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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update meru.. 👏👏😃 Loved it to the core dear 😳😳 Anya ke feeling ko jagao yaar plzz 😆😳 coz want some romantic updates yaar plzz.. 😉😳 jaldi updates dogi means next update aaj hi chahiye ok? 😡😒 will be waiting for ur updates.. love u.. 😛
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thank you sooo much update and it was amazing update.
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Originally posted by: -meru-

sorry itna wait karwane kay liye... but ab paaka zyada late updt nhi karun gii...😛 big thanks for liking my updates...😳

Part 11...😛



Yeh kya kya soch liya tou ne anant?? Navya sirf aut sirf teri dost hai aur kch nhi...aur woh...he paused..he goes near window and totally lost in his thought...navya kissi se aur se pyaar karti hai kal hi tou btaya uss ne tjhe anant...phr kyun tum aisa soch rahe ho?? Thousands of question run in his mind...just then someone placed her hand on his shoulder...he turned and shocked to se navya over there...kab tak jayein ge hum?? She asked in excitement

Anant :kahan???😕

Navya hit him on his chest and said in anger :bhool gaye..kaha tha na kal tm ne mjhe poora city ghoomane lay kay jao ge??? Bolo??

Anant: oh haan sorry mere dimag se nikal gayaa...

Navya : hmm its ok...waise tum thode pareshaan lag rahe ho?? Tum theek ho na??😕

Anant: haan mein theek hun...woh navya..n navya tum ready ho jao na..

Navya : haan bus 10min doo mjhe mein abhi aayi...

Anant smiled and she left...after 5 mins navyaa come again in his room..she is still in same dresss...anant asked : kya hoa ready nhi hoyi tum???

Navya : haan woh mein camera laayi thi...she think anant doesn't aware of such latest stuff...she said with big smile : yeh lo camera...hum iss se apni pics click karein ge...

Anant : laughed in heart😆

Navya : dekho iss button ko yahan se press karein...yeh mera digital camera hai...agar tum yahan se click karoo gen a tou pics aur achi...anant didn't say anything...he stood silently hearing navya...he said in mind : pagal hai yeh!!!!

At the same time priya come there...navya said to him : tm samjh gaye na pics kaise click karein ge??? Priya to navya : yeh tmhara camera hai??

Navya : haan dii acha hai na??😛

Priya : haan acha hai...anant mein ne tmhare doono cameras nikal diye hain?? Jo chahe le jaana😃

Navya : doono cameras???😕

Priya : haan aik digital aur aik professional camera😉...navya : shocked😲

She said : anant tmhare paas??

Priya : arre anant tou professional photographer hai...mera bhai har cheez mei perfect hai kyun anant ;)😉

Anant : dii aap bhi na...navya tum abhi tak taayar nhi hoyi???

Navya : haan woh mein??

Anant :navya go...warna raat yaheen ho jaye gii...she lowered her eyes and left!!! Anant smiled at her innocene...😳

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Yaar kahan reh gayi yeh larkii???? He is waiting outside...on his bike but navya still not come there...he is wearing blue t-shirt with black jeans...and as usual he is looking damn handsome...

'Yaar navya jaldii aao na''he said in anger

Navya : haan bus aarahi hun...

Anant ; acha jaldii aao mein zaara abhi aata hun...he left...navya dressed up in a beautiful western dresss...and reached near his bike...she looked gorgeous...with his open hair and light makeup...navya eyes searched for him but he was found no where...at the same time she saw everyone on the road staring her...navya: pta nhi kahan chala gaya yeh...everyone on road was staring her as she look like an alien...yeh sab mjhe aise kyun dekh rahe hain...she was looking extremely beautiful in this short dresss...her eyes was finding only one person...''anant''

Suddenly a cool breeze hit her skin...she can feel anant presence here...she turned

'Navya yeh''...and he paused

Her flying hairs,her bare legs,her milky skin...anant become totally lost in her besuty...he is mesmerized by the sight of navya in the dress and how beautiful she looks in it...he cannot just take his eyes of her...navya see's him staring at her and start blushing..she look deeply in his eyes..an intense eyelock with pehlaa pyaar playing in back ground...😳

He slowly come near her and she lowered her eyes...just then a guy come there...oh my god' you are an angel...u r too beautiful...tum Mumbai se aayi ho na..?? wah kya lag rahii ho...

