NiBir ff- Add some Life to Love and make it more magical (Complete) - Page 24

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Posted: 10 years ago
this update was cute!!! 😳😳
finally nisha ko realize ho hi gaya!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Shibhu!
Your ff is awesome...
I loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hello NiBirians😊... .This is the last chapter of the ff. Hope you guys like it😊.

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Chapter 15- Last Chapter

The whole day Nisha hadn't seen Kabir. His mobile was also switched off. But she wasn't really afraid that anything wrong would happen. She cheerfully entered the house. She had decided that she'll confess. She knew that Kabir wasn't joking, but had just lied because he felt that she didn't love him. She entered his room, but found it empty. The wardrobe was empty with a note stuck on its door.

"Hey Nisha,

Missing me? Ab toh tum har din miss karogi, main jaa raha hoon na. Socha ki tumse baat kar loon, par India chodne se pehle tera gussa sehen karne ke mood mein nahi tha.

Haan, I am going to New York, my dream city. Mujhe New York Dance Academy mein admission mila hai. Can you believe it?

Ek sher sunau? Agar tumhari aankhon mein hai nami... Agar tumhari aankhon mein hai nami, aur chehre par hai no hasi that means that you are missing me... Kaisa tha?

And yaa, Please apna, cousins, Dolly, Sumeet, Saurav and Aman ka dhyaan rakhna, keep smiling, don't get angry unnecessarily and please patch up with your love.

From Mr. Annoying, aka KabirJ"

Nisha's heart froze in fear. She burst out crying. She couldn't understand what was happening. He left her? Without knowing her feelings? And he wants her to be with her love? How could he do that to her? She cried and cried.

Here Viraj entered his house and the maid gave him a letter.

Maid- Viraj sir, aapke liye kisi Kabir ne diya hai.

Viraj- Kabir ne?

He started reading,

"Hey Viru!

I know ki hum dono hum saath- saath hai type ke nahi hai, infact, tum toh mujhse nafrat karte hoge. But seriously dude, mere aur Nisha ke beech kuch nahi hai, kyunki Nisha tumse pyaar karti hai. Woh video bhi Nisha ne leak nahi karwaya, iski guarantee main nahi, uski aankhein tumhe degi. I hope ki Aryan ne tumhe pura sacch bata diya tha... Yaar, tumhe kya pata, inn do mahino mein kitna hardwork kiya hai maine, sirf sacch ka pata lagane, and Nisha ko innocent prove karne. Nisha loves you a lot. Please, go back to her and ya, always keep her happy and be happy because I am leaving, and won't be able to make her laugh anymore.

From KabirJ"

Viraj was shocked reading the letter. He drove to the Gangwal Mansion remembering Nisha and Kirti's conversation after Kabir had left the college.

*Flashback*

Nisha- Kirti, you were right... I never loved Viraj... I just had an infatuation for him, jise main pyaar samajh bethi...

Kirti- (happily) Happy realization. By the way... iss realization ka credit main kisse doon?

Nisha- (blushing) Kabir ko... because usne mujhe pyaar ka sahi matlab samjhaya hai... he made me realize that love doesn't bind you to something, it sets you free... it is caring, trusting, respecting your partner. It's not ignoring his mistakes, but correcting them... It's being friends with him... It's a beautiful feeling yaar... you can call it a beautiful dream... When I cry and he's there around, I feel that my tears will evaporate taking away all my pain... If he smiles or laughs because of me, than I feel like I have gained everything I wanted... If I look into his eyes, I wish that the time would just stop there... Isn't it all weird...

Kirti- So I guess that you finally accepted your feelings for Kabir.

Nisha nodded and Kirti happily hugged her.

*Flashback ends*

He reached the mansion and went to Kabir's room. Did he really leave? Nisha will be shattered. He saw Nisha lying on the floor and she was crying.

Viraj- (running to Nisha) Nisha, are you ok?

Nisha- (hugging him, sobbing) He left Viraj, he left me... I can't live without him... I love him Viraj...

By this time, the cousins too arrived, and started to think of ways to find Kabir. They became sad as they watched a helpless Nisha cry bitterly and remembered the time they spent with Kabir.

Here Kabir entered the Caf and sat on one of the chairs. He ordered himself a cup of coffee and was waiting for it.. He felt helpless. He never felt so weak. He hated himself and felt like running back to Nisha, hugging her and confessing his love for her.

His cell rang.

Mom-(concerned) Kabir, tum thikh ho? Kabse call karne ki koshish kar rahi hoon, off kyun aa raha hai?

Kabir started crying.

Mom- Kya hua baccha? Tum thikh ho? Nisha thikh hai naa?

Kabir-(crying) I ran away.

Mom- (shocked) what?

Kabir- hmm... Main uske aur Viraj ke beech mein nahi aa sakta...

