NiBir OS: Gifted with Dolls

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Posted: 10 years ago
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''MY HEART IS A STEREO, IT BEATS FOR YOU SO LISTEN CLOSE
HERE MY THOUGHTS IN EVERY NOTE...O...O''

Nisha woke up by getting disturbed by the loud music while rubbing her eyes...
Nisha: Ufff! Commet 'Krishita' has sucessfully landed in our house!! KABIR! Wake up you moron!
Kabir: *getting disturbed* What is wrong baby?
Nisha: Your angels have started their daily tsunami *fed up face*
Kabir: What is wrong yaar? They are just dancing on Gym Class Heros-'Stereo Hearts', I taught them last night!
Nisha: Yeah yeah, why not...you and your spoiled brats...totally like you!
Kabir: Aan, aan wifey, don't forget both are just like you, tom boy!! Otherwise they would have been dancing on Colbie Caillat's 'You Got Me'...
Nisha: yeah yeah whatever! Just, they are not girly like me, otherwise they have gone just totally on you and yeah oviously they can survive without me but not you...K you are *irritated face*
Kabir: Awwwh, and you are so J *laughs*
Nisha: Yeah, something else? Huh! Kritika-Nishita??!! Wait mamma coming!
Nisha said while sitting on the bed...then Kabir also woke up and they got freshen up! Then they headed towards the room of the kids...Kritika and Nishita were Nibir's 5 year old twin daughters, they were not identical twins but looked almost the same! Nibir were now living in Delhi, after coming back from London they shifted here! Yes, Kabir went to London for his dream but not alone, he went there with Nisha...and after one year, ending the course when they came back Nisha was pregnant...Though they shifted to Delhi but her delivery was at Jaipur...Now Kabir was running his own dance school in Delhi!

Kids Room!
Kritika: Eee, Nishi, mamma coming! Make the volume low...otherwise she will scold very badly!
Nishita: Don't you worry na, papa will also come! So no scolding!!
They both gave each other an evil look and gave a Hi5! Just then Nibir entered their room...Kritika and Nishita ran to their papa screaming PAPA and hugged him tightly!
Nisha: See, I told you Kabir...
Kabir: Haha my daughters, you know *gave a proudy look*
Kritika and Nishita then hugged their mamma too!
Nisha: No, no let it be...who cares for mamma? So, all started right? What I can say to you two...all day mischiefs and mischiefs!
Kritika and Nishita looked down...
Kabir: Arey, not now pls...my daughters are the best!
Nisha: Yeah wild cats they are becoming day by day!
Kabir: Arey, wow...excuse me madam, they are exactly like you..If you do then it is okay, if my daughters do then it is mistake?
Nisha made a fed up face...and just then Kritika and Nishita kissed their mamma's cheecks from both sides together saying...
'Krishita': We love you, mamma! *smiling*
Nisha: Okay, okay no need to melt me anymore...by the way you know babies...

Before Nisha could complete her sentence Kritika and Nishita asked for their breakfast and told Nisha about their karate classes after school and then their tution...That day they would come back home by almost evening! They also told their mamma, that their bestie Reema's mom would drop them that day...and then Kabir just took them to the drawing room for showing them an interesting dance step in a hurry so Nisha did not get chance to complete her words...

After the kids left for school, Kabir told Nisha he wanted a day out with Nisha as the kids will come back home at the evening... he would not go to his dance school that day...his manager would manage all the work! Nisha became really happy thinking that Kabir wanted to do all this for a special reason maybe...but later she realised after the whole day that there was nothing special...They went for lunch and then watched the 'Fast and Furious 7' at cinema hall! They were driving back home when the phone of Kabir rang...It was Reema's mom and she informed him that the kids would do a sleep over at their house since they had to complete a sudden project given today at school...Kabir said okay and cut the call! Nisha was angry after knowing it at first but later she was okay...
Nisha: Your daughters are really clever minded...they told Reema's mom to call you because they knew very well, I won't agree so easily...
Kabir: Hahahaha! But let all these be...what to do now? Kids won't be at home...lets take dinner outside wifey?
Nisha: No, Kabir! After all those eating random stuffs the whole day, I am feeling full! Lets go home and let me make you some food!
Kabir: Arey, no! This night should be romantic *winks*
Nisha: Means???
Kabir: I am also not in the mood for heavy meal...Lets take chilled strawberry milkshake and a cadbury silk, you like na? Will go on terrace and enjoy it with the winds of the night!
Nisha: How you manage to be so perfect? *amazed-romantic face*
Kabir: *Gave a peck on her lips* Don't make me go crazy in the car wifey, at least let us reach home! *naughty look*

