PiAnsh FF ~ YOU ARE MINE! Chapter 7 updated on Page 13 - Page 3

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Beautiful start. Please continue soon.
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Wonderfull! Can't wait for Pia and Ansh to meet. Continue soon!!!
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Here is Chapter 2
After this I really don't know when I will be able to post the update as my exams are going to start. So bear with me..
Anyways enjoy the update..

I am so desperate to share this one with you all.. hope you all will enjoy..

A cliff near Pia's house-
"You know Puchki. I find peace whenever I come here. I watch my mom up in the sky at night. It gives me so much of positive energy. But today this is also not helping me cool down. Aree..ye larka jiska naam Davansh hai , mera khaas dost jise meine kabhi nehi dekha, kitna ghanghor musibat ban gaya hai meri life ka!"

Pia was so busy mumbling and complaining about this man named Davansh, that she didn't realise that someone was watching her from behind a tree.

Flashback~
Ansh jumped off his window and climbed each and every building like Spiderman.. though Ansh doesn't need any web like him.
As if the buildings are itself magnets for his hands.
With the help of his sensing powers, he reached Pia's house.
As soon as he entered her room, the most intoxicating and delicious smell of honey and strawberry hit his nose. The whole room was smelling like that. His Davansh side went crazy. He went near the bed and found a beautiful pair of earrings which smelled like honey and strawberry of course. He took one earring in his hand and closed his eyes trying to find the owner of the earring. Then, he saw the back view of a beautiful girl standing near the cliff watching the moon.
Ansh opened his eyes which turned golden brown and gave a evil smirk. He headed towards the same cliff...

Present~

So intensely, full of passion in his golden eyes, Ansh was watching Pia.It was as if time has stopped for him. As if that girl wearing white salwar kameez is the only being present in his world... Though he was not able to see her face , but her intoxicating smell,angelic voice and 'chan chan' of her payals were enough for him to lose control.


Suddenly he had a vision of the girl falling from the cliff. Ansh became restless.

At the same time, Pia's leg slipped and was going to fall but a hand caught her and pulled her back .
Both fell down on the ground , Pia's back was facing the person.

Ansh didn't left Pia's hand. Though both fell down and he was successful in saving her , but still he didn't leave her hand.

...

Something magical happened...
Pia's eyes became blue, she felt a pleasure like feeling which she never felt before. She didn't know what was happening to her. Ansh's condition was even more complicated..
His Davansh side went crazy. He just wanted to hug that girl and keep her with him forever. But his human side was trying his best to control davansh from reacting like that.
Guess what, Davansh won. He came out. Golden eyes , full of intensity and passion. Davansh was fully controlling the human side.
Pia felt a pain in her hand suddenly. Her pleasure was gone back far away and was replaced by a deadly pain. Her wrist was hurting like anything.

"Leave my hand!! Please..you are hurting me! Aaa! Leave me"
Hot tears came out of her blue shining eyes . She was so scared that she didn't even dare to turn around and see the person.

Davansh Ansh was out of control. He was fighting with himself inside.
"Leave her!! You are hurting her..you will kill her..you are evil...leave her" His human side was shouting on him. But nope.. Davansh was unleashed.

Just then both of them heard someone's footsteps coming near them. Pia felt like the person left her hand.

"Piaaa...kaha hai tu"! Piaaa...
"Maaasiii,...yahaaa...mein..mein yaha hu.." pia was relieved that her Savitri maasi is here.Pia turned back to see the person who was hurting her...but saw no one.

Savitri saw Pia on the ground crying. She rushed towards Pia .
"Pia..! What happened!! Tu ro kyu rahi hai"

Pia thought
"No I can't tell maasi what happened here ..she will again tell me to stay inside the house and not to go out.But where did that person go! ..I don't care.. but i know now

"I hate that that person"

Pia's trance was broken,
"Piaaa..! Mein tujhse baat kar rahi hu!"
Pia started " I fell down on the ground..i slipped "

S- Hey mata rani! Tu thik toh hai na Pia.
P- Ha..mujhe ghar jana hai
Both of them got up to leave . Savitri picked up Puchki . As soon as Pia started to walk..

S- Pia ..

Pia turned to look at Savitri.
Savitri handed Pia a pendent.
P - Yeh kya hai Maasi ?
S - Yeh divya locket hai..ye tujhe buri shaktiyo se bachayegi. Pehenle ise.
Pia without complaining wore that locket and smiled at Savitri. Both of them went towards their house.

Savitri in mind
Ye locket tuje har buri shaktiyo se bachayegi...ek Davansh se bhi. Is locket ko pehenne ke baad woh Davansh teri aas paas bhi agar aya..toh woh tujhe pehchan nehi payega. Ha mein selfish hu..par mein meri behen ki beti ko kuch nehi hone dungi. Davansh Daivik tak kabhi pohoch nehi payega..!