Mom- (after a pause)At present kaha ho?

Kabir- (calming down) CCD mein, jahaan main pehli baar Nisha se mila tha.

Mom- (confused)Wahaan kya kar rahe ho?

Kabir- I called dad, and before I go to New York, I think I should meet him. Unka wait kar raha hoon.

Mom- (shocked) What?

Kabir- Mom, I want Nisha to give Viraj a chance, so shouldn't I give dad a chance? Aur kal ki flight se New York jaunga..

Mom- Hmmm... just make sure, whatever you decide, it's right for you. Take care.(she cut the call)

Kabir closed his eyes and let Nisha's face flash infront of his eyes.

After hanging Kabir's call, his mom called Umesh.

Kanika - Umesh, main Kanika, Kabir ki mummy...

Umesh- Kanika aunty?

The cousins and Viraj surrounded him as he put the call on speaker.

Kanika - Beta, Nisha hai?

Nisha came to him and snatched his phone.

Nisha-(anxious) Ji aunty, main Nisha bol rahi hoon. Aunty woh Kabir... he just...

Kanika- ya Beta, I know. He just left without saying anything. At present Kabir Caf Coffee Day mein hai. Woh duffer hai... go talk to him Nisha... main jaanti hoon, ki tum bhi ussse pyaar karti ho... Go beta, talk to him...

Nisha hanged the call, and was about to run away, but turned and said to the cousins.

Nisha- Guys don't worry, acchi class lungi uss Kabire ke...

All smiled as Nisha ran away.

She drove rashly to caf. She entered the cafe and saw that Kabir was frustrated. He kept his cell phone in his pocket, picked his bag and was about to move towards the exit, but stopped dead in his tracks, when his eyes met hers.

His eyes grew 5x when he saw Nisha standing there. He rubbed his eyes, pinched and slapped himself, but Nisha didn't vanish.

Nisha- Sapna nahi dekh rahe ho.

She went and slapped him. Everyone's attention turned to these 2 fools in love.

Kabir- (shocked) NISHA???

Nisha (shouting)- Haan wahin Nisha, jisse tum iss cafe mein mile the, wahin Nisha jo tumhare baahon mein chakkar khake giri thi, wahin Nisha jisse tumne annoy kiya, tease kiya, jisse dosti ki... and wahin Nisha jisse tum pyaar karte ho.

Everyone in the caf were shocked at Nisha's outburst.

Kabir- (avoiding her eyes) Main tumse pyaar nahi karta.

Nisha- (surprised at his stubbornness) Accha? (holding his collar) Then look into my eyes and say so.

Kabir looked in her eyes and saw the emotions which he felt was a reflection of his heart- love, helpless, and innocence. He felt that even if he fools himself, those eyes won't let him lie.

Nisha- (calming down, still looking in his eyes) Bolo na... say you don't love me; you don't have feeling for me... you...

Kabir didn't let her speak further and hugged her. Nisha hugged him back and started crying. Kabir broke the hug.

Kabir-(turning away) Nisha, Viraj loves you...

Nisha- (now angry) But I LOVE YOU damn it!

Kabir looked at her in shock.

Nisha- (trying to lighten up the mood) Oye Ranbir Kapoor, Look kya de rahe ho... sach hi toh bola hai... Maine Viraj se kabhi pyaar nahi kiya tha... I thought I loved him. But Kabir, I love you truly.

Kabir felt very happy and he hugged her and said, "I love you too..."

Kabir who had given up on Love that day, found a soul mate and Nisha, who wanted to run away from Love, now was in the arms of her true love. All in the cafe whistled, clapped and cheered for them. The cousins, Dolly and Viraj also were in the cheering crowd and smiled as Kabir and Nisha not only added love to life but by saying those 3 magical words, also added life to their love and made it more magical...



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Posted: 10 years ago
Last chapter 🥺
Kabir is such a big duffer aise hi bhag gaya
But sacha pyaar zyada der tak dur nahi reh sakta 😉
Sab ke saamne thappad mika and he deserved it 🤣
So finally dono mil gaye 🥳
But yeh story khatam ho gai 🥺
So abh next story kab start hogi aisi hi cute cute wali ? 😳
Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
I'll keep re-reading this story until you start a new one because this the the first story I read on this forum and I was in love with it and even after your new story I will continue re-reading this one its really a special one for me 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved ur ff a lot..!!!
I used to wait for your updates..keep writing more .!!!! 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was too good...loved it alot...n thankx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Last chapter💔 Ill miss this story..and viru love u to yar u proved u r a gem 😎by making nibir together. .and this daffer kabir ..nisha should have shaped 2 more times ..does anyone go like that ...duffer ..it was a really cute ending👏 ..keep writting more storys like this ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww dat was such a beautiful update
Nibir confession was soo cute
Thnku for the pm

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