NIBIR os - Hum apni shaadi se bhaage( update part3 page 6) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zainabawoon

OMG piya how are you?? Dont know if u remember me but i used to love reading all your stories on VeeBa and used to comment on them and then u suddenly disappeared 😆 anyways Big Hugs nice to see u here buddy 🤗

Now coming to this story OMG Awesome concept yaar!! NiBir running away together from their own shaadi, something they are so much capable of doing 😆 😎 👍🏼 i'm so impatient to read how this story would unfold, the concept opens the gates to endless possibilities of all things fun and interesting 😎 update soon 😳



Zain of course I remember u and a lot of hugs to u too dear and the reason why I disappeared was my boards but now its over and I won't disappear now just so happy to see an old friend again and veeba I'll def try to continue


Keep reading and do comment
Love u lots
Piya

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hum apni shaadi se bhaage - part 1
Nibir were fully prepared to run away . They had the car ready outside the marriage hall . They got into the car and drove off . No one doubted as both said to everyone that they needed some time alone and locked the door from inside escaped from the balcony


They finally reached the station

Nisha : hum yaha kyu aaye hai

kabir : bhajan karne tujhe karna hai ...oh my dear hum bhaag rahe hai yaad hai ya bhool gayi aur bhaagne waale log na ya tho bus stop jaate hai ya tho station

nisha : ha tho maine kaha kuch kaha ...tu hi hai jo baat karke time waste kar raha hai

kabir gave nisha a stern look

They went inside and luckily the station was almost empty . It was 2 in the night and their marriage was next day morning


nisha : waise hum ja kaha rahe hai ?

(the whole plan was of kabir and because of the rituals like bride and groom should not meet before marriage they coudnt discuss much )

kabir : shimla ...bohot khoobsurat jagah hai ...pahad vaadiya aur suna hai waha ab barf girni shuru ho gayi hai

nisha : ohh hum chuttiya manane nahi ja rahe hai hum ghar se bhaag rahe hai samjha

kabir : let me correct u hum ghar se nahi apni shaadi se bhaag rahe woh bhi ek dusre ke saath ...hahaha

nisha : kabir ke bachhe!!

kabir : train aagayi chal jaldi

they finally found their seat in 3 tyre ac side seats

kabir : yeh niche wala tera aur upar wala mera

nisha : nahi nahi mujhe upar wala chahiye

kabir : upar wale pe mai saonga

nisha : mai soungi

kabir : maine bolna na mujhe chahiye

they kept on fighting as usual and one Aunty saw them fighting

aunty : kya hua aise kyu lad rahe ho dhono

kabir : aisa kuch nahi hai aunty bas aise hi

She saw the bridal mehndi in nisha's hand and misunderstood both to be husband and wife

aunty : tum dhono shaadi shud ho

nisha : nahi woh ...

kabir : haa aunty hum shaadi shuda hai ..honeymoon pe ja rahe hai

aunty : baap re honeymoon pe ja rahe ho aur itni ladai

kabir : nahi aunty hum dhono ki aadat hai aise ladne ki aur waise bhi aunty kehte hai na jo ek dusre se sabse zyada ladte hai wahi ek dusre se sabse zyada pyar karte hai ...hai na nisha

nisha felt really good hearing this from kabir but she didnt know why . A small smile appeared on her face which she really tried hard to hide

aunty : waise bohot lucky ho tum itni khoobsurat biwi jo mili hai

kabir : aap sahi keh rahi hai aunty jiski shaadi nisha se ho woh es duniya ka sabse lucky insaan hoga

nisha felt mixed emotions within herself and kabir's pain was clearly seen in his eyes . They shared a beautiful eye lock . Aunty seeing their passionate love left from their without disturbing them...kabir soon looked away breaking their eye lock and then they realized that aunty left

kabir : theek hai tu upar soja mai neeche sojaonga

precap : they reach their honeymoon suite


not that good i know but trust me their honeymoon will the best as no couple would have had it this better and why i m calling it honeymoon u will know in the next episode😉

piya


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Posted: 10 years ago
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You just totally made my day :') i am so happpy now reading it...pls pls pls pls update sooon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh miss modest not good huh?😡😆
this is just so freaking nibirish awesome 🤗

loved every single word and the emotions you have penned 👏❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow!! Superb piya..🤗
I'm loving this a lottt🤗
Dialogues...🤣
Update soon can't wait any longer yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its an awesome story
Lovely nok jok of Nisha and Kabir 👏😆👍🏼
Thanks for pm!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Superb loved cute fights of Nibir
Thanks for pm

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Posted: 10 years ago
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So cute n honeymoon?! 😉 I'm waiting for wats coming nxt! 😆 Thnx for the PM dear.
Edited by Lifez_Beautiful - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Last day since I read the article about marriage I have been thinking how nice would it be if they both ran of with each other on their Own wedding it would have been better than the marriage track...yaar you just made my wish come true thanks...waise the story rocks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks guys for the support I really want this track to take place in the show it will be awesome

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