NiBir ff- Add some Life to Love and make it more magical (Complete) - Page 22

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Posted: 10 years ago
oh I just lovedthis story...
awesome dear...
i read all parts in one go... Suberb...
uff this love triangle...
plzz update soon.. Cant wait... And plzzz do PM me wen u update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi NiBirians🤗. Thanks for liking and commenting😊. The next chapter is updated.

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Chapter 14

*Next day*

Kabir, Nisha, Kirti and Dolly had bunked a lecture and were in the canteen playing truth or dare.

The bottle first faced Dolly.

Kirti- Toh Dolly, Truth or Dare?

Dolly- (ummm) dares...

Kirti- Toh tum, English mein Sumeet ki chugli karo.

Dolly looked at them all and with a scared tone- Sumeet isn't that bad ... Just a bit annoying sometimes...

All smiled as Dolly realized that she said the sentence without any mistake and became happy. Dolly spinned the bottle and it faced Kirti.

Kirti- Ooops...

Nisha- Toh Baby doll, truth or dare?

Kirti- Ummm Truth...

Nisha- Ek baat bata tujhe Saurav pe kabse crush tha?

Kirti- (blushing) Bachpan se...

Dolly- Oh My Gods! Kirti and blushings!

Kabir face palmed and said- Kutte ki dum seedhi ho sakti hai, par Dolly ki English... (He shook his head)

Dolly- (angrily) Bahut jabaan chal rahi hai teri...

Nisha spinned the bottle and it faced Kabir.

Dolly- Truths or dares?

Kabir- Dares...

Dolly- (excitedly) Nisha ko propose kar... infront of the whole canteen...

NiBir- (shocked to death) What?

Kirti- (nonchalantly) What what? Kabir, come on dude, sirf propose hi toh karna hai...

Kirti and Dolly- Nisha ko... pure canteen ke saamne

[If you like, click the link and read as you listen to the song.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zFdi834FiZ4]

*Music*

Kabir looked at Nisha uncomfortably. He knew that he couldn't escape from the situation. He closed his eyes and calmed himself. "Come on Kabir! Just once. Iss prank ke piche inka kya reason hai, doesn't matter. At least tu Nisha ko apni dil ki baat bata paayega." He made Nisha stand and led her to the center. Nisha was shocked. kabir closed his eyes, held her right hand in his and kneeled infront of her.

Dehleez pe mere dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum

*Music*


Kabir- Nisha, you are one in billion. Your eyes, cutesy nose, lips, smile, your anger, sadness, naughtiness, all affects me... You are amazing, beautiful, pretty, lovable... Oh! Tumhe toh describe karne liye bhi words humesha kam pad jaate hai...When I am with you, I always feel a sense of contentment. Tum nahi jaanti ki tum mere liye kitni special ho. Teri har bachkaani harkat aur teri har khushi mujhe sukoon deti hai, aur tera tear drop taqleef. I want to spend each and every moment of my life with you. You and your presence is so amazing ki even if I want to go away, some unknown, yet beautiful feeling pulls me back to you. I don't know ki yeh ajeeb si feeling kya hai, par if this is love... Then yes, I am in love. (looking in her eyes)Miss Nisha Gangwal... I... (Nisha's eyes opened wide) love... (He thought he saw a smile on her face and continued) You..."

Dehleez pe merey dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Haan sikha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan sikha maine jeena, mere humdum
Na sikha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na sikha jeena tere bina humdum


Nisha pulled her hand from his and ran in the washroom. She looked at her mirror image and blushed. She didn't know the reason of her happiness and blush. She closed her eyes and all the moments which she and Kabir shared flashed infront of her eyes. The first meet, the way he laughed after their prank was successful, the beach fall, the library scene, his puppy faces, the day they were wet in rain, their fall in the living room and his proposal.

Kirti, Dolly and all present in the canteen were blushy- wushy. Kabir looked at everyone and smiled awkwardly and went to the rehearsal hall.

