Yeh Nadaaniyan: A Nibiraj FF (Last Part updated in Pg 16) 30/04/2015 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sweets101

😃 fantastic n hilarious

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Edited by shailusri1983 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loving this J waali nisha 😉
Hope nibir sort out their differences soon
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: achuAR

Loving this J waali nisha 😉
Hope nibir sort out their differences soon
Waiting for the next part

Nisha and Kabir have to learn a lot before they grow up and realize their mistakes so more MUs on the way. But finally this FF is supposed to end with Nibir. So no worries. It is just their unique journey in growing up as individuals and realizing each other's importance in their life.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nisha as a jealous person is so hilarious!! :D
And I love how the other 3 are on it! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update
Aww nisha is feeling jealous
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG Nisha is so J..!!!! 😆 Poor Nishu 😔
That Sindoor scene was very romantic
Please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved jealous Nisha..please continue soon..!!! 😛
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Originally posted by: AVC92

Nisha as a jealous person is so hilarious!! :D

And I love how the other 3 are on it! :)

When you love a person too much, there are times when you tend to be possessive about them
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 6

Day 4:

8.30 A.M. at Gangwal House

Nisha was getting ready for LA. She would begin her shooting practice from today onwards. So she was mentally preparing herself for it. She tried not thinking as much as possible about Kabir and Ahaana because it would destroy her concentration. Her mother was packing tiffin for her, Ramesh and Bunty even though she sat up the whole of the previous night correcting exam papers. Dark circles had formed under her eye and she did not look well at all, and yet she was doing all the things they needed without taking rest.

When Nishu reprimanded her mother, Lakshmi for not taking care of her health, her mother said, "Nishu, there is no happiness greater than looking after the needs and happiness of your loved ones, in forgiving their small small mistakes, in fighting with them and later making up, in trying to put yourself in their shoes and think like them, in making adjustments to your set life pattern for their sake, in allowing them to become a part of you, and likewise you becoming an important part of their life.

If you had understood that, you and Kabir would not be thinking divorce. But anyways it's your life and your decision. As parents, I and Ramesh will always be with you, but have you ever thought about what after us? Who'll be there for you? After you divorce, Kabir will move on in life, but can you do the same as easily? Think about all these things before you do anything Nishu.

You are your Papa's darling princess. So he sees no mistake in whatever you do and whatever decisions you take, right or wrong. He will support you always. But it is not necessary that your decisions always have to be correct. Whatever you do, I'd advice both you and Kabir to sit with each other and talk. Talking means talking sensibly and not fighting with each other like kindergarten kids."

Nisha began pondering deeply over her mother's words. Her ego was now preventing her from accepting the fact that she did not want this divorce to actually happen and that she hated the fact that Kabir was getting ready to move on in life without her. Here she could not even contemplate a life without Kabir while he was getting ready to plan his wedding with Ahaana?

She badly wanted to speak to her cousins about her doubts and confusions. But all of them had become very busy that they seemed to have no time for her. Umesh and Aman were busy setting up their new restaurant in the place of Aman's father's Dhaba. Dolly Di and Saurav were working very hard for the new handloom business they were setting up; Suku had joined for some courses in acting and dancing; while Kirti had joined as an apprentice under a well-known fashion designer. Jwalu and Bunty were busy with their exams. There were things which she could not discuss with her parents. She felt the need to talk to someone who would just listen to her without suggesting anything or passing any judgment on her. She badly needed to talk to Kabir just as her mother was suggesting. But her ego came in the way of making that single call to him and talking. If he was not bothered about her why should she?

9.00 A.M. at Viraj's Pent House

Viraj was thanking Ahaana for coming there to help them even when her marriage was in a couple of weeks when she said, "Anything to save the marriage of a dear friend like Kabir. By the way, I think our plan is really working. Nisha is becoming very jealous of me. She really thinks that I and Kabir are going to marry! Really! Ha! Ha! Ha!"

