NiBir OS- Bharosa Pyaar Ka

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Hey guys i was bored...and i am not good at humour like some ppl here *cough* anu*cough*😆...but there is something i think i can do that is writting😳 ...so enough with rant here it goes...Kabir's much needed realization Lakshmi style😉

"Kabir..."

Kabir snapped out of his reverie as he felt dolly's hand on his shoulder.

"Haan dolly bol..." he was surprised at the hoarseness of his voice. They were in Kabir's house. The police were still looking for him and they were patrolling outside the house but Dolly had cleverly managed to distract the police so that he can get in unseen. They had already searched the house twice when he got in so they were betting on the possibility that they will not search here anymore.

"tum kuch khaaoge?" Dolly asked. " tum subah se kuch nahi Khhaya hoga ...mein kuch banati hun."

"Nahi dolly...mein teek hun...mujhe kuch nahi chahiye..bhook nahi hai..." Dolly looked at him for a long time.

"Nishu is going to be allrights" she said finally. Kabir looked up at her surprised, he was indeed thinking about Nisha all this time though he himself didn't realize it. Dolly smiled sadly "tumhari aakhen saaf saaf bata thi hai ki tum nishu ki bare mein soch rahi ho..kuch chaahiye toh bulalena...I will be in the kitchen."

Dolly's words confused Kabir. Kabir sat down on the couch with his head in his hands .He felt lonely. Even though he knew the cousins and saurav were with him he was feeling lonely. Like a part of him was not with him, was missing. He was hurt. None of the elder Gangwals believed him even papa felt that he was a chor, a murderer that he wud try to kill his Nisha. More than anything he was scared. Ever since he saw Nisha in bandages unconscious in the hospital he was scared. It pained him. The pain was almost physical. His heart ached with anticipation and not knowing about her condition killed him. The guilt of failing to catch her when she fell ate him from inside. The thought that she was fighting for her life made his heart burn. He didn't know why he felt so intensely for her, he didn't care about the answer. He just couldn't think of anything other than her right now not even Sumit or his innocence mattered.

He looked up feeling a hand on his shoulder." Kabir..." Saurav began but was cut off by Kabir "Saurav...Sukku ka call aya tha kya ? Nisha kaisi hai? Usse kuch hua tho nahi naa? Who teek hai na ? ...arrey kuch toh bol yaar...woh kaisi hai? He attacked saurav with his questions. He felt his heart sink as he saw Saurav's face. "Abhey bol kya hua Nishu ko? He asked holding his shoulders and shaking them vigorously

"N-Nishu ko abhi t-tak hosh nahi aa-aaya. D-doctors keh rehe hai ki condition s-stable nahi hai, ab kuch nahi bata s-sakta, test reports aane ke b-bath hi kuch bata paayega." Saurav answered his voice choking with emotion. Kabir left Saurav and fell down into the couch shocked. Saurav's words kept ringing in his ears. Nisha was in danger. Her life was slipping away from her and here he is sitting in the house healthy and harmless. How can this be? Why is he alive and well when she is not? His life is linked with her's , he cannot live if she is not living.

"Why? " a voice which was unmistakably Nisha's asked. Kabir looked up to see Nisha sitting beside him in the couch. She was in her usual jhalli avatar, her hair opened just the way he liked, in her white jeans and pink top she looked as if she was the most healthy person in the world. A bright smile adorned her mesmerizingly beautiful yet refreshingly different face. "Mere bina tu kyun nahi jee sakta?" She asked again.

"pata nahi" Kabir said looking at her adoringly. Nisha stroked his cheek lovingly " tujhe sach mei nahi pata? jhoot mat bol kauwe. Tujhe sab kuch pata hai par tu maan nahi rahe ho. Oye Kabirre maan jaa" saying this she winked and laughed innocently. Kabir kept staring at her. "ab bol na kyun?" She asked again. The answer came out of his mouth automatically. " Kyunki mein tujhse pyaar karta hun. Beinteha mohabbat karta hun tujhse." Nisha laughed wholeheartedly and placed a kiss on his cheek.

She got up to leave but Kabir held her hand. "Please tu mujhe chod kar mat jaana, mei tumhari bina reh nahi paaunga." Nisha smiled and cupped his face with her hands. "Mein kahi nahi jaa rahi hun" She placed a hand on his heart "Mein yaha hun tere saath...aur mujhe kuch nahi hoga...tumhari pyaar hai na. Apne pyaar par bharosa rekh." She got up and walked back slowly to the door looking at him.

"Kabi ...Kabir...Kabir..." he heard Dolly and Saurav calling. They were shaking him ." Huh...mein teek hun...Kya hua?". He asked them. Saurav sat beside him ." Tu hume respond hi nahi kar rahe the..Kabir...Nishu teek hojayengi...humari nishu bahuth strong hai na." Kabir nodded " You are right, humari Nishu hume wapas milne waale hain. " He stood up determined. He was going to fight for his love to prove himself innocent and he was not scared anymore becoz he knew his love will not fail him.




thats it...if its a cliched track who cares lets enjoy it to the fullest😆

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zaara610 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well written lechu..loved it..!!!
Keep writing more..!!! 😛
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well written... 👏
par humare show me kabhi aisa nehi hone wala !!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I love lakshmis style...😉
Awesome...plz write a OS after kabires realization tooo.
Thanks for the pm buddy
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome yaar.loved it❤️show mein b kaash aise he ho
ur a really good writer😆😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely... loved Kabir's talk with Nisha...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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👏.. Superb :)...CV ko mail kardo yar ye story and get us a Kabira realisation... 😉
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thank u guys for the wonderful comments
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ur writting has given a new life to the going track👍🏼... wish nibir together soon..❤️
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Awwwh my lachuuu this is just tooo cuteee and lovelyyy :D well written!
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