FF:Kaash khaamosh mohaabat na kii hoti tum ne...pt12 @pg64

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Kaash Khaamosh Mohaabat na kii hotii tum ne...:)



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Character Sketch...

ANANT BAJPAI:

A guy who lives in small city Baijapur,with his mom dad and sister...belong from a middle class family...navya cousin...anant ne mechanical engineering(B.TCH) last year complete kar liya...now anant is waiting for his result...

Navya Mishra:

She is twenty one year old...A spoiled daughter of a rich fathere..navya doing B.com...she think money can buy anything...she is only daughter of businessman Rishi Sharma...Rishi is a well reputatated businessman...navya lost her mother at the age of 5... .she luv partying,going to clubs...she is very close to her mamu's family(mom bro) and massi's family...she like one of her cousin (mama's son)...he is very dashing rich...but all her relations are not real they all just like her because of her money...she thought dey love her but they didn't...

Reyansh(Rey):

Navya mama's son...navya thought rey love her...

but for him love is just timepass and he is just pretending to be soo in love with navya just to marry her and take her dads money...

Rishi Mishra:

Navya's dad...

Abhishek Singh:

Navya' mama(mom bro)

Ratan Singh:

Navya's mami...rey mother

And many others...in mama and her aunt family...

Savita:

Anant mom...navya bua(dad's sister) she is very nice and caring person...

Rahul Bajpai:

Anant s father...

Priya:

Anant sister...

I just mentioned the main characters...as the story will continue i wil introduce u to the new characterzz...

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pt4@ pg18

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Part:1

Is starts with a princess room...all pink...pink walls,curtains,laptop,i phone and a beautiful girl in a pink colour suit getting down the bed and wearing her pink colour slippers...she screams...coffee coffee...and a man runs nd give her the coffee...she takes it and ask;dad kahan hain????

Sahib jii neeche hain bitiyaa aap kay maama maami aayein hain...he replied

Navya:kya rey bhi aaya hai?😃???

Jii...

Navya:wow tou mein jaldii se taayar hojaatii hun...

She come downstairs wearing pink colour churi daar...she is looking damn preety like an angel...

Rishi: arre meri princess uth gayi????

Navya:haan paapa and she hug him...😃

Rattan(navya mami) said:aur hum se nhi mile gii hamarii princess????

Navya:nhi maami and she hug her too...kaisii ho aap ???she asked

Mein theek hun tou suna???? Rattan replied

Navya:haan theek aik dum...😛

Rishi: navya beta tumharii bua ka phone aaya tha village se...

Navya:oh...kya keh rahin thi woh????

Rishi: navya priyaa hai na us ski shaadi hai...

Navya: oh wow tou aap kab ja rahe ho????

Rishi:nhi mein nhi ja paon ga tum chalii jao...savita ne khaas phone kar kay bulaya hai tumhe...kay navya ko kch din pehle bhej do...

Navya:but paapa????wahan mein???mjhe itne jaldii nhi jaana mein shaadi wale din hii aap kay saath chalii jaon gii na...

Rattan:haan theek keh rahi hai meri gudiyaa...aise chote se city mein theek se kahan reh payii gii woh...

Rishi:but wahan unn ka apna ghar hai...tmhe koi pareshaani nhi hogii beta...plzz mere liye chalii jao

Navya sit beside him and said:kitnii baar aap se kaaha hai na aap ko jo bolna ho bola karoo plzzz kabhi mat bolna mjhe...mein jaon gii pakka...

Rishi hug her:thats like a good girl...

Navya:betii kis kii hun...acha maami jii rey kahan hai????

Rattan:woh bahar hai garden mein mil lo ja kay uss se...

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Navya saw here nd there...rey where are you????she said loudly

Here miss beautiful, she heard a viice in the background...

A smile curved in her lips she turned...

Hi rey...she said with big smile

Hi navya: rey replied

How are you???he asked

Fine:she replied

Rey:chalo navya aaj hum coffee kay liye chalet hain...

Navya:nhi sorry rey aaj nhi aaj mein dopehar ko apni bua kay ghar ja rahi hun...

Rey:kon bua????

Navya:savita bua ...jo kch din pehle aayin thi

Rey:oh acha wahan uss chote se ghar mein jao gii tum???oh come on baby tum nhi jao giii

Navya:nhi rey paapa ne bola hai mjhe jaana hoga...unn se promise kiya hai mein ne...

Rey:but mera kya hoga itne din tum se dur???

