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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update👏..the confession part was
Cont. soon!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hahahaha too gud👍🏼 waiting for the next update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
chemistry...🤣 superb proposal by our majnu anant...yennuku oru doubt iruuke...ne yarukavdu ippidi propose panniya?? apdiye ni solra madiri iruundhidiche..😆 anyways...i hav never seen such a proposal in my life...thank u fr tat...nd awesome awesome dear...i ws laughing lyk hell reading it..nd harry's question ws superb...continue soon..want to see wats next...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anyadiv96

chemistry...🤣 superb proposal by our majnu anant...yennuku oru doubt iruuke...ne yarukavdu ippidi propose panniya?? apdiye ni solra madiri iruundhidiche..😆 anyways...i hav never seen such a proposal in my life...thank u fr tat...nd awesome awesome dear...i ws laughing lyk hell reading it..nd harry's question ws superb...continue soon..want to see wats next...

hey divi unnoda doubt romba funny aah irukku😆and my answer is naan yaarukum propose pannla adhu ennoda kavidhai mattum dhan k😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
woww ..such a lovely update 😳 .. btw navya akahan gay?? pakka that rakesh ne hi kuch kiya hoga :((
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gowripriya

hey divi unnoda doubt romba funny aah irukku😆and my answer is naan yaarukum propose pannla adhu ennoda kavidhai mattum dhan k😊


appana nalla kavidhai 😆😆 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank u all for liking my updates my dear friends🤗Here is the final part of pt-14

Part14-pt:5

All were having their lunch.The lunch was arranged in a buffey system order.Navya excused from the gang and went 2 add some food 2 her plate.A waiter came nearer 2 her.

Waiter:Ms.Navya mishra?

Navya:yes

Waiter:Mam there is a message for u.u r invited 2 the nearby coffee shop by a gentle man.

Navya(was confused😕):But who is he?

And the waiter went away without saying a word.

Navya turn around and looked everywhere and finally at the gang.Anant was missing there.Grinning smile carved herlips😊.She took shivani from the gang seperately and informed her that she is moving out.

Shivani:But where?

Navya blushed a little😳 and said that it was Anant's order.

Shivani:oh,Ms.navya will obey Mr.Anant's order from now onwards,She wont care any of us na?😉

Navya(patted her head):chup kar😆

Shivani:teek hai,chalo warna Mr.Anant,angry Anant banjayega!😛

Navya went away from there.Then Shivani joined the gang's convo.After some times,Anant too joined the gang without navya.Shivani was puzzled😕.

Shivani:Anant tum?akhele?

Anant:mmm,kyun?

Shivani:Navya kahan hai?

Anant:navya aap sabki saath hai na?

Shivani:woh mujhe bhola tha ki tumne usse bhulaiya!!!

Anant:wht?woh ab kahan gayi?😲

Shivani:patha nahi Anant,She didn't tell the place

At the coffee shop:

The coffee shop is located behind the mall.so the shop seems 2 b little dark even in the morning.She stepped into the shop.Not a single person was there in the shop.She frightened seeing the darkness😲

Navya:Anant where r u?plz cme infront of me.Mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai!!!😲

Back at the mall:

Everyone is searching for navya.Anant was at the peak of the tension.He is enquiring the whole crowd to get atleast the clue of where she went but his efforts ended in vein.Atlast,he met the same waiter and enquired about her.He spluttered everything 2 him.He ran up 2 the place.

At the shop:

Her conscience told her that something was unusual.Out of the blue,the lights were switched on.She was surrounded by Rakesh and his gangsters.She was shocked seeing them😲.

Rakesh(with his evil smile)looked at her😈.

Navya:tum,yahan kya karrahe hnoo?where is Anant?😲

Rakesh:Anant?no one is here I'm the one who called you here (with a tactic smile)😈

Navya:how dare u do tis?If Anant came 2 know tis then u cant b survive in tis world for the next moment!

Rakesh:oh is it?but if husband dies,then her wife will b called as a widow in tis society na?

Navya:Wht r u saying???😕

Rakesh sheltered his hand in his pocket at the meantime and take out the mangalsutra.Navya was gobsmacked and horrified seeing tis.