Anant give anger look to him...navya to that guy : oh thanks

Anant saw her and burning like a volcano...excuse me!! Jao yahan se...he said angrily

Navya: but!!

Anant to that guy : i said goo😡

He left...anant to navya :yeh kya pehna hai tum ne???

Navya : kyun achi nhi lag rahi..abhi tou tm mjhe...

Anant: navya yeh Mumbai nhi hai...abhi dekha nhi tum ne woh larka...😡

Navya: par anant???

Anant: par war kch nhi navya jao ja kay dress change kar kay aao...

Navya: kyun yeh acha hai mein aise hi jaon gii...

Anant: navya zid mat karoo mein ne kaha na...

Navya : tum kon hote ho mjhe bolne wale??? Mjhe koi prblm nhi hai tou tmhe kyun??? Tmhe kya farq padhta hai mein kch bhi pehnon...

Anant realized what he is saying to her...: tou kya tum mjhe apna kch nhi samjhtin??? He said with teary eyes...dost ho tum merii...frnd ship band bandha hai tmhe...itna tou haq bnata hai na mera??? Bolo navya???

Navya : mjhe kch nhi sunaa mjhe yeh hi pasand hai mein aise hi jaon gii

Anant: theek hai agar tmhe aise hi jaana hai tou kissi aur kay saath jao mein nhi lay kay jaon ga tmhe...he left in anger...priya was standing there...she listen all their convo and fight...she smiled and goes toward navya...she placed her hand on his shoulder...and spoke softly: ' navya mein jantii hun yeh tmhari life hai...anant ko yeh sab bolne ka koi haq nhi hai..but tum usse galat mat samjho...abhi tum ne dekha na woh larka..plzz navya tum yeh dress change kar lo..mein tmhe koi acha sa dress nikal kay detii hun...

Navya : theek hai dii mein aap kay kehne pe kar rahi hun...

Priya smiled and said :ok😛

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Scene shift to anant...he lay on bed...his eyes filled with tears...kch nhi samjhti hai woh tjhe apna anant..aik acha dost bhi nhi...he closed his teary eyes...just now priya knocked the door...anant wipes his tears...and sat on bed...she too come near him and sit beside him...

'anant tmhe navya kay saath jhagda nhi karna chahiye tha...dekho mein ne bhi usse samjhaya hai aur woh maan gayi hai abhi dress change kar kay aati hai..phr tum doono'' she spoke softly

Nhi dii...he said!! Mera ab kahin jaane ka maan nhi hai aap chali jao uss kay saath...

Priya placed her hand on his shoulder and said : plzz anant mere liyee...apni dii ki baat nhi maano ge???

Anant : par

Priya: par war kch nhi tum ja rahe ho thats final...

At the same time navya enter in his room..di m ready!! She said with big smile...anant looked at her...now she is wearing pink dress looking damn pretty...priya :wow kitni khoobsurat lag rahi ho tum..hai na anant??? She asked

Anant : dii mein bahar wait kar raha hun...he left

Priya: navya jao ab jaldii warna agar tum late bahar nikli you anant...

Navya :hmmm😛

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Anant goes toward bike..he pushed the key in the iginition...navya went and sit beside him...both didn't utter a single word...anant pulled the throttle and the bike accelerated and zoomed forwad with medium speed...navya was sitting quietly on the back seat...clutching anant bike tightly...

Anant braked suddenly to avoid a dog with a death wish...navya fell against him,her legs aligned with his hugging him tight to avoid measuring the road with her body ..he feel her...navya slowly loosen her arms from outside his waist...both looked deeply into each other eyes...with soo much love...