Navya:hum rooz phone pe baat karein ge aik dosre se...

Rey:ohk

Navya: mein aati hun kch paking kar kay...

Rey:theek hai...

Navya left...rey in mind...acha hoa kch din jaan chote gii iss pagal se hamesha pakkatii rehti hai.😡..just now his cell start ringing...

Oh hi priyanka baby...yaa i m coming: he said on phone

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Navya is busy in packing...

Rishi come there...mein bohat khush hun beta kay tum ja rahii ho...he said and smiled

Navya:kaise na jaati??mere paapa ne jo bola hai...

Rishi:tmharii bua tum se bohat pyaaar karti hai...unn kay liye gifts pack karwa liye na???

Navya:haan paapa karwa liye...jab last time gayi thi mein tab tou bohat chotii thi theek se kch yaad bhi nhi hai...

Rishi: sab waise hi hain jaise pehle they...savita,om bhaiya,priya aur anant...

Navya:arre haan anant yaad hai mjhe...hamesha uss se larayii hotii thi meri...

Rishi:haan ab nhi karna uss se larayii

Navya:agar woh mjhe waise hi tang kare ga tou mein bohat jhagra karun gii uss se...

RISHI:smiled😛

Navya:paapa...

Rishi:haan??

Navya:aaj maa ki bohat yaad aarahi hai she said with teary eyes...😭

Rishi hug her...

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Navya skipped out of the train...and looked aroud eagerly...savita bua was supposed to come fatch her but where was she???

Navya:pehle yahan saari flighs dealy thi aur..upar se 3 ghante train late...train aise chal rahi thi jaise koi snail...omg ab pta nhi bua kahan reh gayin????kitna mosquitoes hain yahan pta nhi yeh 2 weeks mera kya hoga...

Just then she heard something like argument...the noise came from outside..navya dragged her luggage with some difficulty to have a better look what was going on...

Areee bhaiya aise kaise...aapne abhi tou 30 rupees bole thet...yeh 50 kaise hogaye????baatiyee mjhe...

Navya goes near him...she is not able to see his face

Bhaiya nhi jitne mein baat hoyii thi uss se aik rupiyaa zyada nhi dun ga mein...

Navya:oh god yeh chote shaher kay log...she give 50 rupess to taxi driver...

He turned in anger...he is very charming and handsome...silky hairs his pink lips...white complexion and his hazel brown eyes...

Navya looked deeply in his eyes...😳

Taxi wala left...yeh kya kiya tum ne???hotii kon ho tum mere paise dene walin????anant said in anger..😡.

Navya:come back to reality and said:mjhe bhi koi shook nhi hai but kitna rush laga kay rakha hai tum ne yahan???tabhi bua jii ko bhi aane mein problame horahi hogii...

Anant:meri ghaltii????uss ne saaf saaf 30 rupees bole they aur yahan aaake kay 50 rupess???galtii usss ki hai pehle bolna chahiye tha na...

Navya: dekho ab baat khatam hogayi hai ab woh chala gaya hai...tum us ski wajah se yahan mjhe se koi larayi kar rahe ho..??

Anant:mein larayii kar raha hun????tum yeh batao tum ne paise diyee kyun😡???

Navya:tum😡

Just now anant cell start ringing...

Haan maa bolo :he said on phn

Savita:navya mili????

Anant:nhi mein ne abhi dekhna shuru nhi kiya...

Savita:kya???abhi tak anant tou mein ne kab se bheja hai tjhe wahan aur tou hai kay...jaldii dhond usse...

Anant:haan maa dhund lun ga aap ki navya ko...

Navya:shocked😲 (yeh mera naam kyun le raha hai??)

Anant:chalo maa bye

Navya said to him: tum ne abhi kch bola????

Anant:kya???bye bola maa ko

Navya:nhi uss se pehle...😛

Anant:uss se pehle hum baat kar rahe they 50 rupees kii aap ne paise kyun diye?????mein de deta na...???

Navya:tum badle nhi na????

Anant:matlab????

Navya:kch nhi mjhe ghar le kay chalo...mein bohat thaak gayi hun aur yahan 5 min bhi nhi reh saktii mein pta nhi yahan aaj saari flights kyun delay thi...😡

Anant:mere ghar tum mere ghar kyun chalo gii😕????

Plz hit like and leave your comments...😃

Luv

MARIYAM<3

Edited by -meru- - 11 years ago
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Part:2...

Anant and navya took a taxi and both of them heading to anant home...