N:no rakesh,tis wont happen!!!

R:y tis wont happen navya?I got everything whatever I wished from my childhood,but except u,I don't want 2 loose u 2 anyone .I need u 2 be in my life as my wife😡.

N:Rakesh try 2 understand I love Anant and he loves me!!!

R:But I love u navya,y cant u understand that?Y u r so much attracted 2 Anant?wht do u see in Anant that was not present in me?😡

N:Everything Rakesh.At first ,he'll ask my permission.If Anant is there in ur place ,he wont force me to marry him.V'll marry with our parents permission.Bcoz he know that I love my parents equally as i love him.If parents didn't support us,he'll wait for their permission and convince them and then atlast v'll get married.v cant go against their decision at anytime,I've full faith on him.He wont do like tis.But u??

R:just stop narrating ur Anant's ramayan navya!i dnt want 2 hear his name from u anymore,everything will change after v get married!!😡

R:bakwaas bandh karo rakesh,that's enough I'm moving now(and she turned 2 move but he grabbed her hand tightly).

She tried 2 move away from his clutches but she cant.It hurts her more.Rakesh signaled his goons 2 close all the doors.

N:leave me I've 2 go!!

They heard some loud noise.The entrance door came inside flying in the air.Rakesh and navya turned 2 see who was at the door step.It was none other than our hero Anant.He evaded everyone in his way and all the assailants were seen fell at the floor injured and damaged hardly by his strong hits🤢.He tugged Rakesh's shirt collar and dragged him 2 the other side.They collide with each other for more time.Navya in nervousness really worried for Anant😲.Yet again the goons encircled him.Anant tried 2 manage them somehow.In the gap Rakesh escaped from his grasp and taken back the mangalsutra which was fallen in the ground and went near navya.

Navya screamed out"Anant help me".Her cry increases his anger and which in turn he plunged all the gangsters and came out.He striked Rakesh's stomach with a big punch.He fell down in the ground with a big thrust and went 2 lil unconscious.A trail of blood was flowing from his head.

At the same time gang reached the place.

Anant dnt know what he was dng and he take away the mangalsutra from Rakesh's hand and tied it around her necks.

(At The BG)

mangalyam tantunanena mama jiivana hethuna

kante badhnaami subhage sanjiiva Sarada chatam

He sliced his skin with the knife by seizing it from one of the goons and marked his blood with his right hand thumb and put it in navya's maang.But she didn't stop him.She was petrified😲.His eyes were filled with fumes of fire and turned facing rakesh😡.The whole gang stood like a statue.

A:Wht will u do now ?She is not urs anymore,she is mine.v r husband and wife from now onwards😉.

Rakesh was perplexed seeing tis scenario😕.Then Anant moved closer 2 navya and cupped her face in his arms.He leaned closer 2 her and whispered "I Love U Navya"😉and looked deeply into her eyes.There was a passionate liplock between them.It continued for some more time.Navya realized what she was dng and pushed him away from her.She give a slap in his face.It was an unexpected one.Anant and the gang was puzzled at her behaviour😲.Tears streamed down her face😭.She felt tis was the worst thing in her life that should not b happen 2 her.She went away from there as she didn't want 2 face anyone.Anant tried 2 stop her by calling out her name loudly but she didn't listen 2 him.He was filled with pain not bcoz she slapped him ,but the thing is that he felt ,he had hurted her.He realized his mistake what he has done 2 her,without her permission.The girls ran back navya 2 convince her.And the boys tried 2 console Anant.



Sry guys if my update disappoint u all wht 2 do?tis is the story line,plz throw ur comments its so valuable 2 me😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
beech mien jab jagda ho raha tha...i ws laughing a bit...seeing rakesh's foolishness coz i knw tat anant ll surely save navi...aur end mein tho 😔...slappp...actually any girl would do d same...hope she understand's anant's feelings fr doing dis marriage :)))
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update gowri 👍🏼 but slap :( I can understand Navya's situtaion..
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Posted: 12 years ago

@divi,@rashi di

thanx for ur comments but am i disappointed u in tis update?😕

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