'Sorry ''he spoke

Its ok'' she replied

Navya aage road bohat zyada khaarab hai tum theek se bethoo...he spoke softly

Navya haan mein theek hun...navya held on his shoulder...anant smiled...and she lowered her eyes...they pass from posh colony then from small hut houses...it was such a very beautiful city..navya enjoying the location...navya looked beautiful views and trees go behind them...the road was full of potholes and bumps...navya was bumped into anant due that sudden change in the speed and road...her hair were open and they were disturbing her...anant was getting jasmine flavour shampoo smell as navya's hair was flying...anant drove off the bike speedily and navya held him tight...her hairs wa cont disturbing her anant too notice that..he cont staring her from side mirror...he smiled...she take out band from her hand and tie her hairs with that pony...anant noticing her every action,her all expression...he said in mind'' aise khule hii rehne deti mjhe acha lagta hai'' navya woh'' he was on the edge of saying this to her but his mind don't allow him to do he remembered her word to him'' u don't have right to say me anything''

Navya asked ;tm kch bol??

Anant: nhi kch nhi...

And the cute smile which was on his face from last 15mins faded away...and he was acting like she didn't mean anything to him...she said : hum pehle kahan ja rahe hain????

Anant : (in mind) agar pehle bol diya tou maaza nhi aayega...he said to her: hum pehle jadar galii jayein ge...and he smile...navya : shocked

Jadar galii??? Kitna boring sound kar raha hai😕 ...she said in mind

Pta nhi kahan le kay jaye gay eh mjhe...finally the reached their in half an hour...navya got down and looked at the place...she start making sad faces...there was a lot of hustling and bustling with people roaming around...diffrent food stalls...and schools...anant parked the bike...anant come near her and said : chalna hai yaa yaheen rukne ka iraada hai???

She nodded in no...the walked towards the entrance anant take tickets..they both walked inside...this place was really very beautiful...lots of greenry...benches,fountains...and from far only she saw gol gumbaz...she shocked and said loudly : arre anant yeh tou gol gumaz hai??? Tum ne tou kaha tha hum kissi galli mein ja rahe hain😕???

Anant : arre navya iss area ka naam wohii hai...and he laughed😆

Navya understand he was teasing her she hit him on his chest and said : tum na...he smiled and said : chalo ab chalein ?? navya: haan haan chalo na mein ne kab maana kiya hai

Anant: pagal ladki!! Chalo...they walked further,all green grasses was there,,,huge tresss..there was a huge museum binding too...in short vey beautiful and romantic place...it was one of the best place she have ever seen..actually 1st time she was visiting any historical place in indiaa...woh apne dad kay saath aaj tak sirf foreign countries jaati thi..har saal...but yeh places..she just loved that place...

'Wow anant amazing jagah hai...i just loved it''she said with big smile

Anant just smile...

Arre wow anant different and cute flowers...she pointed toward flower garden..mein abhi aati hun..she left..anant too followed her

She touch each and every flower...anant cont staring and admiring her beauty..first time he saw this side of her...its not like she nerver seen beautiful flower like this before...but its something new...''apne desh ki mitti kii khusbhuu'' and may be u say anant presence make it more and more beautiful...anant just staring her romantically...he come back to his senses when his phn start ringing...''navya mera phn aaya hai mein aata hun'' he spoke

Navya: kyun yahan baat karoo na girl frnd ka phn hai jo mere saamne baat nhi kar sakte...

Anant: navya

Navya: laughed

Anant smiled and said on phn : haan prem bolo...he was busy in phn when he noticed in a direction of flowers where honey bees usually stay on that specific flowers...navya was going in that direction..navya rukkoo/..he shout...but she lost in her own world...and there so many children making noice...she was near those those flowers...she was going to touch them just now he run toward her... he shout navya...he pulled her toward him...she fall on him..he hold her by waist...and both looked into each other eyes...navya :yeh tum kya????...woh mein..anant said and leave her...

Navya: kya??

Anant: woh flowers pe bohat saari madhu makhiyan(honey bees) thi tou...

Navya turned and saw: oh god mein bhi na..thanks anant...agar tum

Anant: iss mein thanks kaise...chalo aage chalte hain

They both walked silently...navya saw 2 lafange boys staring a foreigner...roop tera mastana pyaar mera dewana bhool kahin hum se na hojaye...they both said and laughed...

