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Posted: 12 years ago
today LIS update day haina ??? waitinggg
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Posted: 12 years ago
its update time for luv in singa finally...😃
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firstly sorry for this long and boring chapter😕
-Chapter: 10-

Navya reached Mishra Mansion in half an hour. She had least expected Meeta and Deepak to be there. Well, yeah it was true that she didn't care, but her rude behaviour to them had its own reasons. We could seriously never blame poor navya for it. From childhood, all she wanted from them was attention, time and love. Three things they never gave to neither her nor Renu di. This time also Deepak and Meeta was not there, they knew that their daughter was married to a guy who is taking her to Singapore in 2 days! Still they didn't want to meet her?

Navya (tears dropping from her eyes): I guess I came to see this lonely house and maid lajjo. What an awesome phak phera!

Lajjo: navya baby! U have come? have breakfast!

Navya: lajjo? as usual? Dad and mom are not here rite?

Lajjo: baby that!

Navya: it's ok lajjo! Im used to this but I thought atleast they wanted to meet me before I go to Singapore!

Lajjo: Singapore? baby renuka baby and dadi are there rite?

A faint smile appears on her face after hearing their names.

Navya: yeah! That's the only relief! Otherwise mom and dad had left no stone in making my life so incomplete!

Saying this, navya turns to leave.

Lajjo: navay baby?where r u going?

Navya: I guess I have nothing left to do here so I must go!

Lajjo:no u cannot leave! Ur going away from here! At least u should wait! Deepak sir had told they will try to come in one hour!

Navya: no lajjo! I'm sure they will be late and wont manage to come and meet me! Just call and tell them not to interrupt their meeting to come to me!

Lajjo: and the gifts?

Navya looks at the big and expensive gifts that were packed for her.

Navya: lajjo! U keep it! These items will help u a lot! I don't need them!

Saying this, she runs out of the house, crying! She enters the car and sets back to Bajpai Niwas. She didn't know what to respond to her in-laws. Why couldn't she wait if Deepak had assured they would try to come?

Navya still sobbing: whatever it is! I was frustrated there! I couldn't stay!

Navya's car slows down due to red signal. Suddenly she looks out of the window and sees a park and gets sweet memories from her past. A cute smile appears on her face and she tells the driver to go home as she will return via taxi. She goes to the park gathering the old moments she spent with her dad, mom and renuka di.

The park had nothing special; the big old trees with shady ends and benches beneath them, a few small moving shops of ice-creams, kulfis and chat patta food. She remembers how Deepak used to carry navya in his hand though she was 9 years old. Renu was 12 and she used to hate seeing navya in deepak's lap. He and meetha used to take both the girls to the park and play with them, buy them ice-creams and pani puri.

Suddenly a gush of wind hit her cheeks and she comes back from memories to reality. More tears roll down her eyes.

Navya: why! Why ma! Why papa! Why don't u both have time for me anymore?

She remains there for a while and doesn't even realize that time was running. Deepak and Meeta had returned home and found navya gone. They scold lajjo for not stopping her and calls Bajpai Niwas to talk to navya. To their shock, thy find from suganda that navya hasn't reached home yet. This puts them in deep worries. Suganda calls anant and informs him about navya's disappearance. Yet another misunderstanding plots in his mind as he thinks that navya disappeared as she didn't want to go to meet her parents.

Anant in mind: how can u be so irresponsible navya?

He calls navya but she doesn't receive it. In fact navya was so lost in her thoughts that she didn't realize what was happening around. Anant, on the other side, questions the driver and finds that navya had gone to her house but within few minutes returned crying and got down amid during signals. Anant notes the location and reaches there in search of her. After searching the areas nearby from where she got down, he reaches the park. He finally finds navya, sitting in a corner bench and very upset. She was staring at one vacant spot without even blinking her eyes and anant wondered what suddenly happened to the mischievous and chatterbox miss Nautanki.

Anant: navya!

No response

Anant: navyaaa!

Same! No response!

This time anant kept his hand on navya's shoulder and navya became normal and her face becomes bright!

Navya: papa?

