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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
@ft glad you liked.
Ya wait doing it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

What I meant was...the story is so fast paced that there is nothing to think about...I am liking it.

The slap? That was a shocker actually😆 I expected Sweety to shout but not slap for this matter. But fine😊 Something different to see.


By slapping sweety showed her frustration. Rocky here did know that he was not preparing, he took it carelessly. Sweety slapped cuz even after getting warned by her that he would regret later, he did not take her words seriously.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Pritam I understand why Sweety slapped...just that I did not expect her to...she slaps only when the situation is very extreme na..thats why...I am not complaining...or saying u are wrong...Just that I felt just SHOUTING would have been better😊 Just my view yar...others will like it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
even i understood your point. As far as the point of pace is concerned, i'm very fast 🤣 kidding. I'm bad at describing stuff in detail. Just like to go with full on speed haha.
Edited by PritamDas01 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
tu na mere dil toot diya rocky ke liye! poor rocky!!! 😭 Not fair!!!😆😆

Nice update pritu bha !!👏👏

But dont leave us in suspense and hurry up wt next update!!😃

and oi, if lucky slaps rocky toh tu gaya, ekdum gaya.😈

😊😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaani.cidmjht

tu na mere dil toot diya rocky ke liye! poor rocky!!! 😭 Not fair!!!😆😆


Nice update pritu bha !!👏👏

But dont leave us in suspense and hurry up wt next update!!😃

and oi, if lucky slaps rocky toh tu gaya, ekdum gaya.😈

😊😊



Pritu... ?? Who ? 😆
Thanks !! Will update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
rocky sees lucky coming closer to him, he was sitting at sofa. Lucky came closer and took a pause. Rocky was tensed, he slowly stood up from sofa

Lucky: why have you stood up? Sit there!

Rocky: ya but dad.. I..

Lucky: its ok beta, sit!

Rocky: (felt a relief after being called beta).. (he slowly sits down)

Lucky also sits near to him. Rocky is sitting with eyes down.

Lucky: why are you feeling uneasy rocky? Its me, your dad.

Rocky: (saddened voice) i know dad it was a big deal. I did not make anything out of it. Its was completely my stupidity.

Lucky: (looks down) see! What happened, has happened. You can't go back and change it right? Of course it was a big deal. And you lost it. And i have seen you regretting about this yesterday night. Nothing can really be changed now as i said. You better learn something from it and move on.

Rocky: i'm suprised to see you behaving like this with me about this matter, dad.

Lucky: (smiles) do you remember when was the last time i raised my hand on you or scolded you badly?

Rocky: (confused look) no dad. You have never really.

Lucky: i was angry on you too ya not as much as your mom was and still is, but i was, not now. Later thought you have already been scolded enough by your mom. I'm also guessing that you've already learned a lesson from it. You're 17 now beta. Your mom and me both expect you now to behave mature. I don't wanna come to the JEE topic. As i told you, your mom has scolded you enough. Now all i want is you to never repeat this. Your school had just ended. Still way to go for you beta, your study life has just started. So you've realised now, thats all i wanted. Just make sure this never happens again.

Rocky: i don't know what to say dad. But i'm really feeling good now. I think i should thank you for these words. Yes dad, i've realised it now. This will never happen again i promise.

Lucky: (hands on rocky's shoulder) beta, i want you to remember one thing always, that its never too late. There's nothing in this world which should cause you depression. Never feel depressed for anything. So what happened you lost an opportunity? Always remember that another one is one your way. Fate always gives another chance, as long as you yourself don't break down. Never think like you've lost it, nothing can happen now, you have no way around, now you're gone and all these. There's always a door open. Its just never too late.

Rocky: (still looking at lucky's face with inspired eyes) well, what do you think dad? Will i succeed if i prepare myself again? Do you have that much of faith in me?

Lucky: (talked a few seconds later after rocky finished his say) i won't answer this. Rather i will see. You have to show me. I won't predict anything. I want to see results directly from you, beta. Lets see you can do this, or, not!

Rocky: (confident tone) (stands up from sofa) fine dad. All fine. I got you.

Lucky: don't get over confident, son. Sit down.

Rocky: (sits down) i'm not getting over-confident this time dad. Seriously, i'm not.

Lucky: good then.

sweety has heard this entire conversation of father and son. She is still angry at rocky, comes towards them in the living room. She looks at rocky

Sweety: (rudely) go to your room!

Rocky: (his facial expression have tuned blank from excited) mom...

Sweety: I-said-go-to-your-room. Should i repeat?

Rocky stands up and walks away from there. Sweety now sits near lucky.


rocky enters his room. Sits at his computer table. Starts to surf web. He opens a social networking site and sees pritam online. He goes on and sends him a message.

Rocky: "hi. Saale pura din online baitha rehta hai kya?"

Pritam: "haha no yaar. Just logged in. Whats up"

Rocky: "all good, u?"

Pritam: "well waiting for results :P"

Rocky: "kya yaad dila tune, now i'll go offline"

Pritam: "lol why?"

Rocky: "nothing leave it"

Pritam: "why leave? :P dude, you can't change your results now by not talking about it. So be a man. And face it."

Rocky: "yeah"

Pritam: "ok i gotta end this. My crush is online :P let me do some hello hi with her :P"

Rocky: "haha go. ab dost ki yaad thodi aayegi."

Pritam: "haha go. ab dost ki yaad thodi aayegi."
- seen

Rocky: (thinking himself, haha kuch zyada hi busy ho gaya lagta hai.)


lucky and sweety both are sitting next to each other.

Sweety: so you forgot what we had discussed last night?

Lucky: no. I have not.

Sweety: really? You had said you would talk to rocky.

Lucky: so what have i done now, wasn't it a talk? (smiles)

Sweety: i don't know. I fear to be sure this will do it or not. He needed not to be inspired. He needed a reality check. You needed to show to him the consequences.

Lucky: what has left, which i should have shown him? He is grown up now. We had a nice talk i guess and he got me words. So chill.

Sweety: (stands up) i can't chill lucky ji. Rocky won't get the chance to do his engineering. All because of his own faults. You don't know how much this is hurting me. I can't just go and give him an inspirational speech and sit down like you and chill. He needs to be shown how this one fault of him will destroy his career.

Lucky: (stands up too) destroy his career? Sweety ji what are you talking about? His one fault is not going to cost him that much. Nothing has finished for him. He does have second opportunity. Lets believe in him again. This time he won't disappoint. I know this.

Sweety: no!!! No more engineering entrance preparation. I don't want him to waste one more year. I will put him into a basic graduation course along with raavi.

Lucky: but...

Sweety: thats final lucky ji.

Lucky: as you say. Do you let anyone talk? (annoyed)

Sweety leaves from there.

[LAST PART WILL COME TOMORROW]
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Great update. Good to see Lucky trying to talk sense and inspiring his son. Sweety is her usual self, deciding things. Waiting for the last part.

BTW, crush online hai, hain? 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
rocky's friend's crush! Lol..

Anyways, thanks.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Acha wo koi aur Pritam hai? 😛

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