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vanshu90

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

awesome update!!!! waitin 4 d nxt part:)

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Dr Neelima Menon

@neelima_menon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#212

wow !!!!!!!!!! great update neetha dear!!!!!!!!!

cant wait for d next !!!!!!!!

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neetha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: -diva-shamya-
firstly a very very big 🤗 for the awwwsome update.. waise inzar karay ana reply keliye.. ye le updating all of it..
for the 3rd epi:
that was absolutely mindblowing.. excellent.. anant ko imagine karke behosh hone wali thi.. ☺️ navya ko toh pooch na hi mat.. 😳 n hot... song for dance was juz perfect..
but i juz wish navi culd hav seen tht jerk flirting.. adiii i wanna kill him... 😡

for 4th epi:
this chap was absolutely waw filled.. anya dancing.. haye so dreamy.. and the songs adds more to it.. 😍 anya's guesture imagine karne layak tha yaar.. i wish i culd see this on tv..
btw ran-ritz scene was lovely..
anya agar nafrat karte aise hai toh pyar karte.. 😍 phewww am gonig besharam.. anyways lovely update... 1 more tigth 🤗 the update..

for 5th epi:
the very first scene was breath taking here.. bechara apna bramhachari anant toh gaye kaam se.. aur navya toh juz ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
anya bechare ghar wapis aane ke baad bhi party se nahi laute.. and yes its excellent meating again in fashion show.. now i juz cant wait for next update.. plz update soon... dont make us wait more.. 🤗

thank u soo much divi..all the epi ke saare comments i finally git it..love ya..🤗

Originally posted by: navya19
Wow another superb update...loved anya scene. Update next part soon.

thanx alot nisha😃

Originally posted by: Sagar_Minhaz
Navya fainted!! That means that guy is a bad one. Cann't wait 4 how anant survives navya. Really good one di. Waiting 4 d next😊

yes the guy is a bad one..😆thanx alot bro..m glad u liked it😃

Originally posted by: rashi_anya
neetha superb update👏 luved it 😳
but vy small update next time want big😉

thanx alot dee..sorry fr the chotu update..😃

Originally posted by: rashvin
heee loved Anant's fingers crawling over navya's bare back n navya bumping over his chest... lovely Anya's reaction n talks to deir frnz wen dey met again...

aww thanx dee..u liked tat scene..😛

what a lovely update, loving the interesting story line that you are weaving, shall wait eagerly for the next update..

thanx alot malini..story is very interestin dea..m glad ur likin the way m takin it😃

Originally posted by: crazzymoon
Lovely update

thanx dea😃

Originally posted by: ArushiLuvs_Anya
wow this story is really getting very interesting so that guy was a not a gud one and he had mixed something in the juice thats why navya faints ...hope anant saves her.
cont. soon!!

thanx alot arushi..m glad u liked the story line😃

Originally posted by: Prince_Anant
awesom ss dr

thanx alot talha..😃

Originally posted by: nature7
nyc...

thanx a lot 😃

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neetha

@neetha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: momorockz
oye lovely update pagal
hayee bechari navya faint ho gayi

thanx pagal..😃

Originally posted by: shahz
Superb yaar..plz update soon waiting anxiously don't leave us hanging plz. 😛

thanx...😃.sorry i keep u ppl hangin..😛but i hav to yaar as a writer..😉

Originally posted by: bharathi.ks
lovely update. ANYAs scene was awesome to read. Thank u. Plsss update next part...

thanx dea😃

Originally posted by: anyalover
pllzzz jaldi se nxt update karo yr...me eagrly waitng akhir hoa kea navya ko?

m happy u liked it dea😃

Originally posted by: shibrah_rafaqat
o wow...really fantastic...jaldi update karo na yaar...cn't wait!!!!navya z being kidnapped ri8?

thnx yaar..navya isnt kidnapped..😛

Superbb update dii..nd wats happened to navya? Update soon...i cant wait!!!

