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Saumya96

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello everyone I am starting a new story to keep this forum alive.. Plz support me and give ur valuable comments...

This story is of bajpayee family, a well known business family in Mumbai. Lets start with introducing characters...

ANANT BAJPAYEE - Third son of bajpayee family. He is very responsible person who is working in family business. He is lovable, handsome, smart, intelligent and who loves his wife navya alot...

NAVYA BAJPAYEE - she is very caring, beautiful bahu of bajpayees. She is loving wife of anant. She is very responsible towards her home and always keeps her family happy...

ANANYA BAJPAYEE - 3 years old daughter of anant and navya. She is little princess of bajpayee khandan and naughty but cute...

SARASWATI BAJPAYEE - she is dadi of anant and eldest person in bajpayee house...

OMPRAKASH BAJPAYEE - owner of bajpayee group of industry. Having caring wife sugandha, three sons and two daughters. Happy go person who loves his daughter in law navya the most...

SUGANDHA BAJPAYEE - wife of omprakash. Caring mother who loves her bahus...

MOHAN BAJPAYEE - eldest son of omprakash. Looking after his family business with his father who is guidance for his brothers...

RAMA BAJPAYEE - eldest daughter in law of bajpayee khandan. Matured and lovable bhabi but sometimes lazy of household works...

RAHUL AND PIYA BAJPAYEE - elder son and younger daughter of mohan and rama. Rahul is 7 years old and piya is 5 years old...

RANBIR BAJPAYEE - fourth son of omprakash and sugandha. Little irresponsible but loves his family. Totally a zoru ka gulam. His anant bhai is his idol...

RITIKA BAJPAYEE - usually called as ritz. Modern bahu and youngest bahu of bajpayee khandan. Ranbir and ritika were having love marriage. She is 7 months pregnant...

NAVITA VERMA - second daughter of family. She lives in her mayka only. NAVIN is her husband. They are having one son HARSH who is 5 years old. They live with bajpayee only. Navita also works in bajpayee industry and is courier oriented woman. Navin doesn't work and loves cooking. He takes cooking classes...

NIMISHA BAJPAYEE - she is youngest daughter of omprakash. She is very chirpy and talkative. She loves her navya bhabi...

So the story is of typical family. Anant and navya were having arranged marriage. After marriage they fell for each other. 5 years of marriage they are having with cute 3 years old daughter. They both are literally so much busy with their family and doesn't have time for themselves and their love.. Lets see their journey...

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Saumya96

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Posted: 9 years ago

Here is the first update...

Bajpayee mansion.. A big banglow and a normal Indian family. It's morning and all were busy in their work...

Navya... Who was working in kitchen making tea for everyone..

NAVYA - ramu kaka... Prasad tayar hua ki nahi.. Dadi k arti ka time horaha he..

RAMU - ji malkin..

NAVYA - ramu kaka...

Turns navya.. Here our heroine comes. Looking a perfect bahu. Wearing pink shiffon sari with big pearl earings, matching bangles and mangalsutra and sindoor on her mang. Open hairs adding beauty to her.

NAVYA - kaka.. Kitni bar kaha he, aap mjhse umar ne bade he.. Navya kahi ye. Mjhe acha lagega..

RAMU - thk he Navya bitiya..

MANI - bhabi... Suniye na.. Isme aur kya jodu?

Called mani who was sitting nearby making grocery list.. Navya goes near her and checked the list...

NAVYA - chawal, ata, besan, tel, chakkar, chai, dal... Dal?? 8 kilo.. He bhagwan mani. Tu janti he dal ka bhav? Kitni mehengi hogai he.. 8 kilo nahi 5 kilo likh..

MANI - ji bhabi

NAVYA - aur sun jo tune bornvita likha he na uski jagah horlicks likh wo bhi chocolate flavour.. Rahul ko wohi acha lagta hai..

MANI - thk he bhabi..

NAVYA - AUR tune chandan likha..

MANI - haye.. Me to bhul gayi.

NAVYA - mani.. Kya tu b.. Janti he na dadi ko chandan chahiye hota he pooja k liye.. 4 packet likh de..

