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loveshamya

@loveshamya

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Posted: 13 years ago

guys...im back with another SS...plzz giveu r feed back...its a bit long..so im posting it in 2-3 parts...

so it has been almost 2 months since college got over n anant n navya

havnt met in b/w since all these days..even though they talk on fone many

times a day they really misses each othervery badly..

in b/w anant has been to his family in jammu too n navya was missing

him even more then..even after he returned they cudnt meet. every day

every miute n every second they missed each other...

n finally anant receieves a call that he have to go to switzerland for some

play with another actress ... this made navya very much sad as she cudnt

go with him..even anant wanted to go with her..but he too was helpless...

n finally he leaves for switzerland...n navya was in tears as he is going

abroad...her pain further increased as he wont be there for a few days to

call her n mssg her...

navya was at home all time dreaming about him n missing him n loving

him more n more...

finally after a week..he returns...but still they are not able to meet...anant

very well knew wat navya was feeling n how much she is missing

him...bcoz he too was missing her like hell...

the day he returned was the telecast of his show n navya was a bit happy

that she cud see him atleast on screen...

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loveshamya

@loveshamya

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Posted: 13 years ago

even though he came back he dint call her till the show got over...n navya was upset as it was a honeymoon track n she was sooo much upset to see anant with another girl...

she was heart broken ...she wanted to cry aloud..but somehow managed to control herself...

her mom n dad was not at home that day n she n her bro-sis was alone at home...both of them went to sleep earlier as they had exams the other day...navya cudnt eat anything...she was wandering here n there in her room...but she dint know that he was returning that day n anant dint inform her too...

navya cudnt sleep...cudnt even lay properly on her bed..she was totally restless...she felt like she is loosing something very important in her life...something more important than her heartbeat or her breath...

time passed by ...it was almost 1 at night...she still was wandering in her room..looking in to her mobile...with a false belief that anant will call her now...

she sat on the chair of her dressing table..looking in to the mirror...tears were faling down her cheeks...suddenly her fone starts ringing...n she saw the name"ANANT CALLING.."... she was confused...wether she was happy or sad ...whter she need to smile n jump of joy or cry aloud...

she took the call...

navyaaa...

hm...

kaisi ho navyaaa...

hm..theek hoon...(her sound was shivering n words wer broken...he cud recognise her pain from her voice...)

tum roo rehi hoo??????????

there was a silence ...n he understud wats happng with her...

she was still looking down n trying to control her emotions so that he doesnt know...

A: tumne mujhe miss kiyaa??????????
N: hm...(at the verge of breaking down...)
A: kitnaa miss kiyaa...?
N: bahaut...aur tumne?
A: hm..main bhi...tumne show dekhi?
N:hm...
A :kaisa tha?
N: hm...accha tha...(she removed the phone from her ears n cries...)
A: navya tum roo rehi hooo...? tumhe patha hain na mujhe ronaa bilkul pasand nahin hain...?

suddenlyyy... a hand comes from her behind n wipes her tears...she was shockeeedd n turns around to see ...IT WAS ANANT IN HER ROOMMM...he climbed up her window n she dint even know...

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loveshamya

@loveshamya

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Posted: 13 years ago

she dint ask him how he reached her room...she dint ask anything...she was totallyyy broken down...she wanted to cry her heart...she fell into his arms as if she lost her last bit of energy sustain...he tooo took her into his arms n both cried themselves to the fullest...there wer no words...justtt anant n navya n their judaai ka gham...both wer like 2 fishes who got into water after a loong time been kept out...

after a very longgg hhug n cry..anant finally gained the normal state...he wiped his tears n hers too...

navyaa...baasss..ab aur rona nahin...baaasss..

anant...maine tumheee kitnaaa miss kiyaa yeh tum soch bhi nahin sakthe hoo...kabhi kabhimujhe aisa laga ki meri saasen rukk gayi hain..main aur jee nahin saktiii...

baass navyaa..ab main hameshaaa tumhare saath hoon...har pal...kabhi tumhe chode nahin jaoonga...

n he cheers her up...

anant tumne yaahan kaise aayaa...

hm..tum tho janthi hona main balcony climbing expert hoon...;)😉

n they both laugh n hugs...

both of them sit on her bed...

