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Hi friends!
This time I'm back with different kind of fic than I usually write here... It's an old fic I had written many years back for another couple. So I have tried my best to modify it to suit our nibir, but to what extent I have achieved it is upto you to judge. :) And yeah my old style was a little too descriptive, so please excuse it. ;)
Rating: Mature Audience
Genre: Romance
CHAPTER-1
A SWISS INTERLUDE
It's just the beginning of spring time in Switzerland and the snow still adamantly tried to cling on to the peaks of the beautiful Alps. Everything was fresh and beautiful. And the gentle cool breeze which was blowing was filled with the sweet smell of beautiful blossoms that were eagerly waiting to showcase their true glory to the whole world...
There at a farmhouse in Zurich, we see a beautiful cottage surrounded by a wild garden filled with beautiful, exotic flowers on all sides except for one. On that one side was a special garden.
As we enter the cottage, passing along the aesthetically arranged rooms, further inside we see a room with simple white walls adorned with only a few melodious chimes hung on a huge window which opened into the special garden.The window sill was adorned with a simple white bed and many cozy little pillows which fit snugly into that space.
And there we see a smart, extremely handsome young man in a simple white shirt and tracks leaning his head on the wall and lying on that bed... But he isn't alone... there is somebody there with him, leaning the back of her head on his chest. His chin was touching her hair... And she too is in a white sleeveless top and a simple white cotton pyjamas...
There is a kind of innocence in both their eyes... There is an emotion...a bond sparkling in their eyes... They simply sat there in silence gazing at the garden outside... the garden which the lady of the house with her beloved cherished to look after. It was their common passion...all the blooms there, were like their babies which they caressed and nurtured with utmost dedication and love...
Her hair gently rubbed on his chin and he was gently caressing her beautiful luscious hair. She was the most beautiful person in the world for him and she wasn't just physically beautiful for him... But for him she was his angel whose inner beauty radiated onto her face. The one person whom he trusted most in this world and the only person he knew who trusted him blindly and no matter what may come would always stand with him till the ends of the earth... That was his one and only Nisha for Kabir.
Kabir gently caressed her hair and cuddled his Nishu. She occasionally looked at him above her head and gave a loving smile and he returned it with sweet peck on her cheek from behind, which would turn those beautiful cheeks from mild pinkish hue to a deep red!
She then blushingly turns her head and plants a peck onto his chin, then jaw, tip of his nose and smiles naughtily. He looses his patience on seeing her naughty smile and gives a cheerfully wicked smile in return and pulls her for a passionate kiss! She is surprised for a moment but then happily pours her love into that...
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TBC!
Would love to hear your comments on this piece ... :)
My other nibir fictions links: (click on the headings) :)
This time I'm back with different kind of fic than I usually write here... It's an old fic I had written many years back for another couple. So I have tried my best to modify it to suit our nibir, but to what extent I have achieved it is upto you to judge. :) And yeah my old style was a little too descriptive, so please excuse it. ;)
Rating: Mature Audience
Genre: Romance
CHAPTER-1
A SWISS INTERLUDE
It's just the beginning of spring time in Switzerland and the snow still adamantly tried to cling on to the peaks of the beautiful Alps. Everything was fresh and beautiful. And the gentle cool breeze which was blowing was filled with the sweet smell of beautiful blossoms that were eagerly waiting to showcase their true glory to the whole world...
There at a farmhouse in Zurich, we see a beautiful cottage surrounded by a wild garden filled with beautiful, exotic flowers on all sides except for one. On that one side was a special garden.
As we enter the cottage, passing along the aesthetically arranged rooms, further inside we see a room with simple white walls adorned with only a few melodious chimes hung on a huge window which opened into the special garden.The window sill was adorned with a simple white bed and many cozy little pillows which fit snugly into that space.
And there we see a smart, extremely handsome young man in a simple white shirt and tracks leaning his head on the wall and lying on that bed... But he isn't alone... there is somebody there with him, leaning the back of her head on his chest. His chin was touching her hair... And she too is in a white sleeveless top and a simple white cotton pyjamas...
There is a kind of innocence in both their eyes... There is an emotion...a bond sparkling in their eyes... They simply sat there in silence gazing at the garden outside... the garden which the lady of the house with her beloved cherished to look after. It was their common passion...all the blooms there, were like their babies which they caressed and nurtured with utmost dedication and love...
Her hair gently rubbed on his chin and he was gently caressing her beautiful luscious hair. She was the most beautiful person in the world for him and she wasn't just physically beautiful for him... But for him she was his angel whose inner beauty radiated onto her face. The one person whom he trusted most in this world and the only person he knew who trusted him blindly and no matter what may come would always stand with him till the ends of the earth... That was his one and only Nisha for Kabir.
Kabir gently caressed her hair and cuddled his Nishu. She occasionally looked at him above her head and gave a loving smile and he returned it with sweet peck on her cheek from behind, which would turn those beautiful cheeks from mild pinkish hue to a deep red!
She then blushingly turns her head and plants a peck onto his chin, then jaw, tip of his nose and smiles naughtily. He looses his patience on seeing her naughty smile and gives a cheerfully wicked smile in return and pulls her for a passionate kiss! She is surprised for a moment but then happily pours her love into that...
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TBC!
Would love to hear your comments on this piece ... :)
My other nibir fictions links: (click on the headings) :)
Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki
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