RAMU - navya bitiya.. Ek bat kahu.. Chota muh badi bat kehta hu,tum sabke liye itna sochti ho, kabhi apne liye b socha karo

NAVYA - kaka, apko kya lagta he ye sab Me sabke liye karti hu. Nahi ye sab me apne liye karti hu. Mjhe acha lagta he sabko khush rakhna.. Jab mera parivaar khush rahega, tab hi to me khush rahungi na..

MANI - ramu kaha.. Navya bhabi he hi aisi. Pichle 5 salo me pure parivar ko inki adat hogayi he..

Navya smiled..

NAVYA - chal ab jaldi hath chala.. Me sabko chai dekar ati hu.. Lochan bhaiyya.. Chaliye..

She goes near mandir where dadi was doing pooja...

NAVYA - good morning dadi

She touches her feet

DADI - kya ashirvad du meri bacchi ko

NAVYA - yahi ki me hamesha sabko khush rakh saku.

DADI - tathastu.

They both laugh

NAVYA - lijiye apki jyada dudh wali chay..

DADI - thank you so much..

NAVYA - dadi, frnd ko koi thanks bolta he kya..

Dadi touched her face and she lefts going upstairs..

Knock.. Knock...

SUGANDHA - ajao..

NAVYA - good morning ma good morning papa

She took blessing of om and sugandha..

NAVYA - papa - ye lijiye apki kam chini wali chai as instructed by ma

Om and navya looks at sugandha while ahe smiles.. OM looks at navya in disbelief

NAVYA - don't worry papa.. Malai dali he..

Winks navya while om becomes happy

OM - thank you so much beta. Nahi to teri ma, diet karwa k mjhe papad bana de..

SUGANDHA - kya bate horahi he bahu sasur me..

NAVYA - kuch nahi ma.. Ye lijiye apki chai.. Acha ma mene grocery ki list bana di he. Aur ritika k god bharai ka saman b likha he aap ek bar dekh lijiye fir me anant ko de dungi wo office jate time de jayega mall me..

SUGANDHA - beta agar tune banaya he to dekhne ki kya zarurat.. Mjhe meri bahu par pura bharosa he..

Navya smiles and go from there while om and sugandha proudly smiles looking at each other..

Navya goes in rama and mohan room... There rama was running behind piya to tie her choti...

RAMA - are bandariya ki bachee ruk.. Meri ma q tang kar rahi he..

MOHAN - kamal he Rama.. Tum khudko bandariya bol rahi ho..

RAMA - kya aap b.. Dekhiye na apki beti ko.. School jane me der horahi he.. Aur apka ye kumbkaran nahayi nahi ab tak..

Navya looks at rahul who was playing games..

NAVYA - rahul.. Tumhe pata he mene newspaper me padha tha, jo bache subah jaldi nahate he wo virat kohli bante he..

RAHUL - really badi chachi?

NAVYA - ha.. Tumhe banna he ki nahi..

He nodded in yes..

NAVYA - to jao jaldi apne room me naha lo..

Rahul went from there..

NAVYA - piya.. Mummy ko tang nahi karte beta.. Chalo jaldi.. Me tumhare liye chocolate milk layi hu.. Pehele choti bandh lo

Rama said thanks to navya and tie hair of piya..

NAVYA - bhaiyya chai

MOHAN - thank you so much navya.. Aaj tumhare wajah se rama ka BP bach gaye

RAMA - thank you navya nahi to ye bacche.. Mjhe chain se rehne nahi dete..

NAVYA - it's k bhabi.. Lijiye chai.. Jaldi niche aajyiye.. Ye rahul aur piya ka dudh..

Navya goes from there.. She and lochan goes in Navita room...

Navita was talking on phone.. Navin was cleaning the room and making harsh ready.. Navya becomes sad seeing this..

NAVYA - jiju.. Chai...

NAVIN - are thank you so much navya. Tumhare hath ki chai na piyu to subah nahi hoti..

NAVYA - jiju.. Kya aap b..

HARSH - good morning mami..

NAVYA - are mera baccha.. Good morning.. Dudh piyega na..

