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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
it seems im too late to comment sorry for that and about the concept really fresh & interesting cant wait to read the chptrs as i blieve whtever u do u do it wid all enjoyment & thts y the outcome is amazing :)) ll b looking forward to it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heylliana i guess ur very lucky coze u r gonna get the chance to read the concept and the 1st chapter together...and thanks for liking the concept...hope u enjoy the 1st chapter as well...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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updating 1st chapter guys...hope u enjoy reading it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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With all ur support, im gonna carry on with the ff and here i present to u with the first chapter. Enjoy reading and do leave ur comments for sure!

...Chapter: I...

Location: Delhi

Day: 14th Feb (Valentine's Day)

Venue: Mishras Mansion

The gates to the Mishra mansion are opened and a group of performers enter the house and they r immensely impressed by the structure of the mansion. Massive in size, painted in pure white and triple storied. Anyone would say that it belonged to a rich personality. They were right. It belonged to the renowned businessman of Delhi, Mr.Deepak Mishra. Furthermore, they were here to perform for the high-profiled wedding of his younger daughter Navya Mishra with an NRI businessman. 😊

They were soon welcomed by the wedding planner and taken to the performance area. They set their instruments, cleared their throats and began to sing'.while the others began to play their musical instruments'.

Aah Aah Aah, Aah Aah, Aah Aah Aah
Shehnaaiyon Ki Sada Keh Rahi Hai

A beautiful girl is shown in the traditional Hindu bridal attire. The red lehenga! The traditional jewellery, the light yet enough makeup that helps her face to look even brighter and pretty, and her lovely smile, all this made her a perfect looking bride. She appeared before the mirror laughing sarcastically. Probably she was hearing the lyrics of the song and wondering that they have wasted energy for a marriage which is not to happen.
Khushi Ki Mubaarak Ghadi Aa Gayi Hai
Saji Surkh Jodi Mein Chaand Si Dulhan
Zameen Pe Falak Se Pari Aa Gayi Hai

A girl comes to the bride's room and calls her out!

Girl: navya didi! The baraat has come and everyone is that the entrance to welcome the dulha.

Navya's face brightens up after hearing this and she runs to the balcony. She scans carefully and finds that everyone r indeed outside. This was the moment she waited for! The moment for everyone to go out and she would sneak out of the house and run away though the back gates.

Navya: perfect! Lemme see who can force me to marry a guy whom i have not even met before!

She smirks at herself and takes a bag from the cupboard and leaves the room, leaving a note for her parents.
Aah Aah Aah, Aah Aah Aah Aah, Aah Aah Aah
Aah Aah Aah, Aah, Aah Aah Aah Aah Aah
Aah Aah Aah, Aah Aah Aah Aah, Aah Aah Aah

The baraatis are welcomed while navya easily manages to escape the house! They make the dulha's family to relax while they hurry to bring navya for the war mala.

Dulhe Ka Sehra Suhaana Lagta Hai
Dulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai
Dulhe Ka Sehra Suhaana Lagta Hai
Dulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai

The dulha excuses him to the washroom which is situated to the opposite side of navya's room. On his way, he finds the distraught parents of his bride. When enquiring further, he finds out that his bride has eloped from the house without even bothering to mention the reason of her eloping in her letter. He has nothing to say to console her parents. He wondered how will be inform this to his parents and the whole people who have come to attend the wedding and bless the couple.
Palbhar Mein Kaise Badalte Hain Rishte
Ab To Har Apna Begaana Lagta Hai
Dulhe Ka Sehra Suhaana Lagta Hai
Dulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai

(This is a music mix so they decide to sing the rest part during the pheras)

A new singer takes initiative and starts singing taare hai baraati chandni hai yeh baraat...(from virasaat)

Deepak hurries outside and makes a few phone calls secretly and orders them to search for navya at the earliest and bring her back before anyone gets to know that she has ran away from the house.

On the other hand navya is so glad that she has finally escaped from the clutches of her unhappy family and will fly to the city of her dreams, where her loving sister and dadi resides. The only place where she finds peace!

She finds the nearest phone booth and informs renu di that she is coming to Singapore in the following day's flight. Renu is stunned but navya says that it was so very much pre-planned and she had even booked the tickets a week ago. She ends the call and rushes for a taxi to her friend Rati's house; that was the only place she could stay b4 she could leave for Singapore.

