PiAnsh FF ~ YOU ARE MINE! Chapter 7 updated on Page 13 - Page 4

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Posted: 6 years ago
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nice update abhi dhekna hai age kya hoga
pls next part bhi jaldi de do
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Please update the next part ASAP
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Hey everyone..
M back...!! I know ..i know..I have been vanished for a few days..
But m back now..and presenting you Chapter 4 of my PiAnsh FF..

Here it goes..
Ansh's house-
Ved gets a call from Panditji.
"Vedeshree ji, 2 din baad dayan sandhya amabashya hai .. usse pehle apko Ansh ki shaadi Daivik se kisi bhi halat mein karwani hogi".

Vedeshree is beyond shocked
"Par panditji ye kese hoga! Daivik kaha se laungi mein ! Woh bhi itni jaldi!! "

Panditji with faith "Devi ma par bharosa rakhiye. Apko wohi rasta dikhayenge. Mein apko aj raat milne aunga. Tab tak aap Daivik ko dhund lijiye. Jai Devi Maiyya Ki!

Phone was cut. Vedeshree was shaking with fear. She knows that she now has only one path...Devi Ma. She hurriedly went to the nearest Devi Ma Mandir near their house.

Meanwhile in college-
Kajal came back to the class.
She went straight to Ruby and Pia.
Kajal- Oi Ruby..why did you lied? Professor didn't call me!
Ruby - Umm..maybe he was talking about Kajal Sharma..and I thought Kajal Rathore. I am sorry Kajaal!! ( With a puppy face )
Kajal smiled at Ruby
"No problem"
Just then the bell rang. Ruby stood alert. Pia and Kajal were taken aback.
Pia asked " What happened Ruby?"
Ruby replied " I..I have an important work to complete. I will be back soon. You two go and have lunch ok."
Both Pia and Kajal
"Ok boss"
The trio smiled and left the class.
Ruby went outside the college whereas Pia and Kajal went towards the canteen.

In Devi Ma Mandir-
Vedeshee prayed to Devi ma. She poured her heart out. She wants only one thing now..to find Daivik!
She came out of the mandir. She was about to enter into her car just then she saw a girl passing her . She had Devi Ma ki nishan!! Vedeshree was beyond happy.
She stopped the girl. The girl turned around and saw Ved.

Ved glowed
"Beta! Tumhara naam kya hai? Tum Daivik ho na?"
The girl is none other than Ruby!!
Ruby replied (extra sweetly )
"Aunty ji, I am Pia! Yes , I am a Daivik. But how do you know it?"
Vedeshree was like...she can't thank Devi Ma enough for giving her Daivik.
Vedeshree said " You have to come with me. My son is Davansh. You need to marry him beta. You can only save my son.
Ruby - ( happily )
I was also in search of the Davansh for whom I was born. Finally I am going to meet my soulmate!

Vedeshree asked Pia ( Ruby ) to enter into the car. She will take her to her house and start the rituals asap. Ruby said she will come in a while after praying to Devi Ma. With this Vedeshree entered into the car and waited for Ruby.

Ruby went somewhere outside the mandir and a woman covering her face with a shawl met her.
Woman - Good job ! Meri assistant DAYAN!
Both smiled evilly.
Ruby- Jesa tumne kaha tha meine wesa hi kiya , Mohana! Meine Ansh ko ye bataya ki mein Pia hoon, Vedeshree ko yakin dilaya ki mein Daivik. Ab aage?
Mohana - Aage bas tu mere Ansh se shaadi karegi. Uske baad jo karungi mein karungi.
Ruby - But Mohana...
There was no one in front of Ruby. She realised that Mohana vanished. She then went to Ved and both went towards Ved's house.

In college-
After lunch Kajal insisted Pia to come to her house. Pia first refused but then seeing Kajal's cute innocent face she agreed. Both sat in Kajal's car and went.
( Ansh already went back home after helping Kajal in her work)

Ansh's room-
"Come beta come inside"
Ansh was reading a book just then he heard Ved's voice. He saw Ved entering his room with a girl...wait a minute isn't it Pia ..?
His Davansh " Correction ! It's second hand Pia "
Ansh chuckled at Davansh's remark.