Navya gives milk to harsh and goes near Navita..

NAVYA - Navita..

Navita stops her from her hand saying her to wait

NAVITA - ji Mr Mittal.. Bilkul.. Presentation ready he.. Office me milte he..

She keeps the phone and take long breath...

NAVITA - do navya.. Iski mjhe zarurat he

NAVTA - Navita.. Din bhar kam karti ho.. Harsh aur jiju ko b time do

NAVITA - time ho tab na navya.. Office me kitna kam rehta he

NAVYA - par Navita

NAVITA - chodo ye sab.. Acha suno. Harsh k liye paratha me ghee mat dalna ok..

Navya smile and goes from there.. She goes in ranbir and ritika room..

RANBIR - good morning bhabi..

NAVYA - ranbir ye kya.. Tum ready nahi hue.. Late horaha he

RANBIR - janta hu bhabi.. Kya karu Ritika ko kal nind hi nahi arahi thi uske sath jagna pada..

Navya goes towards ritika and wakes her up..

NAVYA - ritika Utho.. Pooja k liye late horaha he.. Dadi xhillayegi..

RITZ - bhabi.. Ritika nahi.. Ritz..

NAVYA - acha baba ritz.. Ab chalo.. Ye lo coffee tumhari.. Aur suno breakfast k pehele tumhari tablet le lena.. Yad he na ranbir..

RANBIR - ji bhabi yad he

She goes from there.. She enters in garden where nimisha was doing exercise...

NIMISHA - hello bhabi.. Good morning

NAVYA - good morning nanad ji.. Challiye chai pi lijiye..

Nimisha stops and take tea cup from her..

NIMISHA - bhabi isme...

NAVYA - ha yad he.. Isme shakar ki jagah honey he.. Aur dudh kam.. Ok

Nimisha hugs her

NIMISHA - I luv u bhabi

NAVYA - pagal...

She hoes from there... In ananya room.. She was sleeping silently...

NAVYA - good morning meri rajkumari.. Utho...

She makes ananya wake

ANANYA - mamma.. Pata he mene dream dekha

NAVYA - acha kya dream dekha

ANANYA - mene dekha ki hamare ghar me bht badi party he and v all r enjoying and apka and papa ka dance b he..

Navya smiles listening her beautiful story..

NAVYA - chalo ab bate nand.. Jao brush karo aur milk piyo. Lochan bhaiyya.. Ananya ko dudh de dijiye.. Me anant ko chai dekar ati hu

LICHAN - ji didi...

Navya goes in their room.. She searches anant but he was not there.. Suddenly someone hugs her from behind..

NAVYA - Ouch... Anant... Chai gir jayegi

ANANT - sshh... Chup... Tum kaha chali gayi thi subah subah... I was missing you...

Navya blushes and makes him face her..

NAVYA - tum b na.. Ek beti k bap ho fir b romance gaya nahi..

ANANT - jiski apki jaisi patni ho, uska romance kaise jayega.. Acha navya suno na... Aaj hum bahar chalte he

NAVYA - anant bahar...

ANANT - ha navya kitna time hogaya he. Me office se jaldi nikal jaunga.. Wohi jayenge hum.. Hamare jagah wo romantic park...

NAVYA - thk he... Ab jao jaldi chai piyo... Niche jana he arti ka time horaha he

ANANT - Ruko to

He came near her ti kiss when...

DADI - navya... Jaldi aao beta

Anant makes face while navya smiles...

NAVYA - bhul gaye... Humare yaha family b he..

Anant smiled and leaves her. She also smiles and goes from there...

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lovelypari19

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Posted: 9 years ago

Superb and nice concept

it feeling so good for reading a

story of this lovely couple after a long time

plz everyone come back

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Saumya96

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Posted: 9 years ago

All were gathered on dinning table for breakfast.. Navya and rama were serving with nimisha and some servants...

RITIKA - bhabi mjhe bas juice chahiye, kuch khane ka man to he nahi..

NAVYA - thk he.. Mene tere liye apple juice banaya he.. Le

She serves ritz..

RITIKA - wow.. Thank you bhabi..

