nibir os- my world around you

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Hey ya.. all forum wasis😊.. m a crazzyy nibirian... often haunting this forum for more n more nibir ff,ss or os... As no one is updating their stories for a while as m badly addicted to them.. I myself is going to try my hand in this as I can't get nibir out of my head😳... so here we go...

Nibir os- my world around you

Kabir is in jail... it has been 24 hours since he had confessed sumit's crimes as his own for nisha's life... and it also has been 24 hours since he had any news of nisha. He is restless, impatient, worried . no one from the gangwal family has came to meet him. He knew cousins weren't allowed to meet him. He was in pain... not only because of his physical injuries which he had received in police station whose credit goes to sumit and viraj but his heart... his heart is aching for nisha. That pain was way more than his physical pain. These physical injuries... he regard them as a wishful punishment he had received for not protecting nisha.his had is spinning, dizziness is getting better of him. Only one thing which is coming in his mind is nisha.. his nisha... who is fighting for life. He can't take this pain any more... suddenly he slipped in darkness.. a deep slumber.. kabir is at some different place now... he can hear a familiar voice a cheerful happy voice... he recognised it immediately it is his nisha's voice.. where is she.. there.. kabir found her... there she is sitting on a swing laughing on some joke of his.. calling him to sit with her... kabir was happy.. no not happy he was overjoyed seeing her healthy all well n that too happy. He ran towards her.. but where is she.. he can't see her anymore.. he is worried, it feels like his world is slipping from his hands. She was gone only one thing he can hear now is his nisha crying for help calling him again and again terrified kabir is looking here n there trying to find her... suddenly there is silence. No voice is coming ... kabir is hyperventilating now... nishaaa... he shouted... kabir woke up.. all petrified by his dream... sweating... His body is aching badly due to his sudden jerky move. He hit his head to the bench... blood oozed out and he fainted.

Kabir felt he is moving... somebody is carrying him on a stretcher... he opened his eyes... he saw a doctor, a nurse and inspector... oh he realised he is in hospital... that very moment he wished to see nisha.. he can feel her around.. but where is she... He tried to concentrate on hospital logo.. yes this was the same hospital in which nisha is admitted now he has a hope.. hope to see his nisha... doctor is examining kabir... n kabir is not letting doctor touch him until he met nisha.. he is continuously asking the doctor to take him to nisha for a minute only.. he wanted to see her... He wanted to be sure that nisha is fine... doctor is trying to pacify him but kabir is abandoned. Finally doctor gave in...she asked kabir to wait... that 2 minutes felt like eternity to kabir.. he was overjoyed seeing doctor back.. doctor asked him to follow. But kabir was so weak by now that he couldn't stand. Doctor offered him a wheelchair to sit and asked him to just close his eyes and wear a surgical mask. Kabir obliged. (Imagine doctor to be a kabir fangirl... Otherwise no doc is going to do such thing). He closed his eyes.. he hear closing of a door and after sometime opening of another. He can sense her nearby... Kabir opened his eyes.. there was nisha lying on the hospital bed.. still unconscious... kabir's eyes filled with tears.. he can't see her like this... her chirpy self is all that came in his view.. he rushed towards her... the doctor helped him and left. Kabir was crying like a baby... he hold her hand tightly.. to never let her slip from him... he hugged her... hold her tight against him... and cried pouring all the emotions he had banned inside him... he asked nisha to wake up with all his might... he was still holding her when he heard nisha.. she was mumbling in her dream... he tried to listen.. kabir... nisha said... she is calling him.. kabir looked at nisha.. she is still unconscious but taking his name... suddenly he heared door opening he saw doctor was back.. she took him back to his bed. Kabir thanked her. He was feeling dizzy again. Doctor asked him to close his eyes and sedated him. He is in a deep sleep again... A much needed one...

There was nisha... she was restless... Where is everyone... what happened to her.. moreover where her love her kabira is... suddenly she felt his presence... He is here... she can feel his touch... oh why can't she open her eyes.. she wanted to see him badly... she felt him hugging her... what a heavenly feeling to be in his arms... she wanted to hold him but her stupid body is isn't listening to her.. oh wait.. is he crying... yes he is... why is he crying.. is he in pain.. yes he is... this tore her heart... She can't see him like this... she wanted to tell him that she is fine she is here with him.. no matter what she is not gonna leave him..

