Nibir TS-When they will meet.. 1st Part on PG3 & Last Part on PG6 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Hey plz update soon darling..
But don't make it much emotional okay...😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Please continue.Its about NiBir so more than happy to read:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Please update soon waiting. ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Please go for it..excited..!!! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Super excited!!!! Please update soon
Pm me for the update!
Posted: 10 years ago
#16
awww guys...
so sweet of u all...
mujhe to andaza bhi nahi tha ke meri story ka itni besabri se intezar ho raha hai... 😆
love u all :*
and sorry sorry sorry... I m sooo sorry...
yesterday mera phone hi tut gaya gir ke >_<
repair me diya hai...
yar uss me hi likhi thi story!! Wat do I update?? :(
I wrote the story again using meri sis ka phone... Will update on 5:30pm pakka ...
abhi OS se TS hogayi ...
and story bhi thodi cahnge ho gayi hai... As I wrote again na... 😃
Posted: 10 years ago
#17
hiii all I m here to update...
one shot story thi but bcoz I hav to write it again...
ab jitna likhi hu I m updating... Baki ka next part me...
that means ab two short story ho jayegi...
sorry for late update...
Part 1
Everything sorted...
Kabir got freed from jail..
Nisha couldn't stop herself and ran to meet him...
Nibir in front of each other...
When Nisha saw him she felt her world was completed now..
Her happiness hav no bounds but seeing him like that she felt someone stabbed in her heart so many times..
Police hav beaten him so badly...
Tear rolled out her eye unknowingly!!
Same for Kabir ..
He also felt so good to see his Nisha in front of him...
He hav no regret that he decided to listened to sumit & surrendered to police taking all blame on himself, so that sumit donate blood to her
Nisha was fine now..
He hav smile on his face as well as tear in his eyes... Happy tears..
Nisha stepped ahead to him...
Kabir also moved towards her...
Nisha was looking at him with teary eyed
Ho.. sun saathiya maahiya
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan
Rang jaaun, rang rang jaaun ri, haari main
she was crying...
Tujhpe main jhar jhar jhar jaaun
Hoon piya bas teri main
Kabir wiped off her tears..
Ho chhu le toh khari main
(Toh khari main khari main...)
Ho.. sun saathiya maahiya
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan...
They share an eyelock...
Nisha forwarded her hand touched the wound on his face...
"Kabir Tu thik hai?" she asked with lots of concern..
Kabir smiled & said "main to thik Hu... Tu kaisi hai..?? Wifey..." to lighten up the situation..
Nisha starred at him for a while, with so much love and concern in her eyes.. and Suddenly she slapped him ... Leaving him shocked
"Nisha...?" he asked confused
"Tu samajhta kya hai khud ko??bahut shokh hai tuje hero banne ka??han?" Nisha's love & concern changed into anger now...
She was fuming in anger..
But he can feel the pain behind this anger.. How helpless she felt when she woke up found him in jail,..
So he did not reacted and stood there quite...
"Tujhe kya zarurat thi ye sab karne ki?? Kya soch kar sara ilzam tune apne sar pe le liya??bol?uss Sumit ke agey kaise juk gaya tu???
It was so clear in her eyes that Wo Kabir is halat ka zimmedar khud ko samajh rahi thi..
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TBC..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Awesome.Hope yehi ho serial main bhi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Awesome 👏
Update soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
This update was worth waiting..
I would love to have this in the show
Waiting for your next update... 😳

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