tjanx alot dea😃

thanks for updating ws waiting to read ll comment after some time 😃 ll b bck with comment later im sure must b gr8...done with reading the update is superb really amazing the first scene was beautifully written i ws turnig red while imagining the scene ☺️ the rest of the update was equally beautiful but but... want to read more need to knw wht happen next i knw its d=nt easy to updt soon but wht to do the way u end ur chaps it make us to read more do cnt soon

thanx alot liana..seriolsy m happy readin ur comment😃

I know, I know what's gonna happen next. She'll faint, and that moron will try to harm her, when Superman saves the day!😃YAY!! Continue soon!!

yes superman saved her..but fate..!!!😉

fantastic update yaar,,, mein tho 😍 dream kar rahi thi
neetha tum wrter ban jao, ek PH kholthe hai and inn dodno ko ussme cast karthe hai... arey arey mujse gussa math hona... plz loved yr update, jaldi se continue karo, warna penalty bharni padegi.

thanx dee..gussa nahi hu..i feel grt wen ppl tel me to be shamya ke show ke writer😃

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neetha

@neetha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: son_s
wooow...very nice pls update next chp soon

thanx a lot dea😃

Originally posted by: samrutha
oye idiot 🤔whr did u put an end.. wat happened to out payari navya
continue soon.

idiot..suspense toh bantha hai na..😉

Originally posted by: parmazone
great great great cant wait :) fr the next chpter.. i can feel whts gnna hppn sooo excitedd!!!!!!

thanx alot yaar😃yes it will be excitin😉

Originally posted by: seenavas
its gets interesting thanks dear loved it sorry for the late comment

thanx seena...😃come on u dont hav to be sorry😊

Originally posted by: -Appsy-
Super super super wow! :D
Your ss is the only relievin thing happenin to me these days!
Please update asap coz now, m really very curious to know as to how Anant will save her ;)

thanx arpan..😃

love ya😳

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Parsh_shamya

@Parsh_shamya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#216

luvly epi's di missed to commment nd very sry for dat...so much to study...:(

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neetha

@neetha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: rabia_shamya
awsome it's amazind lovely

thanx rabia😃

Originally posted by: ggimara_shamya
WoooW Superb👍🏼

thanx a lot gracie😃

Originally posted by: Aishwarajya
Wonderful...👏👏👏👏⭐️[/QOUTE]

thanx dea😃

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neetha

@neetha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#218

CHAPTER 6

navya is unconcious nw..the guy takes navya in his arms n heads towards a

room..he places navya on bed n calls to someone..

stranger:hello kaam ho gaya kya??

guy:yes sir..navya ab bedroom main hai..mere saath..

stranger:gud..ab tumhe pata hai na kya karna hai??

guy:dont worry sir..main sab handle kar lunga..

stranger:koi bhi galthi nahi honi chahiye..main deepak mishra ko sabak sikhana

chahtha hu..

guy:ho jayega sir..

stranger:miss navya mishra ki ashleel tasveeron ka mms jaldi mujh tak aur poori

duniya ko pahunch jana chahiye..

ananth passed by the room..room door was a little open n anant saw navya on the

bed..he was totally shocked to see her ther..he neared the room door n he heared

this moron spkin..

guy:apka badla zarror poora hoga..is navya ki aise ashleel tasveerein

kheechunga..ki fir woh deepak mishra duniya ke saamne apna chehra uta nahi

payega..uski izzat ki darjiya udjayenge..

anant was utterly shocked wit wat he heard..he rushed to the room..the guy was

shockd to see anant in the room..

anant:navya ko chod do..warna accha nahi hoga..

guy:oh Mr.anant bajpayee..aap iss jhamele main nahi pade toh accha hai..

anant:just shut up..main tumhe acche se samjha raha hu..navya ko chod do

warna..(n he holds the guys collar)

guy:oh so aap navya ko yahan bachane aaye hai..no ways anant..

anant turned like a furious tiger..he folded his fist so tight tat his nerves

made a clear mark on his hand..his jaw was soo very tight.he pushed the guy so

hard tat he directly went n hit the wall..he was still on the floor tryin hard to

get up..he directly picked up the guy frm the floor..n he hit him tight on his

face..the fight turned more serious..the guy's condition was nw pathetic..he

somehow managed to escape frm anant's hand n jumped off the window..