Back in Ansh's room-
Facing the moon, eyes closed.. recalling everything happened on that cliff...Ansh took out the earring and smelled it . Instant pleasures shot down his body.
His eyes again became golden
"Kaun ho tum, Pia! " He gritted his teeth.
His Davansh side spoke
"Meri hai woh. Meri manzil hai woh. Pia! Meri Pia!"
Both roared in unison " Humari Pia"
With full determination to find more about Pia, Ansh stared at the moon from his window.

Meanwhile in Pia's room-
Recalling the incident at the cliff..tears were formed in her eyes.
"Meri jaan bachayi usne. Par uske baad ... ..woh insan ...woh insaan ho hi nehi sakta..janwar jeisa bartaf... Aj pehli bar mujhe itna dard huwa mere haat mein.
(Red marks and bruises of fingerprints on her wrist)
I wish aj ke baad mein us insaan se kabhi nehi milu. Nafrat hai muje aiso se. "

She kept staring at the moon playing with her new pendent given by her cute maasi.
"I miss you ma!"

Precap- Ansh and Pia come face to face. Ruby falls in Ansh's arms .








Edited by iamjapi - 6 years ago
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Beautiful story read it in one go nice keep going u are good writer
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Nice update... so mow ansh can't find pia .. mau be he will think ruby as aw pia
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awesome
kya first meet the dono ki
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I hope Ansh doesn't mistake Ruby as Pia
Please yaar...
Loved the update especially where Ansh and his davansh side says humari pia

Loved it

Waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you for appreciating my work. I read every comment but due to my hectic schedule, I can't reply to even one.

But finally, I got time to update my FF at least!! So let's start...

Chapter 3

It's morning-
Vedeshee comes to Ansh's room. She sees Ansh sleeping peacefully like a baby. She caresses his face .

Ansh sensed it and opened his eyes.

"Good morning Ma" Ansh smiled
Ved replied "Good morning Beta. Now get up. It's 8 am, today you need to go to Kajal's college with her. She needs your help in some social service beta."

Ansh sighed "Yeh Kajal bhi na. Sab kaam bare bhai ko hi karne deti hai"
Both chuckled.
Ved gets up to go but Ansh stops her
"Ma! I need to ask you something"!
Ved says "Ha beta, puch!"
Ansh starts "Ma yeh DAIVIK kaun hai?"
Ved gets surprised but feels happy to know that her son is interested to know about his soulmate.
"Ek Daivik ek aisi larki hai jiske pas divya shaktiya hai. Usko matarani ka bharpur ashirwad milta hai. "
Ved answered with a smile.

Ansh again questions
"Par hume keise pata hoga ki kaun hai Daivik? Humare charo aour toh insaan hai..toh hum us larki ko keise pehchan sakte hai?"

Ved thought something and replied
"DURGA MA KI NISHAN! Ek Daivik ke sharir par hoti hai ye nishan.Ab bas bohot baate ho gayi beta..tu jaldi taiyyar ho ja ha . Mein breakfast ready karti hu.

With this Ved left.
Here, Ansh was memorising each and every word of Ved which she spoke about a Daivik. Then he got up and started to get ready to go with Kajal.

In Pia's room-
Pia took bath, prayed to her Om Maiyya and was getting ready for college suddenly she noticed one of her mom's earring was nowhere to be found. She became restless and shouted.. "Guruma! Maasi!"

Both Guruma and Maasi came to see what happened and saw Pia's dressing table was a mess.

"Hey bhagwaan! Pia ..bacchi yeh sab kya hai? " Guruma startled.
"Ma ki ek jhumka nehi mil rahi hai. Uske bageir mein keise rahungi...bahar keise jaungi!!"

"Yehi kahi rakh di hogi tune beta" Stated Savitri.
The three of them searched each and every corner of Pia's room but the jhumka was nowhere to be found.

Pia broke down into tears.
"Ab mein kya karungi! Woh meri Ma ki aakhri nishani thi"!

Guruma thought something..she said
"Pia tu apni shaktiya istamal kar ke dekh. Tuje jaroor mil jayegi"

Pia nodded and closed her eyes. She concentrated and started chanting mantras. She saw a vision of her jhumka kept neatly on a table which was unfamiliar to her.

She told whatever she saw in her vision to Guruma and Savitri. Both get confused.
Savitri said " Jeisa tune bataya, wesa table toh humare yaha nehi hai beta. Par phir bhi mein outhouse mein dekhti hu..kya pata waha ho..kisine galti se rakh diya ho . "

Pia eyes sparkled with a new hope
"Sach! Mil jayegi na Maasi..pakka?"
Savitri with a smile "Ha meri bacchi, mil jayegi. Ab tu rona bandh kar aur dusre jhumke pehen aur college ja. Waha teri saheliya wait kar rahi hogi. Especially Ruby"

Pia wiped her tears and kissed her Maasi.
"Ok Maasi"

Both Guruma and Savitri left the room.

Pia wore another pair of jhumkas but she looked sad of course.

It's 9 am -
Pia's College-
Pia was walking through the corridor and suddenly someone put two palms on Pia's eyes.