SUGANDHA - acha suniye sab log.. Parso ritz ki god bharai he. Isliye mjhe lagta he hum sabko kam bat lena chahiye.. Q ma?

DADI - sahi kaha tune sugandha.. Om navya ne puri list bana li he mene aur sugandha ne dekh b li he, hum sabko ab zimedari leni chahiye..

RAMA - ha.. Navya akeli thodi Sab karegi.. Q Navita

NAVITA - bhabi.. Mjhse ye ghar k kam nahi honge.. Kuch bahar ka kam ho to boliye...

All gets dissappointed by navita statement.. Seeing this navin said

NAVIN - don't worry bhabi.. Me hu na.. Me aap logo ki help karunga..

OM - thk he bhai.. To ye tay raha.. Ritz ki god bharai k liye hum sab navya ki help karenge..

SUGANDHA - ha to suniye, om aur mohan tum dono ko caterers ko dkh lijiye.. Menu se leke sab kuch..

MOHAN - thk he ma.. Dont worry.. Hum sambhal lenge. He na papa

OM nodded in yes..

SUGANDHA - ma aap pooja ki smagri bata dijiye me Panditji ko bata dungi

DADI - thk he bahu

SUGANDHA - rama tum aur nimisha mehemano ko invite karne ka kam karo

NIMISHA - ok mom

SUGANDHA - aur Navita..

Navita was busy on cell..

SUGANDHA - Navita...

NAVITA - ha... Ha mom

SUGANDHA - tu flowers k arrangements kar lena.. Samjhi

NAVITA - thk he don't worry

DADI - sugandha wo decorations.. Wo kon dekhega

ANANT - don't worry dadi wo me dkh lunga.. Aap nishint rahiye

SUGANDHA - ye bilkul sahi rahega

RANBIR - par ma.. Me kya karu

DADI - tu teri biwi ka dhyan rakh.. Samjha

All laugh

SUGANDHA - aur damad ji.. Aap mithai wale ko ladoo ka order de dijiyega

NAVYA - ma.. Uski zarurat nahi hai.. Mene decide kiya he ki.. God bharai k liye ladoo me khud banaungi

All becomes surprised

OM - navya beta.. Itne sare mithai.. Kaise tum

DADI - ha beta.. Tum tha jaogi

RAMA - navya kam se kam 100 mehmaan honge.. Itne ladoo kaise tu...

NAVYA - don't worry bhabi.. Mjhe chalega.. Waise b mene bhagwan se mannat mangi thi.. Sonography k reports agar normal hue to me mithai apne hatho se banaungi

All smile while ritz gets tears, anant gave a proud smile

RITZ - thank you bhabi

Navya smiles looking at her

NAVIN - aap sab bilkul chinta mat kijiye.. Me navya k sath uski help karunga..

NAVYA - thank you jiju..

OM - chalo to all decided na..

MOHAN - ha to chalo.. Sab kam me lag jao..

All men's leave to go office and Navita... Anant goes near navya and whispers

ANANT - yad he na biwi.. Sharp 6 baje.. Bhulna mat

NAVYA smile..

ANANT - k... Bye.. Love u

Anant goes from there and navya shyly smiled...

NAVYA - are baccho... Chalo school jane me late horaha he.. Rahul, piya, harsh.. Chalo chalo...

ANANYA - mumma... Me kab school jaungi

NAVYA - are meri little princess.. Aap b jaldi school jayengi.. Next year se

ANANYA - matlab tab me big girl ho jaungi na

NAVYA - ha.. Ekdum big.

Navya takes ananya in her arm and goes in kitchen...

NAVIN - navya.. Tum mjhe bata do me tumhari kaise help karu

NAVYA - jiju.. Kya aap b.. Aap bas arrangements dekhiye.. Me kar lungi

NAVIN - navya, Navita Waise b mjhe kuch layak nahi samajhti kisi k liye.. Agar ab tum b mjhe layak nahi samajhti to...

NAVYA - jiju aap ye kaisi bate kar rahe he.. Me to apko taklif... Khair agar apko ye sab karne se acha lagta hai to bilkul meri help kijiye..