Waise ghar jaate hi mein tmhare 50 rupess wapis kar dun ga...said anant

Navya:its ok! Waise tum badle nhi na😛???

Anant:matlab badla nhi??mjhe tou theek se yaad bhi nhi hai jab tum yahan aayin thi

Navya:bua jii khud kyun nhi aayin????woh aatin tou acha hota

Anant:unn ko kch kaam tha isiliye mein aagaya

'Stoppp'' navya screamed😃

The taxi stop suddenly

Anant:whats wrong😲???what happened???

Navya:woh anant kachorii !! i saw kachorii stall over there...i so badly want to eat them right now...

Anant:you screamed as if you saw a murder.well navya maa na ghar pe tmhare liye itna kch banaya hai yahan khane ka kya faida???

Navya:nhi mjhe kch nhi pta waise hi tum itna late aaye ho bhook kay mare meri jaan nikal rahii hai ii need kachorii and thats final if you want.you come...nhi tou ghar jao mein khud hi aajaon gii mjhe address bata do

Saying this she open the door and come out from taxi

Anant:theek hai aajaana,kissi bhi taxi wale ko bolna kay bajpai house jaana hai woh chor dega😡

Navya:what😲 😡???????

Anant:haan bye chalo bhaiya saying this he left!

Navya:become more and more angry...😡 😡

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Anant reached home...

Savita:arre aagaya tou navya kahan hai???she asked and smiled

Anant:stall pe

Savita:matlab???

Anant:maa uss ko kachorii khanii thi isiliye woh wahin ruk gayi :he said angrily

Savita:aur tou ne chor diya anant tou pagal hai usse yahan ka kch bhi nhi pta aur tou hai kay ab agar usse kch hogaya tou ??? jaa abhi jaa kay le ka usse she said in anger

Anant:mein nhi jaon ga kitne nakhre walii hai aap kii navya.khud aajaye gii

Just now the taxi halted in front of bajpai house.priya come there in hurry and said:maa,bhai navya aagayi

Anant:loo aagayi and left in anger😡

Navya was in deep thought woh apni maa kay saath yahan aayi thi shayad aaj bhi usse woh sab yaaad aagaya.navya looked at the house and ramu kaaka took her luggahe out.she is still in her deep thought

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Memory...

Maa hum kahan ja rahe hain??? Navya asked when she was 5 years old

Meeta maa:teri bua kay ghar

Navya:but mjhe wahan jaana acha nhi lagta mjhe bus maama jii,maami jii kay paas rehna acha lagta hai

Meeta maa: asia nhi bolte navya woh bhi tere apne hain aur teri bua tjh se bohat pyaar karti hai jab bhi tjhe meri yaad aaye tou yahan aajana

Navya:hug her

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Her hand was shaky,her legs weak.for the first time after so many years,she was going to meet her bua and her family,she is nervous too''kaash paapa mere saath hote'' she said in mind

Priya come there and hug her ' arre navya kaisi ho tum. Maa ander hai aao ander aao na'' she said with big smile

Navya smiled back

She walked in the house

Bua hug her tightly with teary eyes, bilkul meeta ki tarah ho tum: she said

Navya: kaisi hain aap???

Bua broke the hug and said:mein theek hunt um sunao???safar theek than a tmhe iss tarah train mein safar karne ki aadat

Navya:its ok bua jii mein theek hun,she smiled

Bua:chalo jaa kay fresh ho jao mein tmhare liye khana lagati hun

Navya:smiled

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Anant goes to his room he was full angry and thinking: kaisii ajjeb larkiii hai itne nakhre??mein na aaj hii uss ko saare paise wapis kar dun ga uss kay...pta nhi maa ne kahan rakhe hain ??he search money...he goes forward to her sister room...

Pta nhi aander hogii yaa nhi???he think when he about to open the door he heard navya voice

'O God mein tou yahan poori pagal ho jaon gii yahan tou A.C bhi nhi hai aur upar se itnii garmii'' she said in anger

Anant in mind: agar itni problame hai tou yeh pagal aayi kyun hai yahan??? When he about to enter navya cell start ringing...

Navya:oh god abhi kis kii call aagayi...she pick the call in anger

'Hello'' bolo????navya said angrily

Hi darling,! Ray said

Navya: Rey????kaise ho tum??hayeee kitna misss kar rahi hunt um sab ko :she make sad face

Anant:confused😕??yeh rey kon hai????