anant face had tat aggression..still bitin his teeth hard..he then turned towards

navya n his face slowly calmed down..he rushed to her n sat next to her on the

bed..

anant:(his hands on her cheeks)navya uto..ankhein kholo navya..shit!!!

he sprinkles water on her face..he tries his level best to wake her up,,he slowly

places few slaps on her face too tryin to wake her up..he just neared her face

in ths process wit no wrong intentions though..suddenly the room turns noisy..n

light flashes all around the room..here they are wrong ppl at wrong tym..MEDIA

PPL..!anant just lost his senses fr a while..he was shocked to see them..

press1:anant bajpayee..kya chal raha hai aapke aur navya mishra ke beech..

press2:ek party main aap dono aise..koi jawab hai apke paas..

press3:aap business tycoon om bajpayee ke bete hokar itni ghinoni harkat?

anant:yeh aap log kaise bakwaas kar rahe hai..mere aur navya ke beech aisa kuch

nahi hai..

press4:agar kuch nahi hai..toh aap dono ek kamre main aise..??

navya slowly opens her eyes unaware of the hopeless situation she is gonna face

in mins..her head was heavy..she slowly opened her eyes n she cud hear wierd

noises..then she opened her eyes n the sight in front of her eyes was

shockin..she had no idea abt wat had happened wit her..

navya:yeh ho kya raha hai..

nw press pounced on navya..

press1:yeh lo sab kuch toh yeh log karthe hai..aurr fir humse poochthe hai ki kya

hua??

press2:in ameer zadon ka yahi hai..koi sharam naam ki cheez hi nahi..

anant:bakwaas band karo..aisa kuch nahi hai..

the ppl in the party also get crowded thr..ranbir n appy also get into tat

room..they wer shocked to see anant n navya together n the worst part was the

questions of press wic seemed really disgustin..anant luked at ranbir..ranbir

gestured abt wats happenin..anant signed ranbir to go down soon n get the car

out..so tat they can leave frm thr..ranbir pulls appy n runs away frm thr to do

wat anant said..after 3mins anant gets a msg anant holds navya's hand they rush

out clearin the mob..they walk as fast as possible n the press too follows them

clickin their pictures..

navya:anant ho kya raha hai??

anant:tum ab chup chap yaha se chalo..main baad main bata tha hu..

they rush towards the parkin lot..ranbir n appy both wer ready wit their

respective cars..navya sits in her car n anant sits in his care n they drove

off..

ranbir:anant wahan ho kya raha tha??

anant repeats the whole flashbacks to ranbir..

ranbir:oh shit!!matlab koi navya se..god..accha hua tu tym pe pohunch gaya

anant..

anant:haan she is saved..lekin jo museebat humare sar anewali hai uska kya??

dad ko pata chal gaya..toh..humari saari reputation mitti main mil jayegi

ranbir..

ranbir:tu chill kar..we ll handle..navya aur tum dono janthe hai ki tum dono ki

beech aisa kuch nahi hai..so dont worry..

anant:lekin press achanak se wahan kaise aa gayi..??

ranbir:yeh shayad poori planin ke saat ki gayi thi..

appy:navya tum wahan room main kaise pohunch..tum washroom gayi thi na..

navya explained abt the guy she met..n she had no clue abt wat had happened

next..

appy:matlab..anant khamaka phas gaya,..

navya:shayad..lekin woh ladka chahtha kya tha..n press kaha se agayi..aur anant

waha kaise pohunch gaya.

appy:woh sab chod navya..yeh soch agar kal uncle ko pata chalega toh..

navya:oh shit..appy dad ka repuatation..unki izzat..goshh yeh kya ho gaya

yaar..papa ko kya muh dikhaungi..

the guy called his boss to inform this news

guy:sir gadbad ho gayi..

stranger:wat??shit kya kardiya tumne??

guy:sir woh galat waqt par anant bajpayee wahan phunchgaya..

stranger:wat bajpayee..fir kya hua??