Hmmm.. hmmm..

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein
Dil se jo maine kari hain...

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein
Dil se jo maine kari hain...

Jo tu mila to saji hain
Duniya meri humdum
O aasma mila zameen ko meri
Aadhe aadhe poore hain hum
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum


Kabir was in the rehearsal hall and was dancing to calm himself. Nisha entered the rehearsal hall and smiled as he moved his body gracefully with the slow music. But suddenly Kabir came towards her and blocked her between himself and the mirror. They both looked in each other's eyes and the time stood still. Kabir moved Nisha's hair which covered her face and tucked it behind her ear. He cupped her face. Nisha close her eyes with an unknown soothing feeling in her. He too closed his eyes and touched his forhead with her's.

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena, kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena, mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum

Hmmm... hmmm..



Kabir- (intensely) Kyun Nisha? Why the hell are you so amazing? Tumse dur jaana chahu, toh nahi jaa sakta, tumhare paas bhi nahi aa sakta... Your beautiful face, chocolaty eyes, soft lips, your attitude, anger, happiness, each and every avatar of you is beautiful... Main nahi jaanta ki tumhare dil mein kya hai, par itna jaroor jaanta hoon ki you are mine.

He said the last sentence opening his eyes.

Nisha- (her eyes still closed, in a dazed voice) I am only yours.

Kabir- And Viru? Uska kya hoga tumhare bina?

Nisha opened her eyes and saw that Kabir was smirking at her. After looking at her puzzled face he moved away and started laughing. Nisha was confused.

Kabir- (trying to stop his laughter) I am just joking...

Realization hit Nisha and she started hitting him. Kabir tried to save himself from her slaps and control his laughter at the same time.

Kabir- Sorry yaar, Kal Saurav ko yeh dialogue kehte hue suna tha, Umesh bhi Aman ko similar lines suna raha tha, maine socha main bhi try karu...

He left from there but Nisha didn't follow him. Instead she stood there and asked herself, "Kya ho gaya tha mujhe? He was so close and maine react bhi nahi kiya? I love Viraj na, toh Kabir... why does he affect me? What's happening in my life? Am I falling for him? That's not possible, par aaj... jo kuch bhi hua, maybe... I am falling for him... I am in love with Kabir" As soon as she said those words, all her anguish which was there in her for last one month turned into happiness. She went from there smilingly.

Viraj stood behind the door in a shocked state. He had witnessed the entire scene and how Kabir had changed his expression from dazed to amused one when Kabir saw Viraj's reflection in the mirror.

Viraj- Are these two in love? Maybe they didn't confess and Kabir thinks that Nisha still loves me? What's happening? Oh God! This is so confusing.

Kabir had ran from the rehearsal hall to an empty classroom. He sat there silently and let tears stain his cheeks. He couldn't believe what Nisha said to him, but he knew that she wasn't sure. Or was she? Of course not, she loves Viraj. He wiped his tears and moved out of the classroom.

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I am not good at writing lovey-dovey parts, but I hope the update was good😊.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part dear
Kabir confessed n nisha said ys😳 loved that part
nicely written
waitng 4 ur nxt part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ek toh yeh gana.. Upar se Kabir ke words
Hayeee I am dead ☺️
Viraj .. I hope he helps them confess rather than being the reason for their separation 🤔
Main Kabir ko aise nahi dekh sakti 🥺😭
Next part update soon please 😛
And thanks for the PM😳
Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it 😳 eagerly waiting for the next part. Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved this update a lot..
please continue soon..😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was BEAUTIFUL... 👏❤️
I loved Kabir's proposal...
So Nisha is in love too
But poor Kabira, he still thinks she loves Viraj... I hope Nisha confess soon
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh...ho both are going to be shy now or misunderstand each other
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it... Amazing as usual👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
What do you mean you can't write lovey dovey scenes???? That was perfect what you have written. Loved both of kabirs proposals. Can't wait to see what happens next. Im now in lala land

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