Dhodi Khatti Dhodi Meethi-NIBIR OS author's note to new nibirians- pg1

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AUTHOR'S NOTE (29/4/2015)- BLAST FROM THE PAST ! this was my first os. And today i brought it up front as a welcoming gift to all the new nibirians. i honestly miss the old Nisha-Kabir scenes and this os is along the lines of those scenes. i hope you guys like it. And a very warm welcome to the forum frm lakshmi😳

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Ok guys...nibir fan here...its sad that there are so many niraj ffs and os but not many for nibir...so here is something...disclaimer :-i solemnly swear that i have never written any piece of fiction in my entire life...plsss chappal mat maarna...😳

"This is really not happening!!!" Nisha muttered to herself in the mirror."Oh but it is happening darling you are now officially married!!!" the mirror seemed to answer back. Dadaji has given his final verdict. Nisha has no choice she has to accept her marriage with kabir and she can't give any more pain to her parents they have already bore enough pain on her behalf especially her father. But Kabir he is my friend how can I consider him as my husband? Nisha thought and Viraj what about him? I can't ..."You can't what nisha?" her mind asked."You have to forget him...move on you can't live with Viraj Singh Rathore's memory "her conscience said. But...Nisha began." No buts you have to move on he is not yours he never was in the first place...move on ".

Nisha hadn't realized it but she was walking about in her room battling with her inner self and at the moment kabir came with his bags and entered without looking "arrey yaar NISHAAAH..." Nisha banged into him and they both fell to the floor with nisha on top of Kabir. Kabir's breathing hitched he kept staring at Nisha who was busy trying to get up "oh god she looks beautiful when she is not screaming...beautiful? arrey tujhe kya hogaya Kabir tu Nisha ko beautiful keh rahe ho" he thought. He said out loud with his stupid grin to nisha "Kya hua wifey, Hubby se door nahi reh sakthe kya...I know I am too hot but control yaar ".He knew that would get her going she got up and started hitting him with his bag."DON'T.YOU.DARE.CALL.ME.WIFEY "saying every word with a hit.Aww aww...I am sorry sorry sorry stop it yaar stop it please."Said Kabir who was on the floor. He pulled at the bag and nisha again fell on top of him.

Of course someone had to see them like that just then Kirti came into the room."nishu who..."she began and then she saw nibir on the floor looking not so innocent . she ran outside screaming SORRY.Before nibir had the time to process what happened Kirti's voice came "Next time door close karna nishu...yahan bacche bhi hai okay."Nisha looked at kabir and got up quikly saying "aah ...disgusting". "Arrey kya disgusting yaar hum toh pati patni hai na?Waise bhi sabko pata hona chahiye ki mujh jaise hot ladke ko koi nahi resist kar saktha"said Kabir with his cheeky grin." Bakwaas bandh karo varna I will kick you out of my room.Waise tum bags ke sath kya kar rahe ho?jaa rahe ho kya ? Nisha asked happily."I wish" he sighed "but no I have to share room with you" he shrugged. "KYAAA?"Nisha shouted." Wait till you hear the next part " Kabir said" I am to work in the dukkan from now on and we both have to live here until I get a place for us to live and settle down"." Who told you all this?" Nisha asked." Aur kaun...tumhara pyaara dadaji"Kabir sat down on the bed looking around.

"Woh mere saath aisa nahi kar saktha I thought he would give me time" Nisha was talking when she noticed Kabir on her bed "Tum mere bed par kya kar rahe ho?"."Oh I was checking out the mattress after all I am going to sleep on it from now on and...nisha held up her hand " first of all ye mera bed hai yahan koi aur nahi so saktha. Secondly u r not going to sleep in my room"." But there is no choice baby u have to bear me dadaji's orders". Said Kabir with his signature smirk. Nisha crossed her hands and glared at him Kabir being Kabir held her eyes with a smile. Finally Nisha gave up "fine. But u r not going to sleep on my bed." "

"Nisha yaar lets be fair about this we can toss na ".Said Kabir taking out a coin from his pocket."I call head." "Fine I will go for tail " said nisha.Kabir tossed the coin Nisha came close to him crossing her fingers.kabir caught the coin and opened his hands it was a head . "YES I won I take the bed "kabir shouted. Nisha stomped her foot and said "fine but I will take my blanket and pillow." She took her blanket and pillow and started to spread out a spare mattress on the floor all the while muttering curses on Kabir.