NAVIN - thank you so much navya

NAVYA - thanks mat boliye jiju.. Acha aap mera ek kam kijiye.. Laddoo k liye motichur, ghee, dry fruits aur shakkar bazar se le ayiye.. Tab tak me tayyariya karti hu.. Thk he

NAVIN - thk he.. Abhi le aya..

Navin went from there. Navya turns to see sugandha standing there

SUGANDHA - navya... Navita damad ji k sath thk bartav nahi karti.. He na

NAVYA - nahi ma aisa nahi hai.. Navita ka behaviour to aap janti he na.. Wo bas thodi nadan he.. Jhagda hua hoga dono me. Aur ma jhagde kin pati patniyo me nahi hote

SUGANDHA - fir b navya.. Navita ko aise nahi karna chahiye

NAVYA - ma aap yu hi tension le rahi he.. Fir bhi apko aisa lagta he to.. Me bat karungi Navita se...

Sugandha caresses her hair and goes from there.. Navya's cell rang

NAVYA - hello

ANANT - navya suno na.. Tum wo red suit hr na, jo mene tumhe valentines day pe diya tha.. Wo pehenna

NAVYA # - anant tum kuch jyada hi excited nahi ho..

ANANT - how unromantic navya.. Yaha me itna excited hu aur waha tum

NAVYA - acha baba thk he... Me pehenungi

ANANT - vry gud.. Aur jaldi ana.. Me wait karunga..

NAVYA - thk he ab rakho.. Office me dhyan do

ANANT - k... Love u

NAVYA - hm bye

ANANT - wah kya reply he.. Navya kabhi to bolo

NAVYA - anant.. Tum Na.. Rakho phone

ANANT - navya... Suno to...

Navya keep the cell and smile while anant patted cell on his head smiling...

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ankita20

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Posted: 9 years ago

lovely concept and story! l=waiting for more updates😊

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loveshaMya40

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Posted: 9 years ago

beautiful concept! would love to read! cont soon :))

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sassi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awsummm mm plz do update more feeling bad fr anant becharay k lye time hi nahi

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Saumya96

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It was around 5 in evening... Navya was working in kitchen...

NIMISHA - navya bhabi kaha ho

Enters nimisha..

NAVYA - kya hua nimmi

NIMMI - bhabi, anant bhai ka call aya tha. Apko yad dilane k liye bola he ki 6 bajne wale he

Navya looks at watch and smile

NAVYA - ye anant b na

NIMISHA - kya hua bhabi

NAVYA - wo nimisha actually...

Navya tells nimmi about their date and how exciting anant was..

NIMMI - wow how romantic... Bhabi waha bhai apke liye itna bechain horaha he aur yaha aap kitchen me.. Jayiye aur tayar ho jayiye.. Yaha me sambhal lungi

NAVYA - thk he

Navya went in her room.. She open her cupboard and took out the dress which anant was telling her to wear. It was red colour anarkali with golden work on it.. Simple yet elegant.. She dress it and keeps her hair open. She wears golden jhumkas with bracelet and anklet. She wore her heels and headed downstairs...

NIMISHA - kya bat he... Bht chehek rahi he aap to

NAVYA - nimmi... Tu b na

Suddenly Navita enters talking on phone..

SUGANDHA - Navita sun to..

She kept the call and look at sugandha

NAVITA - ha ma bolo

SUGANDHA - tune flowers k liye bol diya na.. Bill de to

NAVITA - flowers... Konse flowers...

SUGANDHA - Navita.. Dont tell me.. Tu bhool gayi

NAVITA - ma aap ye kya...

Suddenly she remembers that she was given a responsibility to order flowers for God bharai..

NAVITA - sry ma.. Wo itna kam tha ki

SUGANDHA - itna kam tha ki tu bhul gayi.. Had karti he Navita.. Ghar par dhyan hota b he tera ki nahi.. Bas kam kam.. Na damad ji par dhyan he na harsh par. Chota kam diya tha wo b nahi kiya

Sugandha started shouting on her

NAVITA - stop it mom.. I know me bhul gayi.. Bt thk he na.. Koi jurm to nahi kiya na.. Aur waise b mere pati aur bache ki zimedari mujh par he qki me kamati hu apka damad nahi

Sugandha become shock with navya and nimisha

NAVYA - Navita.. Ye kya bol rahi ho.. Itni choti bat par tum...

