Daily Interaction Thread - 06!!! - Page 104

Ask someone else to help you. 😆 😆 😆

I don't even have to ask. 🤪 My mom is mighty pissed off with me and if only she knew what I am doing in my PC now, she'll surely do the needful with much pleasure. 😈

Jokes apart, I can understand... kabhi kabhi insan kuch aisa kar jaata hai ki baad mein use apna sar deewar par maarne ka man karta hai. Ek baar humare saath bhi hua tha... 😆

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I can understand your situation. Kabhi kabhi kuch cheezein dimag mein ghoomti hi rehti hain. Novels/stories mein to aksar hota hai. Jab tak complete na ho, dimag wahin par rehta hai.

Exactly! It happens too often with books and I am stuck. But I guess I'll know the problem of the story soon enough.

There are several shows where fans have written so many dark FFs. So, I'm not surprised...

I am not surprised. It's just that the story is way too dark. And while the writer is amazing with her detailing and of course, the words and verse she has chosen; personally I feel she has made the characters way toooo mature for their age. Like it suits protagonists in their early or mid 20s but no way on earth a 9 year old boy and an 8 year old girl could write something like this.

The story is more like description in their diaries which took place over the years and present time.

I for one, am enjoying the present scenario more.

Abhi hum IMMJ forum ka chakkar laga kar aa rahe hain... episode ka update jaan-ne ke baad, hume hi chakkar aa rahe hain.

Kya ho gaya?

I don't even have to ask. 🤪 My mom is mighty pissed off with me and if only she knew what I am doing in my PC now, she'll surely do the needful with much pleasure. 😈

Same here... right now, my maa doesn't know what I am doing on her phone. Agar unhone dekh liya to she will also do the same to me plus kal se phone bhi nahi milega. 😆

Exactly! It happens too often with books and I am stuck. But I guess I'll know the problem of the story soon enough.

Same here... it happens when I read any particular book.

I am not surprised. It's just that the story is way too dark. And while the writer is amazing with her detailing and of course, the words and verse she has chosen; personally I feel she has made the characters way toooo mature for their age. Like it suits protagonists in their early or mid 20s but no way on earth a 9 year old boy and an 8 year old girl could write something like this.

The story is more like description in their diaries which took place over the years and present time.

I for one, am enjoying the present scenario more.

Samajh gaye... there are many writers who are absolutely amazing with detailing. So, padhne mein bahut interesting lagta hai.

Kya ho gaya?

Basically, Vansh's mother's painting was missing and his step mom was the one who stole it and burnt it. Ridz knew the truth but took the blame on herself as she didn't want Vansh to lose his faith on the word maa and his mother.

And I am wondering why does she care so much for his feelings? Isko kya padi hai Vansh ki?? Kya zarurat thi mahaan banne ki?

Same here... right now, my maa doesn't know what I am doing on her phone. Agar unhone dekh liya to she will also do the same to me plus kal se phone bhi nahi milega. 😆

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Samajh gaye... there are many writers who are absolutely amazing with detailing. So, padhne mein bahut interesting lagta hai.

Not just the detailing. The FF I had wrote on KD, I wrote in this style. Like the present life scenario with FBs inserted to point out how and what happened in their lives. That too, I wrote over a period of 10+ years starting from when they were in college to established professionals in their respective fields. And of course, 3-4 chapters were totally diary entry.

Obviously, mine was dealing with the day to day conflict and I wasn't detailing this much. Nor do I have such an amazing vocabulary.

But somewhere it left me grinning that somewhere along the line, we do have similar thinking when it comes to creative thinking. It's just the detailing and how adept someone is at his/her craft that sets these creations apart.

Knowing I am at least 5% of these writers, it gave me some sort of happiness.

Basically, Vansh's mother's painting was missing and his step mom burnt it. Ridz knew the truth but took the blame on herself as she didn't want Vansh to lose his faith on the word maa and his mother.

And I am wondering why does she care so much for his feelings? Isko kya padi hai Vansh ki?? Kya zarurat thi mahaan banne ki?

Okay! This girl needs the type of Dhulai Supri did of Surya in Mard Ko Dard Nahi Hota. What the hell was she thinking???

Not just the detailing. The FF I had wrote on KD, I wrote in this style. Like the present life scenario with FBs inserted to point out how and what happened in their lives. That too, I wrote over a period of 10+ years starting from when they were in college to established professionals in their respective fields. And of course, 3-4 chapters were totally diary entry.

Obviously, mine was dealing with the day to day conflict and I wasn't detailing this much. Nor do I have such an amazing vocabulary.

But somewhere it left me grinning that somewhere along the line, we do have similar thinking when it comes to creative thinking. It's just the detailing and how adept someone is at his/her craft that sets these creations apart.

Knowing I am at least 5% of these writers, it gave me some sort of happiness.

Well, than I'll safely say that I am out of this group of 5% writers...

Okay! This girl needs the type of Dhulai Supri did of Surya in Mard Ko Dard Nahi Hota. What the hell was she thinking???

Seriously yaar!! Is ladki ka kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha hai. Chal kya raha hai iske dimag mein? She is there for a mission...not to do some mahaan work.

