NIBIR FF:Na Hona Tha Kyun Ho Gaya(part 3&4 updated-page 4) - Page 3

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey sweetie! nice update n dun worry ur writing is wonderful! Cont soon. 😊

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Ashliana

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome work dear.love it. Continue soon...

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chhavi

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful
Hey sweetie! nice update n dun worry ur writing is wonderful! Cont soon. 😊

o thanks yaar yes now i am writting next part 😳

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janvi0513

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Posted: 10 years ago

Loved all parts
Sorry for not commenting earlier

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chhavi

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Posted: 10 years ago

part-4

cousins are sitting and thinking ...after thinking sometime,

dolly-yaar cousins kuchh to bolo ?

aman,kirti,jwala-(together)kya bolein...?

aman-yaar in dono ka pakka kuchh na kuchh to karna padega

dolly-mere paas ek mast plan hai

aman-kya

kirti -jaldi bol na...kya plan hai...???

dolly-ek hi tareeka hai ...inhen honeymoon par bhaj dete hai...

kirti-wow...honeymoon...(she says in a dreamy way)

dolly -par yaar yeh dono wahan par bhi lade to ...?

aman-mere paas ek idea hai ...

dolly -kya...?

aman-kyon naa hum inke is honeymoon ko thodaa special aur alag baanayen...

kirti and dolly -(together)-par kaise???

aman-dekh hum inke ride ko aur romanchak banate hain ...inko bas ki jagah gaadi mein bhaj dete hain...lamba saphar hoga ...aur romance bhi ...(in a dreamy and excited tone)

dolly and kirti-(together)-wow...kya idea hai (in dreamy happy tone)

dolly- ...to phir cousins are you ready to excecute this plan...

cousins-yaah lets go

scene shifted to nibir room -

kabir-ab dekhiyo thodi hi der mein dadaji ki awaaz aayegi aur humari life mein u turn aayega

nisha-kabir-tu pura pagal hai

kabir -khud hi dekhliyo aage hota hai kya...

suddenly they hear dadaji loud voice kabir ...nisha...idhar aao ...

kabir slightly upward his eyebrow and says-dekha...

nisha-(confused)ab chal bhi ...pata nahin kya hone wala hai...

⭐️so guys are you excited to know what will happen next ...ok think a bit more ...till then i will complete my next part and will write it soon...😆😳

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sonal

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Posted: 10 years ago

nice parts chhavi👏

waiting 4 their khooni honeymoon🤣

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Lakshmi G Reghunath

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Posted: 10 years ago

chavi...its really gud...very much fun...do continue soon dear

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cherrynicolem

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Posted: 10 years ago

Read all the updates in a go

They r superbly written 👏

Waiting what happens next

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Sowmya

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Posted: 10 years ago

This is just WOW...u are an amazing writer

It's really funny😆
Continue soon

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Chahat Doshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

Love NiBir

Loved the story so far

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