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neethuuu 😃 and a hai to you ... how are you?
and thanks for the updates...:))) do update when time favours... will wait for it :)
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thank u 4 two lovely updates 😊
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welcome back Neethu,finally updated n that too 2 lovely updates...😃 eagerly waiting for their meeting...now can't wait for next part
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First of all Welcome Back..🤗..Amazing update!!👏⭐️.please continue soon!😊
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CHAPTER 11

evenin in mishra mansion:

deepak 'navya beta tum tayar ho gayi kya??jaldi karo beta..bajpayee ji aathe hi honge..'

navya in her room..

navya 'haan papa tayar hu..aap andar aa jao..'

deepak enters the room n was surprised and delighted to see his daughter in an ethnic wear for the first time..navya was wearing a beautiful baby pink anarkali salwar with pista green pant n dupatta..she luked ravishin in the outfit wit big pista green jhumkas n mang tika...

deepak 'aare wah meri beti toh bohut hi khubsoorat lag rahi hai..' n kisses her forehead
navya 'aapko accha laga na papa..??'
deepak 'ofcourse..pehli baar jo tumhe aise dekh raha hu..'

navya hugs her dad n even appy-ritz hugs them.

in bajpayee mansion:

om: anant tayar ho??
ranbir:han chachu..tayar hai woh..do min dee jiye..
anant:arre yaar..enough..aur kitna tayar hu main??
ranbir:pehli baar ladki dekhne ja raha hai yaar..
anant:but maine navya ko toh already dekh liya hai.
ranbir:oh god..idiot..i knw that but officially shaadi honewali hai tumhari navya se..soo
anant:kya farak padhna hai,..i hate her n she hates me..lets go chalo..

they leave to mishra mansion..in mishra mansion deepak welcomes anant n his family with full customs and traditions..om
is very much happy with the welcome they received..anant touches deepak's feet nad even ranbir follows him..

deepak:baitiye om prakashji..anant n ranbir beta aap bhi baitho
om:ji deepak ji aap bhi baithiye..

they all sit ..ritz n appy will also be standin ther..ranbir and ritz share few stares..

deepak:ritz aur appy beta..navya ko lekar aao..
ritz:haan uncle abhi aaye..

they go to navya's room

ritz:navya chal..aa gaye woh log
appy:bulava aa gaya ji..kya mast lag raha hai yaar anant..
navya:woh sadu na jitna bhi handsome dike..fayda nahi hai..woh chehre par na hi smile hoti hai..na hi koi feelin..
ritz:shaadi ke baad uska chehra dekh lena sab dikhega..

ritz n appy start gigglin..

navya:shut up..main toh adi ke baare main soch rahi hu..i soo hate ananth
ritz:dekho navya yeh sab tum apne papa ke liye kar rahi ho na..so no scene..chalo
navya:k..
appy:pls smile kar meri ma..

navya throws a fake smile showin all her 32 teeth..

appy:yeh zyada ho gaya..thoda kam kar de..:P

they all walk towards the hall..navya is walkin down stairs..deepak,om n ranbir look at navya and are extremely happy seein her as she was like absolutely stunnin

ranbit:anant dekh toh sahi navya ke taraf..bohut hi zyada khoobsura lag rahi hai yaar..
anant:nt interested..
ranbir:mere bhai dek to

anant finally looks at navya n fr a moment his heart skip a beat..she looked angelic in pink salwar kameez..he just kept
lookin at her..lost completely in her beauty..fr the first time a smile curved his lips..ranbir looked at anant and was literallt shocked to see the smile
in ananth's face..

ranbir:not bad..!
anant:(back to his senses)huh??kya hua??
ranbir:wohi toh main pooch raha hu..tujhe kya hua??
anant:nothin..

ranbir starts gigglin and ananth bites his teeth and hits him tight..

ranbir:ayyii..

navya comes and sits in front of anant..

deepak:mujhe lagtha hai ananth aur navya ko akele main baat karni chahiye..
om:haan mujhe bhi yahi lagtha hai..akhir in dono ko apni aage ki zindagi saat main bithani hai..

hearin this anant n navya look at each other shocked..

deepak: navya beta tum anant ko terrace par le jao..
navya:(shocked)k papa..

then anant n navya walk from there like innocent n good kids..the moment they disappear from the sight of their parents and others

navya:gosh pata nahi kya kya natak karna padega..
anant: wohi toh..tum ek no ki nautanki ho..
navya:wat do u mean?(poutin)
anant:aur nahi toh kya..waise toh har waqt western outfits pehen ke ghoomti ho..aaj achanak se poori dhaki hui ho??
navya:zubaan samhalo k..wat do u mean huh??
anant:itna sab natak ki kya zaroorat hai..n wat nonsense yeh baat waat kyun??
navya:shut up k..tum toh aise baat kar rahe ho ki main taras rahi thi tumse baat karne..my foot!
anant:toh waha kyun apna muh nahi khola..keh dethi ki baat karne ki zaroorat nahi hai
navya:kyun tumhare muh par tala laga tha??tum nahi bak sakthe the??
anant:hey mind ur language k..
navya:u mind ur language..

n both of then turn n stand in opposite direction..

this was not a surprise as this was very well known for ritz,appy n ranbir who wer standing behind the pillar n watchin this
Mahabharath!

ritz:yeh dono abhi se aise hai..aage kya hoga
appy:dhamaka!
ranbir:(gulping)bhagwaan bachaye mujhe..
ritz n appy:huh??tum kaha se beech main aa agye??
ranbir:shaadi ke baad toh yeh dono saat main rahenge..aur main inke saat wohi ghar main rahunga..toh jhelna toh mujhe hi
padega na??(sad face)
appy:(pattin his back)all the best..

anant:main ja raha hu..
navya:rukne ke liye kisne kaha hai??

anant's face turns red kyunki kisiki himmat nahi hui aajtak ki usse ulta jawab de..

anant:hell wit u(grittin his teeth)
navya:same here..(fake smile)

they both walk downstairs again..n the moment they reach the sight of their parents they again act normal n start walkin together..

om:so baat ho gayi??
anant:haan dad..
om:toh fir teek hai mishra ji..hum log chalthe hai..kal milenge aur panditji se milkar rasmn ke saare dates fix kar lenge.
deepak:bilkul teek bajpayee ji..zaroor..

the anant,ranbir n om leave the place..

~~END CHAPTER 11~~

k guys sorry is too short word..i knw u guys must hav forgotten this ss..to be frank had dropped the plans of continuin writin but got lots of pm's requesting me to continue writin..its all u readers and ur appreciation that matters to me..
so planned to continue this ss as well as the other one..navya forum is special for me in all sense so love u guys n happy reading!
pls hit the like button n do comment.

Thank You
**neetha**

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