guy:press waha pohunch gayi sir..aur media ne un dono ke baare main kuch aur hi

samajh liya..

stranger:chalo kuch to accha hi hua..ek teer se do nishane..(laughs loudly)

anant n navya reached their respective houses..navya's dad was out of

station..appy decided to stay wit navya..they called ritz n tld her abt it..she

too gt completely tensed n had sa sleepless night..navya just kept rollin on bed

gettin the flashback of hw press had reacted to them..anant on the other side was

also extremely tensed..he too had flashbacks of abt hw the press wer questionin

him..such cheap questions..his mind was completely blank..fr the first tym anant

bajpayee was stuck in such situations and he had no way to come out...

next day mornin

navya's dad reached back to mumbai as he gt ths news..every newspaper n news

channels had this news as their headlines..navya's dad was calm n sensible man

who loved n believed his daughter..but the situation turned him a little rude..he

rushed home n started yellin at top of his voice..

deepak:navya..bahar aao..

navya heared her dad at the first call itself..she started tremblin..even appy t

scared at deepak's voice..navya ran dowstairs..n was standin right in front of

her dad..

deepak:(on the tv)kya hai yeh sab??

navya:wo..wo..

deepak:kya woh woh navya..i need an answer..(shoutin)

navya:(shook in fear)papa woh..meri koi galthi nahi hai..(tears rolled dwn her

cheeks)

deepak:thn wat the hell is this??(shoutin)

navya:its all wrong papa..plss believe me..

deepak:maine hamesha tumhe saari freedom di thi na navya..aur tumne mere izzat ke

baare main ek baar bhi nahi socha???(tears rolled down his eyes n he fell on th

sofa)

navya:plss papa..(she sat on the floor,holdin her dads feet,still cryin)main aisa

kuch bhi nahi kar sakthi jiske wajah se apko logon ke saamne jhukna pade..yeh sab

ek gallat fami hai.

n she explained everythin to her dad..exactly wat had happened wit her..her dad believed her n kept his hand on her head.

anant's house:

anant reached his dining table fr mornin breakfast..he knew tat this news had

spread like a fire..he even read the mornin news paper whose headlines was abt

him n navya..he even saw the tv news channels who telecated only one news frm

mornin...his dad and ranbir wer already in the breakfast table..om's face was

total red in anger..

om:kya hai yeh sab anant??

anant:dad meri koi gathi nahi hai..(confidently)

om:tumhe is baat ka andaza bhi hai..ki yeh news aag ki tarah feil raha hai..meri

izzat ki dharjiya ud rahi hai..

anant:sirf aapki ki hi izzat nahi dad..meri reputation bhi kharab ho gayi hai..

om:lekin tumari baat karne ki tameez ab tak nahi badli..

anant:maine kuch galat nahi kiya..so i wont bother much..i care a damn..

sayin so he left the dining table n rushed to his room to get ready fr his

office..ranbir knew anant very well..anant never had a gud relation wit his

dad..nor his dad ever tried n understud his son..

ranbir:chacha ji..main anant ke taraf se aap se mafi mangtha hu..

om:nahi beta..aaj tak anant ne kabhi bhi mujhse teek se baat kara hi nahi..

ranbir explained the whole matter to om, n om too realised tat ther was no fault

of anant..

~~~END OF CHAPTER 6~~~

k guys sorry fr the late update,,bbut i had ma personal reasons..well i had tld

u,this update is nt romantic but interestin one..m sure none of u had gussed it

wud go ths way..nice twist na???though parents knw tat anant n navya dint do

anythin wrong..wat abt the world..??who will make them understand??will they ever

understand??so wait to decode these questions in the next chap..hit the like

button n do comment:D:D

Thank u

**Neethu**

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Anisha06

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Posted: 13 years ago

#219

superb neethu👏 vy intersting😊

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divya

@-Divya.S-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#220

wah neethu, back wth a bang, excellent, great going, kya twist hai yar, loved it.. and if am nt wrng, tht stranger is so cald boyfrnd mr.adi, 😡 but i loved d update, juz cant wait to read d next chapters yar, plz continue asap, 🤗 love u too..

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