Navya realized what anant said at that time...she feels guilty...her eyes filled with tears...she held his hand...come near him and hide her face in his arms...anant shocked...kya hoa navya?? He asked and confused

'M sorry'' m really really very sorry...mjhe aisa nhi kehna chahiye thaa...plzz anant mjhe maaf kar doo...

Anant: kya ?? kya matlab?? Tum sorry kyun bol rahi ho???

Navya: tum mere dost ho...mere sab se ache dost u have right to say me anything...whats right and whats wrong...kch bhi..kabhi bhi... m sorry..she start sobbing

Anant broke the hug and wipes her tears with his thumb..he touched by her innocence...tmhe pta hai tum roote hoye bilkul achi nhi lagtii...chalo ab smile karoo...mein tou bhool bhi gaya tha..

Navya: tmhe uss time bohat buraa...

Anant: haan laaga tha...but jab tum ne yeh dress change kar liyaa tou...waise mein bhi kch zyada bol gaya...its not like kay m bol raha raha hun y never wear such types of clothes but just do according to surroundings...aur kch nhi

Navya: pakka tum naaraz nhi ho na??

Anant: haan baaba pakka...chalo aik cute si smile do...navya smiled..anant: yeh hoyii na baat..chaloo ab...navya : aik min

Anant: ab kya hoa???

Navya: thanks!!!

Anant confused: kyun ab yeh kis kay liye

Navya: itni achi jagah lane kay liye...aur mera..

Anant: tumhara???

Navya: mera..mera khayal rakhne kay liye...tum bohat ache ho anant!!!

Anant: haan woh tou mein hun aur yeh thanks bacha kay rakhoo aage kaam aaye ga abhi tou hum ne aap ko ghumana start kiya hai...navya:smiled...ab chalo jaldii...he said...they both reached the door of gol gumbaz...it was amazing...anant : navya yeh hai gol gumbaz one of the 7 wounders of the world...one of the most tourist spot of the city...

Navya saw : wow amazing anant!!!

Anant: tumhe pta hai yeh rome kay pantheon se bhi baara hai...Upar dekho...


Navya: amazing...anant india mein itna sab hai aur mjhe kch pta hi nhi tha...anant smiled...he explained all in detail and she was listening to all this very kneely and a cute smile on her fac...aao mein tmhe wall art dikhaon..he held her hand..they both goes toward gol gumbaz wall...


Navya ; bohat khoobsurat hai😃...anant yahan ki pics click karoo na..

Anant: yaa mam wait a min...navya: hmm she think'' anant itna acha kyun hai?? Anant ki soch itni achi kyun hai???anant: navya mein soch raha tha hum pics baad mein click karte hain abhi upar...

Navya lost in her own world...anant : navya??? Kahan ho??

Navya: haan bolo? She come back to her senses...anant: chalo upar bhi hai upar chalte hain...navya :hmmm..he held her hand...they both walked toward stairs...anant: stairs mein thoda andheraa hoga darnaa mat...

Navya : mjhe kissi cheez se darn hi lagta...tum ho na mere saath...anant looked at her...navya : woh matlab...tum ho yahan itne saare log hain yahan tou...

Anant :hmmm...they reached gallery..navya was just adoring it...from small boundries they both can easily see that round tomb...navya : beautiful...anant shout : navyaaa and it echoed 7times...navya : yeh kya kar rahe ho?? Aur tmahri awaz goong rahi hai...anant : ahaha haan yeh yahan ki special baat tum aik baar awaz doo gii echo ho kay return mein 7baar sunayi de gii

Navya: such?? Phr mein bhi deti hun...she shout : anant...but its sound only 3times...navya make sad face and said : nhi hoa anant???

Anant : arre sad mat ho...nhi hogaa kyun kay aisa pehle hota tha lekin ab yeh bohat puraana ho chukka hai...but tumhara naam tou yahan 7time sound kiya hai...

Navya : haan but tumhara naam bhi tou karna chahiye tha na...

Anant: koi baat nhi navyaa...

