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my fav ff...❤️ i loved it yaaar..rooz update kiya karoo na..do cont ssooon
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CONTINUED...
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It was evening. Sugandha and navya was busy in kitchen work. Dadi was instructing all servants sitting in hall.
NIMMI - bhabi... Bhabi kaha ho
DADI - uffo q chilla rahi he
NIMMI - dadi bhabi kaha he. Wo mjhe tayar karne wali thi.
NAVYA - bol nimmi
NIMMI - bhabi chalo na mjhe tayar hone me help karo
NAVYA - acha tu chal me kitchen ka zara sa kam karke ati hu
Nimisha went in room and navya goes in kitchen.
SUGANDHA - are navya tu ja beta nimmi ki help kar me yaha dkh lungi
NAVYA - it's k ma. Me karti hu na. Aurto me gayi to aap akele kaise karengi
RITZ - me hu na
Ritz come in kitchen with something bags
RITZ - ye lijiye aunty Sara saman jo apne lane k liye kaha tha
SUGANDHA - thank you beta
RITZ - it's k aunty. Aur navya tu ja nimmi ki help kar me aunty k sath hu
NAVYA - ye thk rahe ga
Navya went from there and goes in nimmi room. She was shocked to see whole room untidy..
NAVYA - he bhagwan nimmi... Kya he ye sab Sara room bikhra pada he
NIMMI - kya karu bhabi ek b dhang ki kapde nahi mil rahe. Kya pehenu. Me achi lagungi ya nahi. Unpar mera kya impression hoga. Oh god...
NAVYA - nimmi... Shant hojao. Aur yaha betho
She makes her sit on bed.
NAVYA - nimmi, bilkul tension lene ki zarurat nahi he tumhe.. Tum bht sundar ho, tumhe extra kuch karne ki Koi zarurat nahi he. Aur rahi bat un logo ki tumhe pasand karne ki to me tumhe bata du ki meri pyari si nanad itni achi aur pyari he ki unhe dekhte hi pasand ajayegi...
Nimmi hugs her and she also hugs her back
NAVYA - ab chalo utho, me tumhe tayar karti hu...
Nimmi smiled and navya makes herbal ready...
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Anant and om came back from office and ranbir also came with them. In hall all were present except navya and nimisha. Anant eyes were searching for navya.
OM - ye nimmi aur navya kaha he
SUGANDHA - wo navya nimmi ko tayar kar rahi he
OM - acha.. Sugandha sari tayyariya hogayi na
DADI - tu befikar hoja om. Teri bahu ne sari tayyariya bht ache se ki he. Subah se lagi he sare kam karne me air ab tak kam hi kar rahi he
Anant smiled hearing compliment from dadi for his wife...
SUGANDHA - ab aap sab b jakar fresh hojayiye. Wo log ate hi honge..
OM - ha bilkul.. Bas zara si chai mil jati to..
RITZ - me lati hu uncle...
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Anant goes in his room. He opened his cupboard to see his clothes and got a smile remembering the morning incident.. He took towel and turned around but gets bumped with navya. She was about to fall but he catches her in time by holding here waist.
ANANT - navya tum thik ho na. Lagi to nahi
NAVYA - aabb.. Na... Nahi anant... Wo me... Me thik hu
She was finding difficult to talk with him because of morning..
He makes herb stand properly
ANANT - nimmi tayar hogayi
NAVYA - hmm
Still she'll was not seeing him.
ANANT - thank you navya
NAVYA - kis liye
ANANT - wo dadi aur ma tumhari bht tarif kar rahi thi.. Tumne Itna sab kuch kiya
NAVYA - it's k anant. Nimisha meri b to kuch lagti he..
They both smiled looking at each other
NAVYA - aap pehele tayar hojayiye.
ANANT - k
...
After some time guests came in bajpayee house. Every one welcome them
MR VERMA - Namaste
OM - Namaste.. Ayiye na bethiye
MR VERMA - ye he meri patni
MRS VERMA - Namaste
MR VERMA - Aur ye he hamara beta nikhil
Nikhil takes every one blessing... They all talked about each other family for some time
DADI - mjhe lagta he nimisha ko bulana chahiye
SUGANDHA - ji ma..
Sugandha give signal to navya android she'll and ritz goes to bring her... Nimmi came wearing a yellow colour saree with lite jewellery.. She was looking very cute and nikhil was lost in her. She'll took every one blessing and sit near om and dadi
MRS VERMA - tum to bht sundar ho beta...
Nimmi smiled litely
MRS VERMA - tumhare bare sab janta he hum. Bas Itna hi tumhe bolna chahte he ki tum hum sab ko pasand ho.. Bas tumhari soch kya he wo dkhna chahti hu. Hamare parivar ko tum apna paogi na
Nimmi looks at navya and navya gave her an assured smile. Anant looks at this and he knew whatever nimmi is going to say not had been told to her by his love navya...