Kabir was sitting on the bed looking at her and began "You know what nisha you are better when you are not trying to kill people with every word you take. ""oh really?"Asked nisha sarcasm dripping in her tone."Haa yaar tum aise nahi hothe toh shayad tum aur dosth banathi aur wo viraj hai na...he trailed off seeing Nisha's expression changing when he uttered the name."Ruk kyu gaye you should say if I was not like this Viraj would have thought better of me...""Aise nahi hai yaar... "No" NIsha held up her hand "you are right if I was anything better Viraj would have had given me a chance..."Nisha ..." Kabir got out of the bed and strolled towards her but nisha was not listening she continued her ranting tears streaming down her face..."and if I was not like this and was like dolly di kirti or aman bhabhi maa aur papa would not had to go through so much...I brought dishonor to my family...only if I was a better girl but I am not and never will be...I can only be this good for nothing..."

"NISHA!!!... " Kabir shouted and shook her by the shoulders. He held her eyes and said anger dripping from every syllable "Don't you dare say anything like this again.You don't know Nisha.If you knew the Nisha I know you would never say this. The Nisha I know is the strongest girl in the world". His tone softened. "The Nisha I know risked her life for a girl she barely knew. She put so much at stake so that the girl could find her mom. The nisha I know is a brave girl. She fought Bhabhiji with a burnt stick and even left a mark".He smiled. "The Nisha I know never gives up and her spirit affects you so much that you will also start believing that the impossible could happen. The Nisha I know is considerate ready to sacrifice her happiness for her family...Haa thodi bahuth bolthi hai aur lecture sunati hai par jaise bhi hai bahut pyaari bhi hai.Jithna Khatti hai na use kai zyada meethi bhi hai aur"...Nisha hugged him so hard that kabir was unable to breath for a few seconds then he hugged her back and smiled.

He held her and said "Aur Viraj ke bath...Nisha u are more worthy than 1000s of Virajs. When he realizes and I am sure that's gonna happen soon when he realizes what he lost, the gem he lost, he is going to regret big time."He brushed off her tears and said looking into her eyes "You Nisha is nothing less than any other girl if anything you are more than any other girl. You are beautiful here. He pointed at her face ."And more importantly here". He pointed at her heart ."Dont you ever forget that". He tapped her nose with his fingers.Nisha smiled

" Now now aur senti mat banao mujhe aur go and wash your face". Nisha was smiling and Kabir seeing this started his taunts. "Arrey koi dekho kuch der pehle saas se thadapthe bahu jaisi ro rahi dhi aur ab saas mara hua bahu jaisi has rehi ho jao apni face wash karo ". Nisha was grinning now. She started to go to the bathroom when kabir came up behind her."Kuch dena tha. Here you go. wedding gift samachlo". He opened her hand and placed a one ruppe coin with heads facing up."Yeh mera lucky charm hai.hamesha work kartha hai.The coin I used to toss and I give it to u"."whats so special about this coin ". Asked nisha.Kabir smiled and said " palat ke dheklo". Nisha flipped the coin it had a head on the other side.The coin had head on both sides. She looked up to scold him but found him lying on the mattress she laid on the floor eyes closed. She smiled involuntarily looking at him.

Kya hua wifey apne pati se pyaar karne laga hai kya itna ghoor rahe ho?asked Kabir eyes still closed."Kabir tum kabhi nahi sudharoge" nisha muttered under her breath but she had to smile.

I am sorry if its bad as i said this is my first work of fiction😳😳😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful..freaking awesome.. 👏 write more and
i liked the playful comedy its so kabirish 😳
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Bad are you serious, this is awesome, waiting to read more of Nibir from you.
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First ball mein sixer maar diya yaar 👏... It was awesome.. The same kabir we see, same naughtiness, cuteness everything.. I just loved it a lot.. Do do write more..will be waiting for your next one..😛
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Bad r u mad
this is awesome

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It is very well written, It doesnt look like you are writing for first time.
Nisha's worry that she always bring problem for her parents, The way Kabir consoled her is just awesome,
One request : Could you please write the complete story in English ,

Thank you so much for letting me enjoy this beautiful piece. Looking forward eagerly for the next chapter.
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Fantastic...love it.👏..Please update soon and would appreciate it in all english
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Wow yaar this was so so beautiful!!! The way kabir consoled her and boosted her spirits high ❤️ the hug ❤️ the coin toss and kabir giving her his lucky charm coin as wedding gift ❤️ it was all so heart touching yaar, so sweet i almost felt like crying 🤗 pls do write more! This was Awesome! 👏
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belive me this was just awesome...the way kabir explained her how beautiful she was...loved ir😊😊
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Thank you for all the nice words guys 😳
I meant it as an encouragement for nibir fans to write something, really its annoying that there are so many niraj ff but so little on nibir

This was meant to be an o s but I will write another if u guys wish

I originally meant the piece to be in English...more comfortable with English actually...i am from Kerala but kabir's dialogues were more impactful in Hindi...if there was any mistake in my hindi please excuse me...i have only learned hindi till eighth grade
I promise I will write something in English.

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