New FF: Opposites Attract Part 28 @ Page 141 & 143 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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eagerly waiting for it pls start soon 😊
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please do start...eagerly waiting for the first update...
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wowii di...nice concept...cont soon 😊
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eagerly waiting for chp 1 ☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello friends 😛,
As I promised, here I am back with another FF. Hope you like this too. Love you all🤗
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Part 1 😊:

The passengers of 9W-119 arriving from Bangalore are waiting for their luggages in baggage claim section. People there at Indira Gandhi Airport are yawning and feeling exhausted after the morning flight. The baggages are kept on the band and the owners are picking them up and keeping on their trolley and leaving from there. Everyone is in hurry burry to get their own and leave. Two blue samsonite bags are coming together. They look exactly the same as if they are twins. They are slowly coming touching each other and as they travelled through the U shaped band, half the way, two of the hands picked them, one each and kept on their respective trolleys. The female hand pulled the trolley to leave from there then.

'Excuse me!' called a nearest voice from behind.

The girl turned looked with her big curvy eyes though sleepy but yet too magnetic fitted on her round face with natural red lips going well with her red top with arms covered with black shrug bottomed with blue jeans. The silver nose ring is giving her a very bindas look. Her long hair with side parting are kept on her right shoulder and she responded 'Yes'

'I guess! Our bags got exchanged' added the voice.

She looks at the fair hand with a silver neelam ring which was showing the number of the baggage tag. She quickly took out the boarding pass out from her handbag and checked the number and realized that the bag is hers and replied 'Oh Ya! That's mine' and the hand checks the tag of the one kept on her trolley and transfers that to the other trolley and picked and kept hers on her trolley on which she said 'Thanks' and the tall figure was about to leave when she called 'Excuse me'

He looked back with his brown eyes sleepy too with small fair face but atleast alert to check if he has picked up the right one. He is wearing a brown round body fitted t-shirt bottomed with light blue jeans said 'Yes'

She goes near him gazing at his eyes. He also looks at her and wonders what happened. She raises her hand and points towards his shades kept on his head with her finger. He looks up raising his eyebrows and removes his shades and looks at them and sees the price tag which he had forgotten to remove and looks at her to which she smiled and leaves from there with her belongings on the trolley. He also smiles and looks at the shades and removes the tag. He had purchaged it last night but out of sleepiness he forgot to remove it and had worn it without realizing.

'This is not possible Navya' shouted Manoj Mishra, a jewellary business man in Noida. 'I won't let this happen till I am alive'

'But papa!' said Navya with tears in her eyes standing beside Leela Mishra, her mother.

'I don't want any argument' added in a rough voice and left from there.

Navya thew her handbag on the sofa out of anger and left from there too with her mom still standing unable to understand whom to support.

Manoj goes to his room and picks up the phone and said 'Ram, let's have it tomorrow itself?

The next day the ladies are busy in the kitchen preparing snacks for the guests. Leela is montoring the maid who is dusting the house. It's a big flat with a drawing room with cream colour three piece sofa with a LCD placed facing opposite to them adjoining a dining space where a six seater glass top dining table is placed.

The bell rang and Manoj goes and opens the door.

'Welcome, my friend, come!' said Manoj smiling and hugging his childhood friend Ram 'Bhabhiji, please come in' and they went inside and sat on the sofa. 'Where is Anant?'

'He will come in sometime' replied Ram. He had to pick some stuff from a shop.

'Ok' nodded Manoj and started talking.

Leela comes and greets both of them saying 'Namaste' and sits near Kavita and starts talking.

'Navya?' asked Kavita, Anant mother. 'It's been a long time since we have seen her'

Leela said she will get her and goes to the inside room.

Navya enters the hall wearing a red kurta and green churi bottom with her dupatta tugged on her neck and her hair is left open. She is looking beautiful with golden jhumka with very light makeup and her eyes are decorated with only kajal. Her head is bowed and Leela makes her sit near Kavita. Kavitha moved her hand over her head and said 'You are looking very beautiful'. Navya looks at her and gives her a smile.

'Look, Anant has also come' said Ram.

Everyone out there looked at the tall slim figure dressed in white khadi shirt nicely tugged on his light blue jeans with dark brown belt and brown shoes. Navya lifts her head to look at him and then

To be continued...

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Edited by Shaya_123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first of all thanks soo much for starting a new1 :)
awesome start ..luved it ..entry was rocking 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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what a beautiful start👍🏼⭐️👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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good start ... waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks dear for the new FF. Awesome dear. Please continue.
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#30
wow what a starting yaar!awesome!!!👏can't wait for the next part...please update it daily

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