Viraj said, "Nothing very funny about it! You're so beautiful you know that any girl would be jealous and insecure about their boyfriend or husband with you."

Ahaana replied, "That must be why all my friends were boys. I hardly had any girl friends you know."

Viraj put on a serious face and said, "Even I hardly had any girl friends you know."

Ahaana broke out laughing while saying, "You really know how to laugh at yourself and make people laugh."

Viraj said, "There was a time in my life when all I did was cry and cry and make the people around me cry. Then Nisha came into my life and taught me to laugh and smile. There was a time in my life when we used to like each other very much and even wanted to be together. But somehow things never worked out. Now Kabir and Nisha are married. They're madly in love with each other but have king-size egos which prevent them from acknowledging what they feel for each other. I don't want them to commit the same mistakes I did in my relationship with Nisha."

Viraj held down his head as he was talking about the past when Ahaana placed her caring hand on his shoulder, "Not everybody can think beyond their happiness about the happiness of the people they love, even giving up their own happiness. Kabir is really lucky that he has a brother like you to help him out in his difficult and testing times."

Viraj laughed aside his thoughts and problems telling, "Would you like to have a cup of hot coffee along with me? Kabir says I make the best coffee in the world."

Ahaana replied, "In that case, I surely must try it!" He made the coffee and handed it over to her. Jaipur was known for its climatic extremes. During the summer it would be extremely sultry while during the winter it would be extremely cold. It was winter then. Ahaana was feeling very cold and was wrapping her shawl around herself even more tightly. The AC was also too cold for her preference. She however did not tell anything about it. But Viraj on observing her obvious discomfort immediately switched off the AC.

Ahaana was astounded. How did he even realize how she was feeling? She felt so much at ease while she was with him. She had never spoken like this to anybody, not even her fiance, Vivan. When she began thinking about Vivan, she truly did not know what to feel or what to think. They had been in this relationship since a year. But she was yet unsure about it every minute.

Vivan never seemed to care about her preferences, her likes, and her dislikes. He never enjoyed spending time with her or talking to her. The fact was that he never had time for her. She hardly knew anything about him while he hardly knew anything about her. Vivan was an Investment Banker. Hers was a match arranged by her parents. Vivan was well-settled, had a lot of money, belonged to a good family and that was it. Did only this much matter in a marriage?

Ahaana was a very good singer. She and Kabir used to do a fusion of music and dance shows when they were in college. But Vivan hated if ever she began singing or even talk about it. He used to say, "Girls belonging to good families do not give such shows!" She would tell herself exasperatedly at such moments, "Then what do girls belonging to good families do? Sit at home and waste their lives doing nothing?"

Ahaana had done event management. After marriage she wanted to set up her own company. But Vivan always discouraged her about it. He used to tell that there was no need for her to work at all as what he was earning was more than enough for both of them. Did a girl always have to work only when her family was in need of her resources? Couldn't she work just for herself?

Viraj began, "We are planning a Talent Search Event at LA in two days. You can organize that event if you are willing. If you have any problems, I'm always there to help you out!" Ahaana felt very happy that he was involving her in such a big event even when he hardly knew anything about her.

He continued, "I'll show you the plans we have drawn up till now. If there are any suggestions or improvements to this, you're free to tell me. See in our country the talents of women are never given importance. They are hardly given any encouragement or scope for development.

So our aim at LA is to give that opportunity which denied to them free of cost. If you have a talent, and if you have a dream, then LA will support you in it. We will train aspiring sportswoman in their quest for excellence. This Talent Search is actually for unearthing raw and natural talent and preparing them for state level and national level sports competitions."

She was very impressed by Viraj's broad and forward thinking. He was working truly hard for women's empowerment through sports. She wanted to support him in this cause with her whole heart. How comfortable and at ease did she feel while she was in his company!

Ahaana never felt like this when she was with Vivan. She knew that she ought not to be thinking like this but she was telling to herself, "If at all only money, good family, and good career matter in marriages, why didn't my parents think of someone like Viraj Singh Rathore for me?"