She tried to stop many vehicles but found no luck but suddenly she saw a Scorpio car stop b4 her. OMG! She recognised them! It was the bodyguards of her dad! They had found her! Before they could reach her, she lifted her heavy lehenga and ran for her life, as fast as she could. Without any destination! She ran and ran until she bumped into someone. The moment was so sudden that she ended up in his arms. She didn't realize was she was doing and he was so shocked to react.

Navya: pls help me! Those goons are trying to kidnap me!

Suddenly she realized that she popped in a big lie b4 this stranger! What had she done? They were after all not kidnapping her 😆 She thought that it was best that the bodyguards didn't get time to talk to this stranger and take his help to catch her and get her back home!

Quickly, she looked back and realized that the bodyguards were so close, took the stranger's hand and fled behind a tree, without even giving him a warning that he has to go with her. After reaching there:

Stranger: would u mind leaving my hand madam?

Navya: oh so sorry!

She turned to face the guy whom she bumped into. In this hurry she hadn't even bothered to notice who he was. They met for the first time. Their eyes met for the first time! They had their first eye-lock! They didn't even realize they were mere strangers who didn't even know each other! What was that unknown power working behind them?

The stranger suddenly broke the eye-lock and turned around?

Navya: hey thanks for helping me! Otherwise i'd be in grave trouble!

Stranger: mention not! Btw why were those goons behind u?

He made a quick scan of navya and gave her a confused look!

Navya: probably u wanna ask what im doing in a bridal attire at this time of the night in the streets that too followed by goons rite? How filmy na?

Navya expects a response from him but he is completely silent.

Navya: what happened? Why don't u say something?

Stranger: well what i wanted to ask u? u already said it so what do u think i need to ask?😆

Navya: oops sorry! Actually i talk a bit!

Stanger: u think this is bit? u r enough to speak for 100 people😆

Navya: thanks i take it as a compliment! by the way im navya!

Stranger: so?

Navya: ur too rude! I even said my name expecting u to say urs! Im not gonna murder u or anything if i know ur identity 😆

Stranger: Anant! Anant Bajpai! Is that enough or do u wanna know more?

Precap:

Navya drives anant's car even b4 he gives her the permission to do so. This annoys anant a lot. Navya tells him that she is running away from her wedding coze she loves Rohan very much and can't imagine of anyone else in his place.

Guys! You may find nothing special in this chapter! I know the Precap is depressing coze navya's reason to leave her wedding is rohan. But i promise u will be shocked and even surprised with the coming chapters! I can't get to the suspense all of a sudden! So bear this chapter and maybe the next one and u will start enjoying this FF...

Luv,

Sio 😎

Edited by .sio.angel. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yaaay!!🥳 normally its u who comments in others updt & get happy & today its me who got this opportunity to comment in urs FF at first very interesting chpter everything seems to mysterious u wrote everything beautifully 👏👏 & i njoy reading the first meeting of AnYa & their nok jhok i felt somethhing may b im wrng but i still want to ask do chck ur pm😊 gr8 going will wait for the nxt chp gr8 start 👍🏼
Edited by -Liana- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kaise laga liana ji?answer this question after ur done with ur reading...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Liana-

Yaaay!!🥳 normally its u who comments in others updt & get happy & today its me who got this opportunity to comment in urs FF at first very interesting chpter everything seems to mysterious u wrote everything beautifully 👏👏 & i njoy reading the first meeting of AnYa & their nok jhok i felt somethhing may b im wrng but i still want to ask do chck ur pm😊 gr8 going will wait for the nxt chp gr8 start 👍🏼

thanks a lot liana...mysterious?really?ok lemme chek ur pm😆and i want people to keep thinking until i update next chapter...if this is ur reaction...ill be curiouse enough to know how others react...😆😃😈
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: .sio.angel.

kaise laga liana ji?answer this question after ur done with ur reading...😆

already answered 😉 do chck it out .. u njoyed writing it na?? then how cn it turn bad?? it ws really good want to read the nxt part

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow SIona awesome start 😛 beautifully written & loved Anya 1st meet & eye lock😉 Can see ur excitement in this first chapter 😆 loved our chulbulli Navya & Quite & annoyed Anant 😛
Continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Liana-

already answered 😉 do chck it out .. u njoyed writing it na?? then how cn it turn bad?? it ws really good want to read the nxt part

yup read ur thoughts...quite reasonable yaan...ek 😉 smiley se kya kya soch li han...i have givent he explanation there...do read k...😊😊

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