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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

expected more responses... from some more...

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@skyforceguy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

it was excellent. Good suspense. Like from a CID fan 🤣

One thing i would i like to say -
Pinky died, that is fate.
But after re marriage, why would everyone call the jeet's 2nd wife pinky as well when her name is Pinaki. Isn't it odd? 😃 well anyways, really good writing.

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: PritamDas01
it was excellent. Good suspense. Like from a CID fan 🤣

One thing i would i like to say -
Pinky died, that is fate.
But after re marriage, why would everyone call the jeet's 2nd wife pinky as well when her name is Pinaki. Isn't it odd? 😃 well anyways, really good writing.

Nickname 😉 PINanKI 😉 CID fan😛 LOL yes the effect and influence is there! in fact I do write for CID and MJHT 😆😆 Thanks!😛

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@skyforceguy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

sorry what's MJHT? (your writing is good also because you've been a student of cinema and tv writing)

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: PritamDas01
sorry what's MJHT? (your writing is good also because you've been a student of cinema and tv writing)

Aww thanks 😳 though my writing skills were there before i took up film tv studies 😳 got enhanced tho...😳 mjht is miley jab hum tum an off-air youth show😊

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@skyforceguy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

yep star one show. I know about that.

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Freethinker112

@Freethinker112

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Finally read it, sorry for the delay Suhaani! 😳

Great plot and revelation. 👏 Liked how you kept true to every character, their responses seemed like what they should be. Although I am on fence about Naanu's reaction, I feel as if he would support Jeet's decision in such a case for the sake of kids. Not to find faults, just something that caught my attention. 😊

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