NAVITA - tum to chup hi raho navya.. Ye jo tum perfect bahu bankar ghumti ho na usi ka natija he ki mjhe ye log sunate he.. Aur mom apko ye zimedari deni hi thi to navya ko de deti ya apni kisi bahu ko.. Ye log to ghar par hi rehti he, khali..

SUGANDHA - Navita...

Navita throws her cell and goes from there

NAVYA - ma.. Aap chinta mat kijiye.. Waise b Navita sahi keh rahi thi.. Hum log ghar par hi hote he to hume hi ye sambhal lena chahiye tha. Bechari Navita kya kya karegi

SUGANDHA - nahi navya.. Had he ye.. Use apni zimedari samajhni hogi..

NAVYA - chodiye na ma.. Acha me ek kam karti hu flowers k shop me jakar order de ati hu

SUGANDHA - par beta.. Wo to itna dur he.. Tu kab jayegi aur kab ayegi..

NAVYA - it's k ma.. Me chali jaungi

NAVYA - par bhabi, apko to...

Navya indicates her to keep quite

SUGANDHA - navya tum kahi ja rahi thi... Rehne do me om ko

NAVYA - ma... Me kaha jaungi... Aap wo chodiye me jaldi jakar ati hu

Sugandha goes from there.. Nimisha looks at navya while she smiles

NAVYA - it's k.. Koi bat nahi.. Date to hoti hi rahegi.. Par family... It comes first.. Ryt

NIMISHA - bhabi.. Ur such a great..

NAVYA - chal ab me jati hu.. Sun.. Tu ananya ko dekh lena warna rona chalu kar degi..

Nimmi nodded in yes and navya goes from there..

There anant was waiting for navya in love garden.. He looks at watch it was 6:30..

ANANT - ye navya kaha reh gayi

He kept on calling her bt it was out of coverage area.. There navya was worried

NAVYA - oh god.. Me to anant ko batana bhul hi gayi.. Wait kar raha hoga..

She takes her cell to find out that it was switched off due to battery low

NAVYA - he bhagwan.. Ab kya karu

ANANT - switch off... Pehele to out of coverage area aur ab switch off.. Kahi navya koi problem... Nahi nahi... Ghar par karta hu

RAMA - hello

ANANT - bhabi.. Navya he kya

RAMA - anant.. Wo navya to bahar gayi he

ANANT - matlab wo nikal gayi.. Bt wo abhi tak ayi nahi bhabi

RAMA - ayi nahi matlab... Tum b jane wale the kya flowers order k liye

ANANT - kya... Kaha

Rama tells him everything which happened at home..

ANANT - thk he bhabi.. Me ghar ata hu

Anant kept the call and smile in himself..

ANANT - navya... Tum b na.. Mjhe bata deti..

He nodded in disbelief and left from there...

It was 11 in night.. Navya came.. She opened the main door as she was having spare keys.. All were slept because it was too late.. She goes near dinning and took one glass when she heard some noise from kitchen.. She goes in kitchen and smile looking at the scene.. Anant was making food warm for navya..

ANANT - navya.. Jaldi fresh hojao.. Me khana serve karta hu.. Jao

NAVYA - sry anant.. Wo hua ye ki

ANANT - navya.. Mjhe pata he sab

He said holding her hands

ANANT - jab tum nahi ayi tab mene ghar phone kiya tha rama bhabi ne bataya.. Aur tumne jo b kiya bilkul sahi tha

NAVYA - ek bat puchu

Anant nodded in yes

NAVYA - tum mjhe itna ache se kaise samajh lete ho

Anant smile and makes navya close by pulling her from waist

ANANT - training le raha hu.. Mere biwi se

Navya smiled and anant kissed her on forehead..

ANANT - chalo ab khana kha lo.. Ananya ko mene khila diya he aur wo so b gayi he. Ab jaldi chalo bht bhuk lagi he