NIMMI - aunty, parivar ko jodne ka kam aura use todne ka kam dono ek bahu karti he... Meri dadi kehti he ek bahu jo parivar ko jod kar rakh sake wo ek adarsh bahu hoti he. Me puri koshish karungi ki me apne parivar ko jod k rakh saku...
Every one got impressed by her
MR VERMA - are wah beta.. Is jamane ki ladki hone k bad b tumhare soch bht achi he
NIMMI - actually uncle ye sab mene apni bhabi se sikha he
Navya was surprised
NIMMI - ha uncle ye meri bhabi ki di hui Sikh he jo mene apnayi he. Me roz apni bhabi ko dekhti hu aur ek achi bahu aur achi patni kaise bante he ye sikhti hu.. See is my inspiration..
Every one praise navya and anant felt proud...
MR VERMA - to Mr bajpayee. Hum ye rishta pakka samjhe
Om looks at dadi and she nodded in yes
OM - ji bilkul pakka samjhiye
They hug and every one share sweet... All were happy and was celebrating...

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Awesome update. Waiting for their confession! Do cont. Soon! :)
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CONTINUED...
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SUGANDHA - he bhagwan kitna Sara kam he. Ek shadi k ghar me kitne kam hote he
DADI - sugandha, abhi se q chinta kar rahi ho, Panditji ne shadi ka murat 3 mahine bad ka nikala he
SUGANDHA - tabhi b ma kam to lakho he na. Ek lauti beti he hamari, uski shadi perfect honi chahiye.. He na navya?
The three ladies were sitting in hall making list of work as nimmi wedding is going to b after three months. But navya was sitting upset from morning...
DADI - navya...
Dadi patted on her back
NAVYA - huh?
SUGANDHA - kaha dhyan he beta tera? Kabse bula rahi hu
NAVYA - ha ma wo me bas aise hi
DADI - tabyet to thk he na
NAVYA - dadi wo bas sar dard kar raha he
SUGANDHA - sar dard kar raha he? To me anant se kehti hu wo tjhe doctor k pass lejayega
NAVYA - nahi ma wo busy honge office k kamo me. Me dawai leti hu thk ho jaungi
DADI - acha thk he tu ja aram kar
Navya went from there
SUGANDHA - bht kam kar rahi he bechari. Thak gayi hogi
DADI - hmm...
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Navya went in her room and close the door. She'll sit on bed and sudden tear started coming from her eyes... She covered her mouth so that no one could hear her cry... Suddenly her phone rang
NAVYA - hello
PRAKASH - navya...
NAVYA - papa...
Navya again starts crying hearing prakash voice
VANDANA - chup ho ja navya.. Kisine agar tumhe rote hue sun liya to wajah puchenge... Kya Jawab degi tu
NAVYA - ma... Ma me... Me kya karu...
PRAKASH - navya shant ho jao... Plz apne papa ki bat nahi manegi?
NAVYA - hmm
PRAKASH - acha bata, meri pyari si bacchi kaisi he
NAVYA - dukhi hu papa
She again cried
VANDANA - navya meri bat sun... Ro mat q ki ab tu shadi shuda he, ab tera kisi aur k liye rona thk nahi.. Chup ho ja
NAVYA - ma me apse badme bat karti hu
VANDANA - thk he. Acha sirf ek bat bata
NAVYA - hmm
VANDANA - tune anant ko bataya
NAVYA - nahi ma
VANDANA - batana b mat, unhe bura lagega
NAVYA - me rakhti hu ma. Bye.. Bye papa
PRAKASH - apna khyal rakhna bete... Bye
She kept phone and again starts crying... After some time her phone again rang...
NAVYA - hello
ANANT - navya?
She immediately stop crying and wipe her tear.. She takes some deep breath and again talk with anant
ANANT - hello... Hello navya, u there?
NAVYA - ha anant boliye na
ANANT - tum ro rahi ho
Navya become shocked as how he knows she was crying. She control herself and tried to speak
NAVYA - nahi to... Me... Me q roungi. Mjhe... Kya... Mjhe kya hua he anant
ANANT - acha to tumhari awaz aisi q arahi he
NAVYA - wo... Wo ha.. Me so rahi thi na isliye... Isliye awaz aisi ayi hogi
ANANT - so rahi thi, q tumhari tabyet to thk he na
NAVYA - actually mera sar dard kar raha he isliye
ANANT - wat, navya tumne mjhe phone q nahi kiya. Me abhi ata hu tumhe doctor k pas le jane
NAVYA - nahi... Matlab... Uski zarurat nahi he... Me ab thk hu. Thodi der aram karungi to aur thk hojaungi
ANANT - pakka?
NAVYA - ha anant... Pakka..
