NIraj ##FF#pehala pehala pyaar hai...(part 43 updated on page59)

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Grishu30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Aww...superb...u r an amazing writer..

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Rinet Eby

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

As always loved your update very much.

At least here our LA is back if not in the show.

Amazing and please do continue.

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aarvi123

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Than You ..Thank you so much guys u ppl comments make me crazy to write more😎. .heartily thank you to al

Achira, Akhu, nirajfan, grishu and Rinu. .😃

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aarvi123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Here is a next part

Part 14

Nisha was so lost in her jealous she dint observe that someone is coming..she coiled with him she fell in his arms..yes he is siddarth ..nisha just lost in her thought she remembering some niraj moment .in that position siddarth says

Siddarth: hey hello ..am siddarth ,sid..aap nisha hai na..

Nisha : ( bck to her sense and moved) yah..

Maya: wow how romantic ..hain na sir...

Viraj : (was so angry) siddarth!! What's happening there? (nisha left from there)

Siddarth : hmm nothing sir bus aise hi ...mai bas aapko ye quotation dene aaya tha.

Viraj: oh aap yaha rakhiye .( than siddarth left from there)

Maya: sir vo mai kya keherahi thi ki..

Viraj: miss. Maya please aap jayiye ..hume kuch zaroori kaam karna hai...ye kaam aap handle kardijiye pls

Maya: ok sir ..par kya hua?? Aap teek hai na..

Viraj: han am fine aap jayiye..(maya left from there)

Here nisha was very angry ..

Sourav: aree nishu beta kya hua??

Nisha: kuch nahi ..tujhe ab koi kaam hai kya??

Sourav: nahi kyun ??

Nisha: tho chal na canteen jakar coffee lenge ..

Sourav: jaise aap kahe ..chalo

Siddarth: excuse me guys !!

Sourav: aree siddarth aayiye ...nishu main kehraha tha na siddarth yahi hai vo

Nisha : pata hai main already milchuki hun ..

Siddarth : guys aap mujse aise formalities mat rakhiye ..miujhe itna respect de kar bulane ki zaroorth nahi hai..mujhe sid bulayiye...so guys frnds??

Sourav: achha sid hum coffee peene jarahe hai tum bhi ajao

Siddarth: aana tho chahta hun par nisha ne mujhe bulaya nahi

Nisha:abhi abhi to tumne kaha hum frns hain no formalities aur ab tum hi aisa kehrahe ho (and all laughs)

Sid : accha ab chalo ab

In canteen

Sourav :nishu kya hua tum kuch upset lagrahi ho..

Nisha: kuch nahi yaar chod na..

Sid: kuch hai ..aur tum mere samne nahi batana chahti ho hai na??

Nisha: are aisa kuch nahi hai ..tum bhi sourav ki tara shuru mat hojao

Sid: accha ek baat puchu ..

Sourav: sure..puch na..

Sid: main jabse aaya hu office main tabse dhek rahi hun aapdonoka bonding mujhe bohot accha laga aapdonoka frndship dekh kar ..kya issi office main aap log mile the kya??

Nisha :nahi ..ye tho bachpan ka saat hai ..

Sid: matlap aap dono bachpan se dost hai..

Sourav: ji han...hum bachpan se hi dost hai...

Sid: aap hamesha saat hi rehte hai na ??

Nisha: han han hamesha ..chahe kuch bhi hojaye ye hamesha mera saat deta hai..vo galat bhi kyun na ho..

Sourav: ha han ..pata hai iski cousins ki bahot badi gang hai.. hamesha koi na koi gadbad kate rehte hai..aur iski dadaji inlogoke saat saat mujhe bhi dant the hain ..kyun ki main inka saat rehta hun na

sid: wow intresting ...

nisha: aur punishment bhi milthi thi isko (nisha laughs)

sourav: accha bacchu tumhe hasi aarahi hai..mai ye sab isiliye jhel raha hun kyunki vada jo kiya hai..hamesha saat rahunga..friends for ever

sid: wow ..sourav aap kitna lucky hai

nisha: vo nahi main lucky hun ..itna accha dost kahi nahi milega

sourav: ab chod ..coffee katham hua hai kya kaam pe chale aur ek or coffee chahiye

nisha: nahi chalo

in cabine

viraj searching nisha from the cabin

viraj: aree ye nisha kaha hai kahi dhikai nahi derahi hai..kya mujse gussa tho nahi hai na.

nisha,sourav and sid back to their work

nisha was upset ..sourav observe that

sourav: (in his mind) iss nishu ko kya hua..todi der pehle theek thi jab khana khane keliye viraj sir ke cabin me gayi thi..ab kya hua hai isse..

