new Anya SS- finally updatedd last part.. part 6 @ pg 42 - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mussu


yo yo neha..😉😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shamya_for_life


sorry i did not understand tu kehna kya chahti hai ?

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tareyfan

dekh jab bhi i see more tan 20 likes on my update me update kar deti 😛


tu part 4 de.. pakka uspe 20+ likes 😃 my guarantee 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

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sab log kahan gaye ??


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shamya_for_life


tu part 4 de.. pakka uspe 20+ likes 😃 my guarantee 😃

kk chal aaj raat tak de deti !!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shamya_for_life


main ab jaane wali hu 😆😆 mario khelne so bye 😆😆

😆😆 byeee 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tareyfan


kk chal aaj raat tak de deti !!


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Posted: 12 years ago
oye res kis khushi me ..me agle page pe update post kar rhi hun 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
soo guys i noe u r seeing me with an update too early this tym n all thnks to Neha n Mussu 😆😆 so its coz of a clause btwn us that m updating it soo early 😛 enough of my bak bak abhi n u guys enjoy d update 😃😃


Part 4-


" hello dear...look who the cat..I mean navya brought in tonight." Said a voice made of pure evil.

Ananth froze in his position...he had never heard such a voice before...one filled with so much evil...every fibre in his body told him to run...his eyes scanned the entire room..it was dimly lit...he noticed that when he entered The room it was fully furnished...but now nothing was left except the paint which was chipped of the walls. Then he guessed that all the true forms were finally revealed...he thought about navya and suddenly the thought of dying sounded better to him.

" looks like you have fallen for my navya too...you know u r among the other 20...23 men who came here !"

The voice echoed around the walls making it difficult for Ananth to determine where the voice was coming from. She spoke with sarcism laced In her words...just like poison , her words killed him slowly as he realized he was just another victim of hers. So much hurt was more than his unfeeling heart could bear. Unknowingly he was getting ready for his end...

Scene shift to navya

Her saree dragged at her. It felt heavier on her than usual. Maybe it was because of its elaborate design or maybe it was because of the immense guilt she felt at her heart which did not exist anymore...she started talking to herself...

"What are you thinking navya ? You know death was already written in his destiny when he entered the mansion...with or without your help he would have died...you were just saving yourself from more torture...if not you..another tortured spirit would have brought him here...besides this isn't your first time...you are safe until you bring more people here...but why did you let him kiss ur forehead ? That wasn't normal...to think dat sum unknown person or should say jst a prey like many others kissed ur forehead for d first tym dat too after you died...I felt so alive with him...he breathed life in me but why? Are you in...no...you don't have permission to love navya.."

As she said those last few sentences tears made their way out of her eyes...she felt so much pain...never did she feel this much pain even during her painful death when she was burnt alive... She was also one of those children who were tortured...even after she was 18 she didn't let her go...she never wanted her victims to leave...all the physical and emotional torture came back other...it was a traumatic torture…finally one day someone set the kitchen on fire...everyone died including her...the only thing she could feel was happiness that she would finally get rid of her pain but god didnt have any mercy on them all were retained in the human world including the torturer...she sent all of her children out to outskirts of the mansion to lure humans in so that she could feel them suffer and if they failed she would subject them to emotional and mental torture...far worse than the physical torture...she was the most successful one as she was the most beautiful one too and the men would just follow her blindly...her chain of thoughts were broken as she heard a cry...a cry of pain...!!


hope it matched up to ur expectations a i wrote it in haste..so do share ur views n feel free to point out my mistakes or to share any suggestion regarding d future updates ..😊😊


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Edited by tareyfan - 12 years ago

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