''Mohabat ka aghaaz hai''update at pg 30 - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anamika_0

sooo nicee..update soon..

thanks 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it... I hope to get the next update soon.. and now we have a set of words used by naina ;) don't we.. love to read on your update with those kickass words..;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
another cute update,nice...please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sifarah

loved it... I hope to get the next update soon.. and now we have a set of words used by naina ;) don't we.. love to read on your update with those kickass words..;)

I will tr to contiue soon!
btw do u want me to add more Naina dialogues!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank u to all for liking my writing!
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for that nice and sweet update...😊 please continue sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update dear...cont. plz 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
I will try to continue soon!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Almost two weeks passed in between it Sharikh and Naina usually met eachother spend qulaity time with eachother because both are getting busy in their own Lives But ofcourse getting busy in their Lives doesnot mean this there love for eachother is getting less in these two weeks once they had a small argument and they dnt talked to eachother for 2 3 days but after all they are in true love so soon they patch up now Naina's Birthday is coming soon Sharikh wants to celebrate that day with all alone with Her but somewhere He knows might its not possible because alot of People in these days gathered Naina still He has hope one day in early morning they meet eachother in a cafe.
S:Naina kitne din hugaye hum ne theekh tarah se baith ke baat nai ki
N:kya karun main ajjkal bht se chezoon mei busy hunn
S:busy tu main bhi hunnn likin
(He stops for a moment Naina holding Sharikhs hands)
N:Tum aisa kabhi mat sochana tum mere liye sab se zyada impotant hu they aur hamesha rahu ge
S:agar aisa hai tu mujhe aisa kun nai lagata?
(Making a sad face)
N:Tum plz aise baatein mat karu mere he gahlte hai maine he tumhe aise udaas kardia
S:nai Naina main janta hunnn is mei tumhare ghalte nai main he zyaada
N:ainda se main tumhe ab kabhi bhi ye ehasaas nai hune dunge paka (tightining his hand)
S:😊
N:Acha ye bato tumne pechle dinun sab ku itna tang kun kia ?
S:kaisa tang?😉
N:tum jante hu main kis bare mei baat karae hunnn tumhe pata bhi hai sab ne mujhse pochana shuru kardia ab main unhein kahte bhi tu kya isliye maine khamosh rehana theekh samjha
S:pata nai Naina jab bhi mai pareshaan hun mera maan kisi bhi kaam mei nai lagata tum ye sab churu aur bato tumhara BIRTHDAY araha hai kya socha hai kaise celebrate karuge?
N:Kuch khass nai bus yunhi pata nai Sharikh kya karunge
S:kahin apne dosre Freinds ke sath party karne ka iraada tu nai
(Naina knows that he dnt like it much he teased her)
N:Haan unhi ke sath plan hai😉
(Sharikh was lill sad inside showed He is happy)
S:ye tu bht ache baat hai tum unke sath celebrtae karu main tu wase bhi kuch dinun ke liye out of CITY jaraha hunn
N:Haha Sharikh tumhe itna jhoot bolne ki zururat nai main ye Birthday sirf aur sirf tumhare sath hi celebrate karunge
(Sharikh became happy )
S:Naina tumna bht naught hugae hu
N:kya karun tumhare sath rehane ka asaar hai
S:mere sath ya?😉
N:anyways chalo ab chalte hain
S:haan theekh hai chalo
(They leave that place and moved on)

This is Not the end but yet I cannot write further I think the main thing is conveyed in it so I dnt think its right to stretch it further!
Hope u will Understand
Once again thanks to all who waits for it and always appreciated me!
Sorry if I disappointed anyone!
Your valuable comments are welcome😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow lovely sweet update ...continue soon

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