A: tumne kuch nahin khaya hain na navyaa
N: tumhe kaise patha?
A: main tho apni jhalli ko jaantha hoon na...mujhe patha tha show dekhne ke baad tum kuchhh bhi nahin khaya hoga...issiliye main tumhareliyee butta laya hoon...

navya suddenly goes low...anant...jab maine tumhe kisi aur ladki ke saath dekhaa tho...

A: navyaa...tumhe patha hain na...woh tho sirf ek show hain..uss main kya hain...lekin tum tho meri jaan hooo...main kahin bhi jaooo..kisi ke saath bhi kaam karooo...mereliyeee tum hameshaaa tum hi rehogiii...

navya smiles...n leans to his shoulders...main jaanthi hoon anant...phir bhi...

ab enough...yeh butta khaloo...

anant lekin yeh tho sirf ek hi hain...

haan hum donno keliyee ek hi kaafi hain naa...;)n he winks...both enjoys the butta...

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@loveshamya

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Posted: 13 years ago

it was almost night 2-2.30 n navya was alright now..back to her enrgy...n anant too was happy ...

A: accha main chaltha hoon...raat bahauttt hogayi hain..tum so jaooo...
N: navya holds his hand n says" kya...bilkulll nahin...jab tum aaye ho itni raat ko main tumhe subah tak jaane nahin doongi...aur yahaan mom dad bhi nahin hain...issiliye mujhe koi daar nahin.."

A: acchaaa...tho hum kya karne wale hainnn..n comes closer to her..
N: hum kuchhh bhi aise waise nahin karnewale hain...n pushes him back...bass subah tak aise ek doosre ke paas baithkar khooobb saare baatein karengee...

both smiles...

both goes to her window n sits there locked in each others arms...

(rember how prince charming n rapunzel sits on the castle window?)

slowly slowly they fall asleep locked in each other...

it was about 5 in the morng wen navyas mob alarm start ringing...n both of them wakes up suddenly...

A: ohh...subah hogayi hainn...navya ab thomujhe chalna chahye...isse pehle ki koi mujhe yahaan deklheee...

N: ab hum kab milenge anant...ab tho main tum bilkul bhimiss nahin kar sakthi...

A: dont worry navya...main bahaut jald aaoongaa...tumhe lene keliye...car pe nahin...ghode pe...aur hum pooori duniya ko batayenge ki...navya anant ki hain aur anant navya ka...

aur ek baath acchi tarah samajhlo navya...kuch bhi ho jaye...koi bhi show aaye jaayee...

HUM KABHI JUDA NAHIN HONGE...

they hugs n he kisses her on her forhead...

accha...bye...main chaltha hoon...

n he leaves climing down her window...she keeps looking at him with a smile till he reaches down n got into his car ...he gives a flying kiss to her n she gives it backk..n he leaves...

n navya ..back to her dreamy world...

hope u all like it... do give me the feedback..

my prev RS n SS..

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3100253

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3119847

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3130445

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divya

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Posted: 13 years ago

waw nice yar, lovely rs, juz loved it, beautiful rs n ts wel written, do write more..

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smivas

@smivas

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Posted: 13 years ago

😊 thank u for this...😃 please continue...

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Parami

@Parmasone

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Posted: 13 years ago

woo tht ws awsomeee:) Loved itt:))

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Aishwarjya

@Aishwarjya

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Posted: 13 years ago

Very nicely written..😊if possible pls continue..

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loveshamya

@loveshamya

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Posted: 13 years ago

thanku all again...for all the comments...will try more...😊

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banfasha

@banfasha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#10

how I Praise u Iam confused now u cannot imagine how much I liked it I loved this anya story based on Shamya plz plz plz contnue atleast is ku parhane ke badd dil u dimagh ku tasli milte hai n we feel happy ...

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