The sight of her falling into his strong arms kept swimming before her eyes again and again. How could one look so handsome? How safe she had felt when she was in his arms. Her ears had been so close to his heart that she could even hear his heart beats. This was the first time she had been so physically close with a man. She had closed her eyes in her shock and just hid herself within his coat. But still she knew that nothing wrong could happen to her when he was there with her.

Ahaana shrugged her shoulders. What foolish stuff had she begun thinking ever since she fell into his arms after slipping on the juice over the stairs? She always followed her brain whenever she took important decisions of her life. Even her friends often used to joke that she was more mature than her years.

Ahaana thought very deeply about things though she never confided in anybody. Except her diary, she never let anyone into her interior space. But today, for the first time, she felt that it would be nice if she could confide the same things she wrote in her diary to Viraj. Even that did not seem to be necessary. She just felt how nice it would be to just sit with him in silence sharing that cup of coffee.

Ahaana told herself, "For God's sake, Ahaana! Don't be foolish! You've already made your decision. Even though it is not yours, you agreed to it for your parents' sake. Your marriage is after a couple of weeks and now you begin thinking all this nonsense! Control! Control!"

5.30 A.M. at LA

Kabir and Nisha were working together in the same room at their respective tables. Even though they wanted to speak to each other and be with each other, neither wanted to be the first to make a move. They acted as if they had nothing to do with each other and were strangers to each other.

Nisha gave the presentation for the Talent Search to Kabir, and he mailed her his suggestions to her mail ID. Though they could have easily discussed and incorporated whatever they wanted to together, they did not choose to.

It was becoming unbearable for Nisha. She was also very jealous of all the attention that Kabir was giving to Ahaana who had also begun working at LA. Nisha just wanted Kabir's attention by hook or crook like a troublesome, attention seeking child. She had got so used to Kabir's pampering to each of her whims, and standing beside her and supporting her in all her decisions that it really hurt her when he was not there with her now.

Nisha broke the heel of her sandal herself and acted as though she had sprained her leg. Kabir was very concerned when he saw her in pain. He asked, "Is it better now?" She winced as though as she was in terrible pain and started limping about while telling him with a mischievous gleam in her eyes, "I'm all right Kabir. You carry on! I'll somehow manage going home in my Scooty."

Kabir thrashed aside her stupid plan telling, "No! Don't ever think of it! You're terribly hurt. I'll drop you home! Don't worry! Can you walk till the car with my support?" Nisha acted as if she was walking with great discomfort before she just collapsed down on her feet telling, "I just can't walk on my own!" Kabir sounded very apprehensive now, "Let's go to the doctor in that case. Come I'll take you."

A doctor would spoil all her plans. She cried, "No! No! It's a minor sprain. I'll be all right if I massage that ointment on my heels." He said, "Show me your heels. I'll massage your ointment on your heels for you...Is the pain Ok now?" Nisha kept staring uninterruptedly into his eyes. She was drinking in all this attention and physical proximity that her supposed hurt had got for her from Kabir.

After he had finished applying the ointment, Kabir gently lifted her up and took her to his car while their eyes were locked in each other all this time. He placed Nisha on her seat beside him and took her seat belt and fixed it for her, before he sat in the driver's seat and began driving to Gangwal House.

Nisha was smiling softly to herself. Her scheme had succeeded. She was getting all the attention she wanted from Kabir. On the way, he got down at a medical shop and got some pain killer and multivitamin tablets and protein supplements for her. After Kabir had dropped her at home, he instructed her on how to take them and also told her that he would call her to remind her when to take them in case she forgot.

PRECAP: Nisha fakes her panic attacks for getting Kabir's love and attention. He becomes very worried for her. But he finds out that she is faking it and gets very angry with her. Now she really begins getting panic attacks when she meets somebody from her past. Kabir is not ready to believe her.

Edited by shailusri1983 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: A-N-G-E-L-I-N-A

Awesome...
Continue soon...

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