ANANT - k bye..
NAVYA - bye...
Anant was still worried as he knows she was 100 percent crying... He decided to ask sugandha. He enquired at home but sugandha gave him the same answer which navya gave. So he decided to call deepak and ask
Here deepak and meeta were in prakash and vandana home.
DEEPAK - anant ka phone he
MEETA - kya, dkhiye unhe kuch mat boliyega.. Bhaisahab bata rahe the ki navya need unhe kuch nahi bataya he
DEEPAK - hmm
He goes aside and receive the phone
DEEPAK - hello
ANANT - Namaste papa, me anant...
DEEPAK - ha anant, bolo bete
ANANT - kaise he aap papa
DEEPAK - me... Me thk... Me thk hu bete. Q
ANANT - nahi wo bht din hogaye, apse aur ma se mile nahi. Soch raha tha aaj sham ko navya ko lekar ghar ajau
DEEPAK - nahi nahi.. Aaj nahi
Deepak shouted and anant was amazed...
DEEPAK - mera matlab he ki aaj me aur meeta ghar par nahi he. To tum dono kal ajao.. Waise b kal Sunday he to kal lunch hamare sath hi karna
ANANT - it's k papa.. Fir kal milte he
DEEPAK - k beta... Bye
ANANT - bye
Anant kept the phone but his doubt grew more
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Anant came from office. He noticed navya was looking very dull and unhappy... After dinner he goes in room to find navya standing in balcony looking at moon. He goes near her
ANANT - navya...
NAVYA - hmm
ANANT - wo me soch raha tha ki...
Suddenly he noticed she was still lost in moon
ANANT - navya...
NAVYA - huh... Ha anant.. Sry wo mera dhyan nahi tha.. To kya soch rahe the aap?
Anant holds her both hands in his hands and looks at her
ANANT - hamesha ye q zaruri he navya ki tum meri bat suno. Me kya kehta hu, kya Sochta hu ye janna Itna q zaruri he. Kya Kabhi tum mjhse kuch nahi keh sakti
She looked at him. Tear started coming from her eyes. Without wasting a second he hugs her. She was crying hugging him and was patting softly on her back...
ANANT - aisa kya hua he navya jo tum mjhe nahi bata sakti. Aaj tak mene apne sare dukh tumhare sath bate he kya tum apne dukh nahi bat sakti. Hum sathi he navya... Jeewan sathi to har ek mushkil k ghadi me sath hote he... Mjhe batao...
Navya wipe her tear and anant makes herb sit near window..
NAVYA - Aaj... Aaj aditya ki barsi he...
Anant was surprised hearing this and now he understood why deepak was not at home and regretting him to come
NAVYA - aditya ki dusri barsi he aaj. Do sal pehele isi din meri unse shadi hui thi aur... Aur isi din wo is duniya se...
She cried and anant hugs her. She was cuddling his waist as he was standing and she was sitting. He slowly patted on her head and caresses her hair
NAVYA - subah papa aur maji ka phone aya tha. Unki awaz sunte hi me ro bethi.. Akhe bhar ayi aisa laga ki shayad unki is halat ki zimedar me hu
ANANT - sshh shant ho jao navya... Bas chup... Tum ghar nahi gayi? Aaj to ghar par barsi ka havan hoga na
NAVYA - himmat hi nahi kar payi jane ki... Waha sab log hote jo mjhe gunegar k roop me dekhte. Ma papa ko char bate sunate..
ANANT - navya... Tum aisa q sochti ho..
He sit beside her
ANANT - janti ho tumhe aaj ghar jana chahiye tha. Aaj uncle aunty ko sabse jyada tumhari zarurat thi. Q ki ab tum hi to unki beti ho, unka Sahara ho. He na
NAVYA - hmm
ANANT - Aur ab mjhe batao, mjhe subah tumne bataya q nahi, hum dono sath me chalte
Navya looked at him
NAVYA - mjhe laga apko bura lagega ki me aditya ki bat karti hu. Q ki ab me...
ANANT - q ki ab tum meri patni ho?
He completed her seNtence
ANANT - navya, tum ab tak mjhe Samajh nahi payi, apne dil se pucho kya me aisa kehta?
Navya nodded in no
ANANT - fir?
NAVYA - sry
ANANT - ohho.. Ab sry q bol rahi ho...
NAVYA - aise hi
ANANT - acha thk he. Ab tum so jao hume kal ma papa k yaha jana he
NAVYA - ma papa k yaha
ANANT - actually dopehar ko tumse bat karke aisa laga ki tum pareshan ho isliye mene papa ko phone kiya aur mjhe wo b pareshan lage. To bato bato me unhe hume kal lunch pe bula liya
Navya kept on looking at him as how caring is he about her. He tells her to sleep and he himself caresses her hair and make her to sleep peacefully...


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