sourav came near to nisha

nisha: kya hai sourav yaha kyun aaya hai tu

sourav: nishu sacch sacch bata kya hua ..viraj sir ke saat jagada hua hai kya ??

nisha: shhh!! Dhire se bolo koi sunlega..

sourav: tu bol pehle

nisha: kuch nahi tu ja yah se (at that time sid joins them)

sid: kya horaha hai ???

nisha: kuch nahi isse koi kaam nahi hai isiliye bak bak kar raha hai mai iski bak bak sun rahi hun ..

sid: vaise mai bhi bak bak karne main koi kam nahi hin

sourav :accha karo bak bak hum sun ne keliye tayyar hai..

sid started blasting some jokes and nisha cant control her laugh and laughs

maya: ye aaplog office main gappe marne aate ho kya??

Nisha: han tumhe pata nahi hai kya??

Sourav:accha bas karo ab kaam karte hai chalo (everyone back to their work)

Sourav looks at nisha she is now smiling and sourav dragged sid to other side and says

Sourav: sid thank u thank u so much

Sid: thank u kyun?

Sourav: pata hai tumhare iss jokes ne meri dost ki chehre par smile layi hai ..pata nahi vo kuch upset lagrahi thi par tumhare vajah se vo ab hass rahi hai ..(and he left from there but viraj sees every thing )

Sid: accha meri vajah se smile kar rahi hai..iska matlap mujhe har roz joke kehna padega..

Viraj messaged nisha that he want to meet her after office hours come and meet him in the cabin but nisha dint check her mobile because she is so buy in her work ..after office hours everyone leaves for their home even nisha and sourav also but viraj was waiting for nisha ..

In ghangwal house

Jwalu : nishu bro aap aagayi ..nishu bro dhekho na ye sukku bro ne kya kiya ?

Nishu: kya kiya sukku ne ..

Jwalu :aaj mujhe pic karne nahi aaye.. pata hain main kitna dar gayi thi

Nisha: sukku ye kya baat hui koi apni behan ke saat aisa karta hai kya??

Sukku ;are meri maa ..todi meri bhi baat suno ..mene usse lekar aaya hun

Jwalu : han par pata hai kitni der se aaya hai.. mai ne kitni dur tak akheli chali aayi hun

Sukku :main kya karta dukan par customer ko bhi attend karna hai aur isko bhi pick karna hai .muj par kitna pressure hai pata hai..

Nishu :oh hoo jaise ki pure ke pure dukan tu hi sambal raha hai na..

Umesh : aree yaar sukku aaj tu dukan par kyu nahi aya

Sukku :hayee mere kismet tho dekho umesh bhayya ko abhi aana tha kya ??

Nisha: dhekha pakadi gayi chori

Sukku : chalo chalo tu abhi abhi ayi hai jaa fresh ho ja baad main baat karte hai ..( sukku escape from there)

Precape: nish read the message from viraj and its 8:30 p.m

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Rinet Eby

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Another lovely update.

Is Viraj still waiting in his office for Nisha.

Nisha tu to gone now.

Amazing dear and please continue.👏

And yay first one to comment on this.

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Achira

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

again mind blowing

ab toh viraj bhi jealous hoga..!!!!

maza aayega...but nisha 8:30 pe viru se milne jaayegi kya???

jaldi updatee karna...i am exited to know..

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Vrushika321

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Read both update at once.
Superb.
AwW poor Viraj he might be still waiting for nisha in the Office.
But the jelousy track seems to be quite fun. Firstly nisha jelous of maya and now its Viraj turn.

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Grishu30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Aww superb...viraj is still waiting for nisha..poor viraj..

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dreamyfarah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

Waiting for niraj romance late night in office 😆

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aarvi123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#110

Hey guys thank you so much for the comments and here is the next part

Part 15

All cousins and sourav gathered in trace except nisha

Sourav: guys nishu kaha hai ..kahi dhikayi nahi derahi hai??

Aman: vo dadi ke pas thi ..ajayegi kehke gayi hai..

Sourav: accha mujhe tum sabko kuch batana hai ..

Dolly :kya hua sourav

Sourav: aaj na nishu kuch upset dhikarhi thi

Sukku :kay haua office main kisi ne kuch kaha tha kya ??

Umesh : bolna sourav !!

Keerti :shayad tu ne kuch kiya hoga..

Dolly: guys aap ek ke baad ek question puch na band karo usse batane to do

Jwalu :exactly dolly di ..i agree with u ..

Sourav: pata nahi kisne kya kaha ,kya nahi ..maine puchne ki bohot hi koshish ki par ..

Sukku :par tu tho sourav ki sourav hi rahega tumse koi kaam teekse hota hai kya??

