RS: Pyaar kiya tho darna kya

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Posted: 13 years ago
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im backkk...

anant n navya happily married n at anant's flat in mumbai wher only both of them are there...(as anant's family is not in mumbai ;))😉

one fine day...

A:navya...aaj main eveng kuch late hi aaonga...kisise milna hain...
N: achhhaa...hm..theek hain...kab tak aaoge?
A: kuch 7-7.30
N:hm..ok..
A:tumhe dar tho nahin lagoginaa..yahan akeleee
N: dar!!!!!!!!!aur mujhe...tum janthe nahin ho ki main SOOPERMAN KI BIWI hoon...aur sooperman ki supergirl ko darrr...ho hi nahin sakthaa...tum aaram se aaooo..
A: achaaa..tho tum sooper biwi hoo...hm...acchii baath hain..tho phir mujhe kya tension hain...accha tho main nikaltha hoon...byee dear..
N: byee..
he gives a hug n kiss n leaves...

navya at home...doing house hold workss..watching tv..surfing net...sleeping...n finally its almost eveng 7...but there was gonna be a heavyyy rain as the climate was veryyy bad...

navya called anant...but his fone was not reachable...suddenly it started raining heavily...with thunder n ligtning...

navya loved rain...but not with thunder n ligtning...she started getting tensed...as it was night n she was alone at home n anant was not there n above all she was afraid of thunder...


she sat on the sofa with her mobile n tried listening to songs in it...but now thunder was very severe that she started fearing...and anant too was not reachable...

suddenlyyy...power went offf...



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Posted: 13 years ago
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now she was totalyyy scared...she dint know what to do...she somehow managed to get a candle...n sat on the sofa with her legs folded n hugging them...she tried anant's fone again n finally he took it..

N:anant kahaan ho tum...
A:navya main yahan traffic main phas gaya hoon...heavy rain se road sab blocked hain...patha nahin main kab tak pauhanchoonga...
N:anant ..yahan bijili bhi nahin hain..aur ooper se yeh baarish aur thunder...tum jaldi aaonaaa...

but still she was not saying that she was scared...as she told him that she is vvery brave...

A: haan navya...main koosish karonnga..tum tension math loo...

navya was almost at the verge of crying...she came back to the sofa n sat there with legs folded n started praying...

n the thunder was at its peak that even her heart beat cud be heard out...

suddenlyyy she felt somone was at the door...n to her bad luck she forgot to lock it...it was just closed...

n in the fade light of candle she saw someone opening it...

Edited by loveshamya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#3
navya was shivering with fear..n she dint know wat to do...her voice got stuk in her throat ...

some how she gained a bit courage n asked
kaun hain...

no response...the man came inside...navya started stepping backwards...but stilll she asked..

kaun hain wahan...

n suddenly due to heavy wind the candlee too got blown off...

now that was the worst state of navya...she cudnt even cry...

the man came near her n caught her n closed her mouth...

she was trying to scream...but in vain...she was trying hard to free herself but the grip was too tight that she cudnt even move...

suddenlyyy power came back...
Edited by loveshamya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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she opened her eyes n slowly turned back...n it was ANANTTT...

she was broken down n almost going to faint...
A: navyaaa...navyaa..main hoon...koi chorr nahin...daroo math..

N: she fell into his arms as she dint have anymore strength to stand up...

A: navyaaa...kya huaa...n he was scared...
he ran to kitchen n brought her water n made her drink...

he switeched on the fan..n comforted her...she was trying hard to breath..n he made her lay down..

A:navya...tum itniii khabaragayii..main tho sirf mazak kar raha tha...

after sometime..she managed to get up...n looked at him with an angryyy face..

N:mazakkk..yeh mazak tha anant..meri jaan nikal gayi...aur tum mazza le rehe thee...n started hitting him with all her anger n sadness...

anant was smiling even though she hit him a lot...n finnalyyy both hugged with all their love...

navya started crying...

N:anant...phir se aise mazak math karnaa...main sehh nahin paaongi...tum janthe ho main kitniii darr gayi thi...

Anant calmed her...caressed her hain..n kissed her...
kyun navya...tum kyun dargayi...tumhi tho kaha tha na...tum soopergirl hoo..tho phir kyun...

N: kuch bhi ho anant...mujhe thunder aur ligthning se bauhat dar laghta hain...aise mausam main tum mujhe kabhhi akele chodke kahin nahin jaana...

A: sirf aise mausam main nahin...iss sooperman kabhi bhi apni soopergirl ko akele nahin chodke jaoonga...yeh mera vaada hain...

n kisses her forehead n cheeks...

they both hugsss n wen there was another strong thunder...navya n anant tightens their grip...
😳

comments are welcome...

Edited by loveshamya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so sweet...wish ye superman n his supergirl hamesha aise hi rahein!
Edited by asihaseen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#6
awsome one dear!!!!!!!! loved itt!!!! please continue with ur RSs love themm!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#7
super RS.. a cute story.. loved reading it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was really a cute one...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanksss to alll..😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb!!!!!!!!! update👏

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