Kabir and Nisha had an amazing romantic time at the terrace, after so many years and two daughters their love never got dull! Rather it got deeper..Kabir was not only a perfect son and hubby but a father too and Nisha was so proud of him...The vice versa case was for Nisha too...she was Kabir's pride for being so perfect at every role in her life! It was almost midnight..Kabir said Nisha that they should go downstairs otherwise they might catch cold because of the winds and said he was feeling cold! Nisha did not want to come back but as Kabir was having problem...so they came down...while coming down what Nisha's eyes caught literally took her breathe way...Their beautiful posh drawing room was filled with beautiful lighting candles, there were balloons everywhere on the floor and there was a cake right in the middle of the centre table, written 'Happy Birthday Sweetest Mamma of the World' on it...All of it looked so amazing with the soothing light of the big lamp stand in the corner of the drawing room! And then suddenly Kritika-Nishita came out from behind of the sofa with a laptop in their hands, shouted together with the whole Gangwal Family who were on a group video call along with Dolly-Sumit, Kirti & her hubby, and yeah of course Kabir who was standing behind Nisha
''HAPPY BIRTHDAAAY''

Nisha did not know what to say and how to say, it was exactly 12'o clock...and yeah it was her birthday! But she never thought it would happen like this! She was trying to tell her daughters this morning that it was her birthday eve and they would find out whether Kabir could remember it or not, together! But look what everyone did for her...She looked at Kabir with a face which had lot of questions...
Kabir: Yeah, what?! We all planned but 80% credit goes to your dolls...they did all the work today with the help of Reema's mom and Reema! These two also planned a lot of things about the party with us for last one week!
Meanwhile Kritika-Nishita took out a bowl of ice cream from the fridge and came up to Nisha...
Nishita: Mamma, mamma we wanted to bake you a cake all by ourselves..but papa did not agree because we might burn our hands
Kritika: So we made this ice cream for you...and we did not take any help!
Kritika-Nishita: *Together* We love you, mamma! Happy Birthday!

Nisha had happy tears in her eyes! She hugged the kids as much tightly as she could...she rained kisses on their faces and told them...'Mamma loves you too..you two are the best gift ever to your papa and me'...Then they enjoyed a lot with the whole family...the whole time throughout the party they were on video call on the laptop! Then after the party Nisha was resting on the sofa closing her eyes, she felt something was moving on the floor...when she opened her eyes, she found the kids were making a big bed for 4 of them there...and Kabir was trying to play a song on his phone!
Kabir: Party in our house and no dancing? Is it possible Kriti-Nishi?
Kids: NOOO!
Kabir played the song and they took Nisha with them for dancing on their bed on the floor...


Ok Now Listen Up
We Gonna Tell You Story
Story About Four Guys
Taa, Raa, Maa And Paa
Taa Jo Gire Toh, Raa De Sahaara
Maa Pal Mein Samajhe, Paa Ka Ishaara
Ki Taa Ye Raa Ye Maa Ye Paa Agar Mil Jaaye Toh
Toh Yeh Sangam Toh Yeh Sargam Sunaayi De Sabko
Taa Raa Rum Pum Taa Raa Rum Pum...

Kabir took Kritika on his lap, Nisha took Nishita on her one and continued dancing...

Taa Ne Ik Din Muskuraake Yeh Bataaya Tha Raa Ko
Kya Tumhe Bhi Yeh Pata Hai Pyaar Hai Maa Se Paa Ko
Ki Taa Ye Raa Ye Maa Ye Paa Agar Mil Jaaye Toh
Mohabbat Hi Mohabbat Yeh Sikhaa De Duniya Ko
Taa Raa Rum Pum Taa Raa Rum Pum...

They put the kids on the bed and started to tickle them...

Taa Toh Har Pal Yehi Dekhe Raa Ke Hai Kahaan Hai
Maa Bhi Jaaye Bass Udhar Hi, Paa Jidhar Hai Jahaan Hai
Ki Taa Ye Raa Ye Maa Ye Paa Agar Mil Jaaye Toh
Kahe Milake Yeh Sab Dilse Ki Abb Toh Jo Bhi Ho
Taa Raa Rum Pum Taa Raa Rum Pum...

They laughed and laughed, then the happy little family fall asleep together with the growing blissful night...
Edited by Nikhad003 - 10 years ago

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RosaDola99 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! Another os
something nice and new
as always u r an awesome writer 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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*Finally UnRES... 😆...
niks... nice concept yaar...humaari Nibir ab do bachon ki maa baap .. Par khud hi ab bhi bachon jaise behave karthe hain .. 😛
jaise bachonki naam acha choose kiya tu ne ..
and those two little brats ... kitna chamche hai apni paapa ki !!! 😉😆

Edited by ..nandynibir.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome!!Mind blowing OS. Please keep writing these kind of OS's and FF's.Superb!.You are an awesome writer.👏😊😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww!!! this was just cuteness overload yaar such a warm and fuzzy, feel good OS, Loved it!! ❤️🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic OS...Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww nibir r so cute together with their kids
Beautiful os
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww, that was so heart-warming! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg nibir has kids
awesome niks 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A fairytale
sweetest os i have read.

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