Ansh - Maa..aap?
Ved - Ansh yaad hai tune kahatha ki mere janam din pe mein jo mangungi tu mujhe dega? Us wakt nehi maangi thi..par ab mangna chahti hu beta.
Ansh was startled.
Ruby - Hi Ansh!
Ansh to Ved -
Ma, aap kahogi toh jaan bhi de dunga! Bolo..kya chahiya
Ved became emotional .
"Beta, mein chahti hu ki tu DAIVIK SE SHAADI KARLE!"
Ansh was shell shocked!
"Maa.."
"Wada kar..tu Daivik se hi shaadi karega. Woh bhi kal hi!"
Ansh was speechless! But he loved his mom so much that he can to anything..any sacrifice for her.
Ansh sighed
"Par ma , Daivik kaun hai'?
Vedeshree pointed towards Ruby.
"Yeh..Pia..ye hai Daivik!"
Ansh was not at all convinced with this. But he saw Devi Ma ki nishan in Ruby's back. After a lot of explanation and emotions , Ansh agreed. Vedeshree was happy.
Ruby smirked at her victory.
"Haat mila apni hone wali biwi se"
Ruby forwarded her hand to Ansh
Ansh shaked his hand with her reluctantly. He was remembering the girl at the cliff...her touch..her voice. Davansh was heart broken . But both loved Vedeshree. So they agreed.

Vedeshree told everyone about the sudden decision. Everyone agreed with her and started preparing for the wedding. Kajal bought Pia to the house . Both saw all the decorations and also got to know about the wedding of Ansh and Pia (Ruby ).
Pia was shocked. She straight went to Ruby's room.
Pia - "Ruby, ye sab kya hai. Tumhari shaadi? Woh bhi Ansh se? Woh bhi thik hai par woh tumhe PIA ke naamse jaanta hai! Ye sab galat ho raha hai. Mein abhi sab bata dungi Ansh ko .

Ruby was angry and scared.
Pia was about to go..Ruby stopped her.
"Pia..I am sorry. But mein Ansh se bohot pyaar karti hu. Mein shadi ke baad khud sach bataungi. Please, mere pyaar ke khatir. Wese bhi Ansh bhi toh mujhse pyaar karta hai. Toh woh mujhe maaf kar dega . Please..maan jau."
Pia was confused
"Par Ansh se toh hum aj hi mile the.."
Ruby barked " Ha ..par hum dono ek dusre ko pehele se hi jaante hai. Hum lovers hai Pia!"
Pia's head was going to spin. She was not able to digest so much.
But she always believed in love. So for her best friend's love and happiness. She agreed. Both hugged each other.
Ruby gave a lehenga to Pia and ask her change as the mehendi rasam is going to start.

In the hall-
Everything was ready. Only family members were present. Ruby came down . Pia was not there. Ansh was present there and looked towards Ruby and looked away. He didn't know what to do.
Vedeshree remarked
"I hope everything goes smoothly!"
Everyone smiled.

Precap- Pia was running towards the lift . She was so scared and shivering. Just as she was going to press the button, Ansh grabbed her and pushed her to the wall. He blocked her with his both hands. He was fuming with anger
"Mujhse bhaag rahi thi!"
Pia froze.

Done! Please comment and like. Thank you!

Edited by iamjapi - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#34
I'm loving this story of yours. The precap seems interesting... Plz jaldi update karna!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#35
nice update dear
interesting precap
can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 6 years ago
#36
Please update in English
I don't know hindi

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Posted: 6 years ago
#37
Lovely update
Want Ansh n pia together soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#38
Hi I'm new here. Just loved it. U r an absolutely amazing writer.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#39
I hope Ansh recognises Pia soon before his marriage with Ruby happens
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Posted: 6 years ago
#40
Hey ... I just read u story & it's amazing
Specially the last chappy
Hope ansh find piya as David soon
Precap seems so grt !!!
Plzz update soon

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