rest

Anu-okk mausaji(flashed her dimpled smile)(anu now don't say i m not a dimple doll🤣)

Pandit ji-kanya ko bulao

Sukku-haan jaldi bulao

Kabir-saale sahab stop being impatient

Sukku-jeeju

(kabir umesh and aniket laughed)

Laxmi-nisha dolly n aman beta go n get jenny

NDA(nisha dolly aman)-okk ma

Anu-ale waah jenny mami a gyi

Sukku-finally

Dadu-sukku behave

Sukku-sorry dadu

(finally the marriage took place)

Sukku-my shoes

Finu n lekha-paise

Kirti-what paise haan n lekha u too😲

Lekha-arey we r from jenny's side yaar😆

Kirti-arey but u r nishu n jeeju's best frd na

Lekha-so what

Finu-and u all know jenny is by bestie

Sukku-hey this is wrong haan

Kabir-de de beta warna SR agle hafte manegi

Sukku-😲no no okk tell me the price

NDA-price

Sukku-yeah price of my shoes

NDA-whatever okk tell us girls

Finu n lekha-51

Sukku-kabir n aniket jeeju give them 51rs

Kabir n aniket-oye dhakkan they meant 51000

Sukku-ohh hello mere shoes 5000 ke hain

Finu n lekha-so what we want 51000🤣

Kirti-look 51000 r too much yaar i mean this is so blah

Anu-par dena toh padega😆

Kirti-oye ur with us okk

Anu-who told u m with jenny mami🤣

Sukku-oye yeh kab hua

Ramesh-okk 21000

Lekha n finu-51000..51000

Dadu-ramesh give them the money shagun hai bhai

(Finu lekhu n anu hi-fied each other,yayyy)

and they got 51000

(PRECAP-the raaz cum truth😉)



(NOTE-listen cousins m ery bad in witing romantic stuff yaar so sorry 4 thes stupid se romantic scenes)

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Posted: 10 years ago
Sukku ko badi jaldi hai Jenny ke saath shadi karne ki😉
Kyun Jen ? 😉
Finally next update main raaz khulega ... *sigh*
Anu is so smart🤣
But Lekha .. Love you seedha ? 😲😉
Kya baat hai😉
Meri official entry kab hogi ? 😆
Maine SuJen ki shadi toh miss kar di 😭

Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mujhe toh pm Ki zarurat hi nhi pdi...was just waiting for your next part and dekho you updated..
Lekha confessed her love 😲 😳
Omg so sweet..
I have become a lekha Hardik shipper... 😳
And yaar I am loving this song...
The lyrics are so good...


PS : Shut up Sonu Ki bachi Ki mummy🤣 Jo tune itne cute scene ko stupid kha...
They are awesome 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...loved it...

Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing!!!👏
the nibir kiss...uff...so well written.
n anu ka "thola" was sooo cute!!!!

n now my part.😆
hardik called me "rakdhani express"...how did u know?!?!? my friends call me that too when i talk🤣🤣
n miss sherlock holmes😎
n i'm literally cursing my bos...in reality i'll be fired 🤣🤣
aur phir...ek chp nahi hua ki i already confessed!☺️🤣... hardik almost fainting🤣🤣
waise mujhe apne prince charming ka description kab milega...dikhta kaisa hai😉🤣
loved that part❤️

fiirst time seeing rupan care for a kid that isnt kirti or jwala...anu rupan ki chamchi🤣
i didnt know anu had dimples?!?!?😲...does she really?


happy-lekha duo rocks.😎...sukku ko hum lootenge🤣...51000🤣🤣
kirti ko paisa nahi mil rahi hai to wo bol rahi hai ki ye sab blah hai😆


upd8 soon😊




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