Umesh: sukkuuu ..muh band rakho apna

Sourav :par nishu kuch bata nahi rahi thi ...bohot der ki baad vo sid ne usse hasaya ...baad me todi teek thi vo

Sukku :ye sid koun hai ??

Sourav: naya aaya hai office main siddarth ..

Keerti ;wow kaisa hai ..smart hai kya vo ?( and than nisha enters)

Nisha: kiske bare main puch rahi he keerti

Keerti : vo hi siddarth ...tu bol na nishu vo kaisa hai

Nisha : aree keerti mai usse aaj hi mili hun ek hi din main sare details kaise dun ..(all laughs)

Sourav: accha aap sabko pata hai aaj office main kisika phone par hi romance horah tha ( kidding nisha)

Dolly : are wah nishu ..tu tho chupe rustum nikli ..pehle tho ye pyar romance se door bhagne wali aaj kal tho tum expert ban rahi ho..

Nisha :kuya dolly di aap bhi na ..mai tho vo phone (suddenly she remember her phone) ..phone !! mera mobile kaha hai ..)checked in her pockets she dint find it ..shayad kamre main hogi main le aati hun ..she moved to her room

Aree yaha pada hai ..accha kisika call tho nahi aaya ..are ye kiska message hai ..(she open it read it) she is tensed aree ye message tho 4:30 ko aaya tha ..main ne kyun nahi dhekha ..pakka viraj gusse main honge ab kya karu ..he bhagwan plz mujhe aaj bachalena pls ..and she called him ..he cuts her call and switched off his cell

Aree ye kya hua abhi tho ring aaraha tha abhi switched off!! Ab kya karun...kabir ko phone karti hun ..

Kabir: hello bhabi aap ko acchanak aapki devar ki yaad kaise aayi

Nisha: kabir vo sab chodo tu pehle ye bata viraj kaha hai ..

Kabir : pata nahi maa ne phone kiya tha bhai ne bola bohot kaam hain aane main der hojayegi

Nisha :accha (in low voice )

Kabir : kya hua kuch baat karni thi kya unhe hi phone kijiye.. accha aapko unka number chahiye main dedunga don worry (kidding her )

Nisha :kabirrr!!!

Kabir ;accha accha just kidding..dont worry bhai aate h i main unhe boldungi aap ko phone kare teek hai

Nisha :teek hai bye.. ..she cuts the call ..iska matlap vo abhi tak ghar nahi gaye, main office jau kya ..and she sees the time its 8:30 p.m ..kya karu ..hamre ghar main tho itni der main bhahar jane ki icchazat nahi hai ..kya karu kya karu ..kisiki madat lekar mujhe yaha se jana hi hoga..(and she ran towards to tarrace)

Sukku : ham na nishu ki shaadi main na dhumachadenge ..hamari nishiu ki shaadi ko sab dhekte reh jayenge aisa karna hoga

Umesh : han aisa planning karenge sab ka hosh hi udenge

Sourav :aap log planning karo main chalta hun.(at that time nishu enters ).aree nishu aise kyun arahi hai ..koi running competition main participate karni hai kya???

Nisha :sourav sourav ..

Sourav :accha aaja yaha bait ..

Sukku :kay hua nishu tu itna pareshan kyun hai ?

Aman :use saans to lene de

Dolly : nishu calm down

Nisha :mujhe aap sabki help chahiye

Keerti : how blah nishu !! ye kehne keliye tumhe run karke aana pada kya ??

Sourav :nishu dhek kya hua teekse bol ..hum tere madat zaroor karenge

Nisha : mujhe viraj se milna hai

Sukku :aww aaj tho office main milke aayi hai phirse milne ki man kar raha hai ..kya baat hai

Dolly : nishu vaise tum kal ja rahi hai na office kal hi mil lena

Nishu : nahi mujhe abhi ke abhi milna hai (she cries )

Sourav : aree tu aisa kyun rorahi hai..baat kya hai batao

All are shocked by nisha's sudden reaction

Nisha : vo viraj abhi tak ghar nahi gaye hai

Keerti ;nishu vo kahi bahar kamkeliye gaye honge aajayenge tu itna tension mat le

Nishu :nahi mujhe lagta hai vo meri intezar kar rahe honge office main

Umesh : kya ??office main ..vo bhi iss vaqt

Sukku : hey nishu mujhe lagta hain tumne koi sapna dhekhi ho

Nishu : aap log samaj kyun nahi rahe ho ..

Souurav :tu puri baat batade pehle

(Nisha explain everything she saw viraj msg now and called kabir and all )

Aman: nishu iss vaqt ghar se bahar jaana mushkil hi nahi na mumkin hai

Nisha: (crying ) pata hai par main kya karu vo phone switch off karke rakhe hai ..