He knocked the door...navya to ray: i call you later,ok bye she cut the call and turned

Tum tum yahan mere kamre mein kya kar rahe ho?????she said in anger😡

Anant:woh???

Navya:haan haan i know tum sorry bolne aaye hogee...tum ne jo kiya mere saath uss kay liye?? Hai na jaise bachpan mein bolte they...ahahaha dekha finally tum khud hi mjh se baat karne aagaye...chalo jao mein ne maaf kiya tmhe...and she smiled

Anant:oh hello! Kissi galat fehmii mein mat rahoo...mein kissi ko sorry nhi bolta samjhi aur meri galtiii kya hai jo mein sorry bolun????

Navya:galtii kya hai???matlab tum pta hii nhi hai tmharii galtii kya hai???

Anant: meri koi galtii nhi hai jab mein tmhe ghar la raha tha tou kya zaroorat nhi kachoori kay stall pe rukne kii????

Navya: mjhe bhook laagii thi, tum itna late aaye fuzool ka uss taxi wale se jhagra kiya aura b mjhe bol rahe ho???

Anant: tmhe tou yahan har cheez se prblm hai...kaha kis ne tha yahan aao???

Navya:oh acha tmhe baara pta hai mjhe kya chahiye?? Kya nhi???

Anant:abhi bola na tum ne yahan A.C bhi nhi hai,yeh nhi hai woh nhi...

Navya:dekho mein bohat thaak gayi hun...plz jao yahan se

Anant:mjhe bhi koi shooq nhi hai yahan rehne ka...yeh lo apne paise

Navya:paise????

Anant:haan 50 rupesss mein kisssi ka ehsaan nhi rakhta

Navya:nhi us ski zaroorat nhi hai...its ok

Anant:nhi mein yeh yahan table pe rakh raha hunt um le lena...

Navya:but mein ne kaha na uss ki zaroorat nhi hai

Anant:mein yahan rakh raha hun aur mjhe paapa kay saath jaana hai bahar so bye...he left

Navya: pta nhi kya baari musibaat aagayi mere sir pe,ab isss anant ko 2 weeks bardashat karna parhe ga,.

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Arre navya fresh hogayin?? Aao beta khana khao...bua said to her with big smile navya come there and sit beside her on floor...

Bua:sorry beta, tumhe yahan itnii prblm hamara ghar chota...

Navya: nhi mein theek hun,bus room mein thore mosquitoes hain,uss se neend nhi aaye gii mjhe she said with puppy dog face

Priya: aare koi baat nhi navya jab coil lagao tou koi problem nhi hotii

Navya: hmm

Bua : tou le na kch,

Anant too come there and beside priya, both anya looked at each other and become more angry

Navya: bua jii woh iss mein bohat mirchii hai mjh se khaya nhi jar aha

Anant: mirchi ko mirchi kaise lag sakti hai

Bua: anant chup

Navya: bua jii mein jab se aayi hun yeh mjhe tang kar raha hai...pehle wahan kachoori stall pe chor aaya,station late aaya, aate hi room mein larayi kii aur ab???

Anant: tum meri maa ko meri shikaayat kar rahi ho

Navya: woh meri bhi bua hain

Anant: nhi woh pehle meri maa hain, hai na maa

Navya: nhi meri bua hai,hai na bua

Anant :nhi meri maa

Navya:nhi meri bua

Anant:maa

Navya:bua

Anant:meri maa😡

Navya:meri bua😡

Bua and priya said loudly:chup karoo tum doono...aik dosre kay samne aate hi shuru,bua said in anger😡

Hit like and leave your honest comments...aage cont karun yaa nhi???😕

Luv,

Mariyam😳

Edited by -meru- - 11 years ago
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yipee me first !😛going to read
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awesome yaar , loved anya cute fights a lot
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Awesome update yaar. Do cont soon..:)
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wowww maryum😛😛 hats off another lovely FF m soo excited
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Haa haaa beautiful Navya with some attitudes haaan. loved her attitude anyawys.. so navya and anant are so much in arguments haaan. love dtheir rupees fyt and navya's kachori cravings and anant's gussa and leaving her der.. he heee again funny was anya arguing about maa and bua thing
wonderful family drama and lovely funny fyt between anya. Loved it mariyam
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Awesome story yar..so fresh and intresting..plzz do continue soon.eagerly waiting.
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wow new ff😃loved the storyline alot meru😳anya's fight from the start to end,very funny😆and so cute,do cont soon😃luvly start😛

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