And right in the next scene, she was back to her usual Vansh hating/Vansh is a murderer jaap.

Well, than I'll safely say that I am out of this group of 5% writers...

I wouldn't say that. See, whatever I have written, those were mostly emotional and majority of the FF writers do that. But the way you write suspense and comedy - it's beyond amazing. Suspense chalo phir bhi theek hain, main zyada padhta nahi hoon. But comedy - you definitely are a start. And yes, while I appreciate good vocabulary and verses, I have to admit that in this particular FF, I am getting annoyed too because it seems so unnatural at point. So easy writing too has its pros.

I am not saying this because you are my friend. I genuinely feel you are really good with comedy and have an amazing sense of humor. 👍🏼 🤗

Seriously yaar!! Is ladki ka kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha hai. Chal kya raha hai iske dimag mein?

And right in the next scene, she was back to her usual Vansh hating/Vansh is a murderer jaap.

Just leave her. Focus on Vansh. I am a bit curious. If you have to choose between Ritz and Rosh, whom would you choose? 😈

I wouldn't say that. See, whatever I have written, those were mostly emotional and majority of the FF writers do that. But the way you write suspense and comedy - it's beyond amazing. Suspense chalo phir bhi theek hain, main zyada padhta nahi hoon. But comedy - you definitely are a start. And yes, while I appreciate good vocabulary and verses, I have to admit that in this particular FF, I am getting annoyed too because it seems so unnatural at point. So easy writing too has its pros.

I am not saying this because you are my friend. I genuinely feel you are really good with comedy and have an amazing sense of humor. 👍🏼 🤗

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Well, I do agree with you... easy writing too has its pros. Still, even if I am good, I need more improvement...

Just leave her. Focus on Vansh.

Filhal to focus Vansh par hi hai... saath main thoda Kabir par bhi focus hai. 😆

I am a bit curious. If you have to choose between Ritz and Rosh, whom would you choose? 😈

A really difficult choice... NOTA ka option nahi hai kya?

Khair, I haven't watched much of Rosh but counting the few instances where Ridz was sensible, I'd probably go with her. 😆

Khair, I was watching yesterday's episode of Baal Veer returns... wahan bhi almost disappointment hi mila hume...

Well, I do agree with you... easy writing too has its pros. Still, even if I am good, I need more improvement...

Everyone needs to improve no matter how great they are. And I wish all the best for you in case you want to explore more as a writer. 👍🏼 🤗

Filhal to focus Vansh par hi hai... saath main thoda Kabir par bhi focus hai. 😆

Meh! 🤔

A really difficult choice... NOTA ka option nahi hai kya?

Khair, I haven't watched much of Rosh but counting the few instances where Ridz was sensible, I'd probably go with her. 😆

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Khair, I was watching yesterday's episode of Baal Veer returns... wahan bhi almost disappointment hi mila hume...

Why?

Everyone needs to improve no matter how great they are. And I wish all the best for you in case you want to explore more as a writer. 👍🏼 🤗

Thank you... 🤗

Whenever I write something, you will be the one whom I'll send the first draft. 😆

Meh! 🤔

Well, actually Kabir par focus isliye hai cos uski baaton se lag raha hai ki there is more to his character than what is being shown.

Dialogues se to professional kam personal rivalry zyada lag rahi hai...

Why?

Because of Ananya... when she entered, her scenes were still interesting. Abhi to she is going to create a huge problem jisme thoda bahut haath Mr. Dev aka Baal Veer ka bhi hai...

Thank you... 🤗

Whenever I write something, you will be the one whom I'll send the first draft. 😆

Yay!!!

Well, actually Kabir par focus isliye hai cos uski baaton se lag raha hai ki there is more to his character than what is being shown.

Dialogues se to professional kam personal rivalry zyada lag rahi hai...

Honestly, I had this assumption because in ITV, the way they portray the equation between policeman and criminal - it always looks more personal with their urge to bring down each other. 🤔

But I hope it becomes intriguing enough for you. 😊

Because of Ananya... when she entered, her scenes were still interesting. Abhi to she is going to create a huge problem jisme thoda bahut haath Mr. Dev aka Baal Veer ka bhi hai...

Kuch samajh mein nahi aya because I have -100 idea about that show. But I am guessing you would have liked something else, right?

Yay!!!

Itna khush bhi mat ho behen...

Aisa na ho ki padhne ke baad reaction inme se koi ho: 😡 🤬 😵

Honestly, I had this assumption because in ITV, the way they portray the equation between policeman and criminal - it always looks more personal with their urge to bring down each other. 🤔

But I hope it becomes intriguing enough for you. 😊

Well, I agree... they actually portray the equation between policeman and criminal in such a way that it seems more personal than professional.

So, technically I have zero expectations still I wish ki kuch interesting mile.

Kuch samajh mein nahi aya because I have -100 idea about that show. But I am guessing you would have liked something else, right?

Ummm... not exactly. Aisa nahi hai ki I would have liked something else.

Ruko, precap share karte hain. Phir explain karenge ki humara issue kya hai. Is that fine?