Sukku : accha tum apna aasu pocho aur tumhe kya jiju se milna hai na hum intezam karlenge dn worry

Bunty : mai jaake dhek kar aati hun koun kya kar raha hai ..(and he left from their)

Sourav : main tumhare saat chalungi office tak ..

Nisha :main akeli jaungi tu ghar jaa

Sourav ;itni raath ko main tumhe akeli jane nahi dunga..

Umesh: haan nishu akeli mat jaa..hum me se koi nahi aasakta ..kyun ki dadaji or ghar main kisi ko bhi doubt hojayega..

Aman : han nishu ..tu sourav ke saat chali ja..

Nisha : teek hai (bunty enters )

Bunty: nishu di sab log apne apne kamre main hi hai ..

Sourav : teek hai me pehle jaungi ..bahar wait karungi teek hai ..tu kisi bhi tarase aaja

Sukku : teek hai hum manage karlenge (sourav left from there )

After 15 minits nisha with the help of her cousin she escaped from there

Nisha : sourav chal ,jaldi (than he starts the gadi and left for office)

Nisha :accha thank u ab tu chal main kaise bhi jaungi ghar

Sourav : nahi main tereliye wait karungi ...pehle confirm tho karo viraj sir andar hai ya nahi ..

Nisha: haan tu teek kehraha hai ..mian dhek kar aati hu

Sourav ;ruk ek minit main bhi chalungi ..kya pata agar viraj sir andr hai aur tum bahar nahi aapayi tho main wait karte karte subha hojayegi ..

Nisha :accah chalo ..(they both enterd in the office)

Viraj saw both of them

Nisha : (in her mind) hey bhagwan mujhe aaj viraj ke gusse se bacha dena pleas

Viraj: sourav aap dono yaha !!

sourav :vo actually nisha aapse milna chahti thi tho main usse lekar aaya hun ..

viraj : kya baat hai miss nisha (annoyed)

nisha : vo viraj main

viraj :aapko ab time mila mujse milne keliye

sourav : sorry sir aap dono baat kijiye ..main bahar nishu ka intezar karunga ...

viraj : sourav!! Aap ko wait karne ki zaroorath nahi ..aap jayi ye, mai chod dunga inhe

sourav :teek hai sir ..nishu chalti hun ..ghar janese pehle sukku ko phone karna mat bhul

nisha :teek hai bye( looks at viraj ..viraj was too angry he went to his cabin nisha follows him)

viraj;aap kyu aaye hai yaha

nisha: aapse milne

viraj : kyun ?? vaise bhi kal aap office aarahi thi na

nisha : kal keliye mera aaj kyun karab karun ?? accha aap ghar kyun nahi gaye hai abtak

viraj : kuch kaam tha !!

nisha: aisa kya kaam

viraj :ab aapko main har baat batana padega mujhe

nisha : ( come close to viraj ) han kyun ki aapki honewali wife hun mai

viraj : kya faraq padta hai aapko meri padi hi nahi ..mai kya karu kya na karu aap ko tho siddart ke flop jokes par hasneke alava kisika dhyan kaha rehta hai

nisha : accha vo ..pata hai aapko vo sid na bahot accha hai kitna achha joke suna tha hai pata hai

viraj :nahi pata hai hume or nahi uske bare main koi baat sun ni hai

nisha : accha aapko jalan hora hai (winked at him)

viraj : nahi hame koi jalan nahi horaha hai

nisha :pata hai mujhe ..chodiye aap mujh pe gussa hai kya

viraj : nahi ..

nisha: am sorry ..

viraj : koi zaroorat nahi hai sorry bolneki

nisha: ( in her mind)ab kya karu ye itna gussa hai .. she thinks some thing ..hmm accha teek hai aap mujhse baat nahi kar rahe he tho kya hua sid ne mujhe kaha hai ki jab bhi aapko bore horaha hai tho mujhe call karna main acchi acchi jokes sunata hun ..tho usse call karke baat karlungi and she started to dial some numbers

viraj: ( hold her hand and dragged her towards him) he snatches her mobile and kept on the table..kisiko phone karneki zarurath nahi hai..

nisha :accha ..mujhe na kuch jalnegi badbu arahi hai(and she laughs)

viraj ; (staring at her ) he come close to nisha and they both are very close and viraj kissed her cheeks

nisha: ab kam hua aap ka gussa ..

viraj : nahi ..and he remove his blazer and tie

nisha: (little scared) aap ye kya kar rahe hai

precape : siddarth says I love u nisha ..infront of viraj ...