Navya :hmm she make sad face...anant : ohooo tum zaara zaara sii baat pe udaas hojati ho..btao kaisa lagaa tmhe yahan aa kay??

Navya: bohat achaa both share cute eyelock...suddenly navya cell start ringing...her phn was their in anant pocket...she given to him because she was feeling burden holding in her hand all the way...anant : oh tmahara phn baj raha hai shayad uncle ka ho..he take out her phn from his pocket...while giving he saw rey name flashing on her mobile screen with ray and navya picture...anant become completly shocked to see that pic...she takes and saw ray name...she smile a little and receive the call...she walked on the other side..anant feels like some one taken his life he was on the edge of crying..''.woh ray se pyaar karti hai woh merii kabhi nhi'' tears rolled down from his hazel eyes...but woh frnds bhi tou hosakte hain...kya frnds aik saath pic click nhi karte...he think...thousands of questions run in his mind...and he closed his teary eyes...

On the other hand navya feeling restless...she said in mind : yeh ray ka phn bhi abhi aana thaa...

Ray on phn : yaar tmhe pta hai kitna miss kar raha hun tmhe?? Jaldii aaoo na Mumbai

Navya: hmmm woh ray mein busy hun kch time baad baat karte hain...she some how manage to end the call by giving many excuses...she cut the call and take a sigh relief...just now her cell again start ringing...navya : ohoo kya hai ray mein ne kaha na mein busy hun...she said in angry tone on phn..

Busy??? Kis kay saath busy??? Ritika teased her

Navya: ritz tou?? Kaisi hai?? Aab yaad aayi meri???

Ritz: haan yaar kch kaam mein busy thii...tou bta shaadi kay ghar mein kaisa lag raha hai??? Navya: bohat acha...abhi tou mein ghoomne aayi hun

Ritz: wow kis kay saath?? Poori family hai kya tere saath??

Navya: nhi bus mein aur anant...

Ritz: anant wohii na jo tjhe bilkul bachpan mein pasand nhi tha???

Navya: haan but ab aisa kch nhi hai anant bohat achaa hai...sab se achaa

Ritz : oye hoyee kya baaat hai madem>?? Itnii tareef??

Navya ;blushed😳

Scn shift to anant...he turned and saw navya blushy face...from last 15mins she was on phn and he was just standing there fuming in anger...he shout : navya saari baatein yahin kar lo gii?? Hum yahan phn karne nhi aaye hain...he said with so much pain in his eyes..

Navya : haan bus aik min..ritz mein tjh se baad mein baat karti hun...

Ritz : ok jaa tou anant kay paas...😉

Navya: ritzz tou bhi na...chal bye...anant walked toward stairs in anger...navya : arre anant kahan ja raha hai??? She too followed him...just now a cute child held her hand : dii mere shoes less khul gaye hain plzz bandh do..

Navya : haan doo...after finishing that navya saw here and there...but she don't able to find anant...kahan chala gaya??? She too run toward stairs...stairs were dark...navya said loudly : anant kahan ho tum?? Anant mjhe dar lag raha hai?? Koi hai upar???

She start crying in fear...anant nowhere to be found...anant walking in his own world not remembering about navya...navya jaldii aao..he said..but no response...he turned and saw nobody was there...and he realized : oh god navya kahan chali gayi??? Neeche tou bohat andhera hai...mein bhi naa...he walked down stairs...navya you there??? He said loudly...she heard his voice...she was sitting in stairs...she stood she was crying alot...anant reached there and she hug him tightly...kahan they tum?? Mjhe akele chod kay upar chale gaye...pta hai mein kitna dar gayi thi...she said with teary eyes...and clutched his shirt more tightly

Anant: mjhe laga tum mere peeeche...

Navya: kabhi bhi aisa mat karna mjhe mat chod kay jaana...anant : kabhi nhi...he too hug her back..


Precap: Anant lift navya in his arms...😳


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wow...superb update meru...keep it up 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superbbb,,,, loved it,,, but plss try to update regularly
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb dear. .next part please soon. .With Anya's romantic scenes😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
cute updates like u 😉

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