She turns to find a shocked rather confused anant! Anant didn't know what to say as could feel the response of navya and how it reflected her love for her dad. For a second, navya thought that she is back in her old happy days with her family and her dad was there to pacify an angry little navya! She was broken from inside by seeing anant!

Navya: anant how did u get here?

Anant not understanding how to react: aww well! I found from the driver that u got down nearby and everyone were concerned so I came looking for you!

Navya: oh! I'm glad someone is concerned for me! Otherwise papa and ma must still not know I returned from home.

Anant: no navya! Actually Deepak uncle called and that's how we found u returned from Mishra mansion!

Navya smiling: really?

But yet again her face turned dull! Anant was noticing every expression of hers and this widened his confusion.

Anant: u luv ur parents a lot rite?

Navya was so shocked of anant's question and she didn't know what to say! It was like, till now, navya found pleasure in expressing her dislike towards her parents and now when someone was trying to know her! She didn't like it!

Navya: I hate them anant!

Anant: ur lying directly on my face!

Navya: whatever!

Anant: so are u still sitting in this place wasting ur time or going home?

Navya: excuse me! I'm not wasting my time here! U don't even know how many beautiful memories behold here in this park for me! Those precious moments from my childhood were I had my mom and dad with me and my di. They had time for us! They were appy with us! U see that black place where I was staring at?

Anant looks at the blank place confused and shocked!

Navya: there was a swing here that time! Papa used to carry me his lap and then place me on one of the swings. Then we had lots of swings sessions. That was a time that will never return. This is just one sitance. If I see the whole park, I see memories coming out in each and everything! But to whom am I saying all this? To mr. angry bird who thinks I'm born to waste time of others and myself!

Saying this, navya goes from there, leaving anant shell shocked! For the first time, anant was seeing a different navya! Who was totally shattered, sad and disappointed towards life! He didn't know how to react!

Precap:

It's the same Precap I gave b4'.navya and her mysterious phone conversation!

Ok guys! I know chapter turned too long! Also there was nothing so interesting to read! But I would like to share that I got rather very emotional after finishing the writing of this chapter coze I could see reality in the life of navya! How her childhood was and how it became now! I have a wonderful family with my mom and dad but I have come across many of my friends who's life can be resembled to navya's. I remember the attitude of them towards their parents and how they said they wanted the love of their parents! How intensely are lives and relationships changing with time rite guys?

Just thought of touching the paths of reality as it is a major part of navya's relationship with her parents. Also this chapter was main coze anant starts to realize that navya isn't as bad as he thinks she is.

Thanks for reading!

Luv,

sio

Edited by .sio.angel. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Me first again 😛
Wow superb ,very emotional & touchy update :)) loved it...beautifully written the pain navya going through & her anger towards her parents. And still showed the innocent kid suppressed behind this nautanki queen...agree this was needed for anant to see the true navya & will help them understand each other in the future. It was not at all long or boring, wanted to read more...will be eagerly waiting for next update 😛
Edited by navya19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Being frank, i was just lost while reading this update Siona.. i just loved it corefully than any other updates infact..it just highlighted the agony of Navya revolving around her who inturn acts wierd outward but inner being so painful towards the reality of life concerning her parents. i felt bad wen she found no one at home and the way she was sobbing cherishing those past childhood memories in barren park was indeed good onez yah.. moreover Anant finding this side of Navya was more interesting and was needed.. atleast he will get to know Navya to some extent and her agony.
moreover this phase of navya my8 create some sort of understanding & rapport between Anya in future gradually..
i just loved it thoroughly...n yes u r ry8, many r going through the same phase infact which is really a embarrasing thing to pass through.
Edited by rashvin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey siona u knw something?? u made me cry yes tears were falling down frm my eyes while reading this updt it was fab one of ur best updt u wrote everything beautifully dear hats off 👏 navya's ain whr visible through ur writing gr8 job dear i dnt knw y u think its boring & long i was soo lost in reading tht didnt realise tht whn it end & this part ws needed for Anant to understnd navya better 😊 ll b waiting for the nxt chp as well
P.S like button not working though tried hard
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum update dear love it please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Such an emotional and sad update Sio. Really made me cry. 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
it's one of the best updates of urs that I read... Superb...! 😊

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