But all she can do was mumble his name... and then suddenly there was no one.. where he gone leaving her where is he... she kept mumbling his name... and passed out.

Kabira is again in his dreamland... he is with his nisha... Oh wait why he kept calling her his... oh forget it... where is she yes there... waiting for him... Kabir hugged her... she smiled and then started their cute talks... which turned into their famous nok-jhoks... they are laughing... Suddenly nisha become all silent... what happened.. kabir asked sensing something wrong... Why were u crying kabir... asked nisha... because I thought I will loose u... kabir replied... is that going to make a difference in ur life... asked nisha.. what type of stupid question is this nisha... kabir said all getting annoyed.. answer me kabir m only afreind of urs right what difference will it make... nisha asked again... what is there kabir which bounds u to me... and don't you dare tell me this contract marriage thing... keep it aside kabir.. tell me kabir... kabir was all confused annoyed and was at loss of words.. answer me kabir... nisha retorted... kabir has no words he was fumbling... ohk u don't have an answer then why m here... u even can't say a word to me kabir... nothing is there know.. fine m going... With this nisha started walking backward... Kabir looked up where is she going.. is she leaving him.. no.. no.. this can't happen.. mere thought of her leaving him made him restless... stop nisha don't go... A realisation dawned upon him... he screamed with all his might u r bound to me by love nisha.. I love u... don't go nisha be with me.. don't go...

Someone is shaking him... what is happening.. he thought... there came a voice... kabir beta... maa kabir thought laxmi maa is calling me... kabir uth... another voice... papa he is here too?.. someone vigorsly shake him up... his eyes snapped open... maa papa... u here... where m i... nishaa... where is nisha maa.. she is alright naa... tell me know... where is she... kabir asked.

She is calling for u kabir... she is mumbling ur name continuously... she needs u beta... listning to this he can't hold himself anymore... he jumped out of his bed but due to injuries he was about to fall... sukku get hold of him just in time... and helped him in walking...

Nisha is just taking one name... kabir ... her kabir... she is trying to open her eyes very hard... she opened them slowly... she saw nothing just bright light... where is every one... kabir... she called him again... thud... door opened... someone came in... kabir .. her instinct told him.. he came... she was trying to adjust her eyes... she saw a figure coming towards her... kabir... she recognised him immediately.. a tear escaped her eyes ... she try to raise her hand... he holded it immediately... kabir.. nisha... both said in unison... tears blinded them... kabir hugged her with all his might... she hugged him tightly to never let go... trying to calm themselves down... after a long time they broke the hug.. but before going apart kabir whispered in her ear...I LOVE U NISHA... I LUV U WITH ALL MY HEART.. MY SOUL... U ARE MY WORLD NISHA.. I CAN'T AFFORD TO LOSE U.. BECAUSE WITHOUT U THERE IS NOTHING.. NO LIFE LEFT IN ME... nisha's grip on him get loosened... kabir sensed it... he felt it would be awkward for her.. ofcourse it isn't compulsory that she love him too... he was still thinking these things when suddenly nisha tightened her grip... crushing herself into him... repeating all those words to him which he has just said to her... I LUV YOU TOO KABIR.. WITH ALL MY HEART... U R MY WORLD...

The end

I know this was too long.. n a way too dramatic😕😆... but I can't help it... I have nibir fever u know😉... I would love to read ur comments.. n chappal, juta ,tamatar, eggs all re whole heartedly welcomed...😃😆

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mansi_as18 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank you for reading😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wowww...luvd it...hope ki sach mein bhi aisa hi ho...but CVS you know...!!!how they are...!!!they can't see us happy...!!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...very nice os...loved it sooo much...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was a nice os mansi!
was it your first os?
if so, you did pretty good👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Terra04

it was a nice os mansi!

was it your first os?
if so, you did pretty good👍🏼

yes it is indeed... thanks for liking
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: A-N-G-E-L-I-N-A

Wow...very nice os...loved it sooo much...

thank you 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: premc

Wowww...luvd it...hope ki sach mein bhi aisa hi ho...but CVS you know...!!!how they are...!!!they can't see us happy...!!😃

aaj k epi k baad to yhi lgta h... cvs can't see us happy... thanks for liking
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's really awesome 👏 👏 👏 loved it 😊 😊
Please do write more 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for lovely os yaar..Awesome...

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