Person - Guess who!!
Pia glowed with happiness
"RUBY!! "
"Yes! My best friend!" Said Ruby
Both hugged happily.
R - I missed you so much honeypie
Pia - Me too. But now I am back na , we will have lots of fun.
Both started to walk towards their class
Ruby interrupted-
R - You know Pia , today I was going through a dictionary and I found the meaning of my name.
P - Accha..toh kya mila apko raniji?
R - It means a very beautiful and precious stone.
P - Wow! Tumhe pata hai mere name ka meaning
Both in unison - Spiritual
And both chuckled!!
R - You know Pia I was thinking of doing something fun. Shall we?
P- Ya sure.. say say..
R - LET'S EXCHANGE OUR NAMES FOR 3 DAYS
P - What! But...
R - Common yaar, mere liye..dekho, hume jo jo jante hai unko to ullu bana nehi sakte right? Toh ab se leke teen din tak humari jo bhi new person se mulakat hogi..unko hum ek dusre ke naam apna batayenge.. please na..
Pia thought something but smiled
P - Ok Pia (chuckling)
R - Yeh hui na baat Ruby
Both had a hearty laugh.

Just then Pia remembered to submit her leave letter at the office. So she left after promising Ruby to meet her again.

Meanwhile, Ansh and Kajal enter the college premises. Both walking through the corridor. Ruby was also walking towards Ansh direction. She noticed Kajal..and shouted.. "Kajal"!
Just then she slipped but Ansh caught her in time and she felt into his arms. Ansh felt strange energy from her. Ruby was staring at Ansh with a weird feeling..but it's definitely not love.
Just then Kajal interrupted..
"You both are ok?"
Ansh put Ruby on her feet and asked " Are you ok?"
Ruby immediately answered " Yes! I am so sorry.
Ansh replied " No , it's ok"

Suddenly Pia came seeing Kajal.
She was behind Ansh .
"Kajal ! " Pia was so happy to see her .
Kajal ran and hugged her.
"I missed you so much"

Then Ansh saw Pia. She was wearing a pink salwar kameez with a floral dupatta. With big silver jhumka and oxidised bangles. And her angelic smile was something magical.
Ansh in his mind-
"Wow! Such a beautiful girl."

(Saajnaaa...ooo...sajnaaa)

Pia also saw Ansh . Both are having an eyelock. They both unknowingly are attracted towards each other.
Kajal interrupted
" Ansh bhai, meet my best friend P.."
Ruby barked " Uh..Kajal..umm..I saw Professor Mehta was searching for you. You should go as soon as possible and greet him.

Kajal ( nervously) "What! Oh no..bhai ap khud inse mil lo mein jati hu professor ke paas varna bohot daat paregi! " With this she ran towards the staffroom.
Seeing this both Ansh and Pia chuckled!

Ansh back to Pia, extended his hand
"Hi , I am Ansh..Ansh Rathore. Kajal ka bara bhai"
Pia also happily extended her hand and shaked hands Ansh.
She felt so happy. Her soul was glowing with satisfaction. She found it weird but ignored the feeling.
Ansh also felt the same but only Ansh..not Davansh inside him.
Pia started " Hi , I am P.."
Just then Ruby whispered in Pia's ear,,
"Remember the name game? It's starts from here" she winked at Pia.
Pia first hesitated but then she wanted to see her bestie's happiness. So she said to Ansh
"Hi, I am Ruby.. Kajal's best friend!"
Both Ansh and Pia smiled at each other.
Suddenly Ruby interfered with a cough..
Pia immediately left her hand and Ansh felt as if something went away from him.
Ruby started , " Hi Ansh, I am Pia.. Kajal's best friend." She extended her hand for a shake with a wide smile. Pia looked on.
Ansh stared at Ruby with shocked expressions.
He shaked his hand with her but felt a very foreign feeling..a weird energy from her.
His Davansh side said " She is not our Pia. She cannot be . "
Ansh was confused. But he thought
" Ek hi naam ki aur bhi toh larkia ho sakti hai na !"
He then left Ruby's hand and said goodbye to both but not sparing a single glance to Ruby. He was only interested in the girl " Ruby" than the girl who says herself to be "Pia" according to him.

Ruby grabbed Pia's hand and said "Let's go to class Ruby, teacher is going to enter..chalo!"
Pia nodded and both said goodbye to Ansh and move towards the class.
Ansh was still standing there watching Pia's figure entering into the class. But before entering into the class something striked Pia and she immediately looked back at Ansh and found him staring at her. She felt a shiver in her but composed herself and smiled at Ansh. Ansh smiled at Pia too. And then Pia entered the class. Ansh also went towards the staffroom to join Kajal.
This whole scenario was noticed by Ruby who seemed to be thinking something but after few seconds she smiled at Pia and went inside the class.

Precap - Vedeshee sees a girl with Daivik nishan at the temple.

Wohooo...Chapter 3 ho gaya...yaar m so into this FF ...roz naye naye twist wale scene man mein aate hai..haha!!

Edited by iamjapi - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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lo yahan bhi Ruby manipulative dayan hai.
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Nice update. I am sure Ruby purposely started the name game as she knew Ansh will come that day. She purposely wanted to confuse Ansh. She also knows Pia is a daivik. She wants Ansh for herself.

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