Perfect Melody - A NIBIR MUSICAL SHORT STORY. UPDATED! Chapter-3 Pg 8

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Lekha

@Echo.of.Hope

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

wow.👏

such a musical SS

love it.❤️

the song in part one is one of my fav and now its more special coz u connected it to nibir

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ashred12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Awweeesome !!! Dere is more ???!!!!

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Sowmiya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

i didn't like it...

i loved it buddy...

continue..😆

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Nikhad003

@Nikhad003

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Sooo sooo sooo amaziiinnnggg *_* but I am dying for nibir talk since that day...pls update nisky pls...and especially for me...yayyayyay! *_* love u too much and got your pm!

Edited by Nikhad003 - 10 years ago

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sonal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

nice part niks

but only kabira's pov no nibir

but loved it kabira missing his wifey😉

thanks 4 the pm continue soon

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poo10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Loved it...
Plz update next part soon...waiting

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mika17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Aww dat was an awesome update

Love how you portrayed kabir's feelings

Thnku for the pm😛😛😛

Edited by mika17 - 10 years ago

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-abz-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Awsome update 👏👏

pls pm me nxt tym😳

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: pareekisha235
Brilliant !!
Loved it too much !! 👏
Waiting like a mad for the next part !? 😃 😃
Don't keep us restless for a long time !! 😛 😛 😛

Thnk u! N hehe nxt update? Err I'm really slow writer dear... but will try my best to update it soon. Next update will b mostly of Chapter 3 of Dil tho pagal hai SS. 😉