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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
Awesome yaar. lovely update... eagerly waiting for your next update... 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
nicely written neetha, it is 100% different 4m our navya, bt i really like ur SS, u have a amazing skill on writing
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
firstly congo 4 ua new job
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
neeta plzz update the page no: in the title wen u post a new update...i missed many of the updates...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
CHAPTER 3

the whole day navya was wid adi as it was valentine's day n anant was busy wit his business n meetings..it was evenin 6:00 nw..

anant's office:
ranbir:chal chal jaldi kar..ghar jaathe hai aur fir change karke mall chalthe hai..
anant:nahi yaar tu ja..main presentation ki tayari kartha hu..
ranbir:no ways yaar anant..kya hai..tu chalega abhi plss..pls..plss(potin like a kid)
anant:kya bacchon jaisi zidd kar raha hai..accha teek hai chalta hu..
ranbir:gud bhai..ab chal..

they both leave the office.

navya's college

navya:aapy ritz jaldi karo..mall jana hai..lets go home change n fir chalte hai..
appy:haan yaar..chalo jaldi..
ritz:tum lg jao guya..main nahi aa sakthi..
navya:tu aa rahi hai..maine aunty ko cal kar diya hai..aur unse permission mang li hai..
ritz:accha??
navya:haan..mujhe pata tha warna tu yeh sab makhra karthi..isiliye maine pehle hi pooch liya..
ritz:thanx yaar..
navya:ab yeh sab thanx wanx chod..chal mere ghar..
adi:k then navya main tuhe directly mall par milta hu..wat say??
navya:haan k adi bye..

navya n gang in house:

navya:yeh le ritz..tere liye maine ek naya dress layi hu..
ritz:nahi yaar..iski kya zaroorat thi..
navya:tu na apne ye nakhre band kar..main tum dono ke liye dress lekar ayi hu,,
appy:hayye mere liye bhi..jaldi laa..
navya:haan yeh..le party theme gals ke liye white hai..toh maine kal hi khareed lee thi white..
appy:mast hai yaar..yeh toh..
ritz:haan bohut cute hai mera bhi..
navya:ofcourse yaar..meri choice haai..(n starts laughin n hugs ritz n appy)

they all gals get ready..appy is wearin a white skirt n a white sleeveless tee..ritz is wearin a white knee length gown n navya is wearin juliet gown..all the gals are lukin absolutely stunnin in white...

anant's house:

ranbir:(enterin anant's room)accha chal..oohho..kya lag raha hai yaar..
anant(right in front of the mirror)black pant,black balzer,white formal shirt,wit a red satin scarf around the neck..gelled hai..he luked absolutely hot like romeo..
anant:thanx ranbir..aur tu bhi kuch kam nahi lag raha hai..
ranbir also in blazers n white shirt..
ranbir:thanx..afterall tumhara bhai hu..(wink)
anant:yeah..ab chale..
ranbir:ofcourse..

mall:

the mall is decorated like a perfect bride..absolutely filled with heart shaped red balloons..red n white roses..decorated wit with red n white satin shawls..candles all around..it was a perfect place fr love n romance..

anant n ranbir wer there in the mall..
ranbir:woow yaar..kya mast decoration hai..kash ,,..kash koi gf hoti..
anant:(smilin)tu dhoondle aaj hi..yahin pe koi mil jayegi..
ranbir:itni acchi kismat kaha hai meri..aur waise bhi yahan ki saari khubsoorat ladkiyan toh tujhe dekh rahi hai..

anant luked around all the gals wer droolin over him..every gal out ther had her eyes stuck on this amazingly hot man..

anant:hmm..waise flirt karna shuru karde..dekh wahan par ek hai jo laga hua hai flirtin main..

tat was none other than adi..

ranbir:haan yaar..ladkiyan bhaav bhi dethi hai..
anant:jaa usse dosti karle..tips milegi..
ranbir:(laughin)pagal hai kya..jo ladkiya uske saat hai..uske type ke hi hogi..flirts..
anant:woh bhi sahi hai..

navya entered the mall wit gang..adi n his friends wer waitin ther..adi was busy flirtin wit all the gals around..raj his friend tld him tat navya was here,..so adi started behavin like a decent gentle man

adi:hey navya..my doll..u luk gorgeous(n hugged her)
navya:aww baby thanx..

anant:ohh..toh yeh ladki iski gf hai..
ranbir:woohh..she is hot dude..
anant:sarfiri bhi..(starin tuf at navya)
ranbir:huh??matlab??
anant:yeh wohi pagal ladki hai jisse main subah mila tha(continuously starin at navya)
ranbir:mere bahi..itni khubsoorat ladki ko toh sarfiri keh raha hai.?
anant:hmm..iss type ke ladke ke saat hai matlab sarfiri hi hui na..??(still lukin at her)
ranbir:iss saale ki toh life ban gayi hai yaar..mast..

adi:navya..chalo..lets dance..
navya:yeah..(n luks ta appy n ritz)
appy:tu jana..main aur ritz saat main dance karthe hai..(laughs)
ritz:haan navya..tu enjoy kar..

all th couples in the mall wer enjoin the dance floor..there was fast romanic no being played..all wer hootin n dancin like maniacs..appy n ritz wer also dancin..ranbir decide to join the dance..he was also dancin wit some gals..

anant was standin alone..as he is nt for party types..he enjoys only social party's regardin business n stuffs..enjoin life ths way is not fr him..aahh!!suddenly his eyes wer stuck on ths hot chick navya..he kept starin at her..she was busy dancin wit adi..she had that gorgeous smile on her face..he couldn't move his eyes of her..yes ofcourse he dint like her..but there was somethin special abt ths gal wic he cudn't resisit..he walked around the room..his eyes constantly gazin her..navya was enjoin her dance but eyes suddenly she observed the pair of brown eyes starin at her..she luked at him..but fr her surprise he dint shift his eyes even fr a while..she kinda felt akward..she shifted her yes at adi..again her eyes wanted to luk at anant's eyes..she kept lukin at him..

navya:(mind voice)yeh toh wohi sadoo hai jisse main subah mili thi..

the dj stopped the music n anounced ta ll shud dance..n the rule wasevery gal begins dancin wit a guy n then as the music changes will hav to shift to the next member in the circle..n then the last song par the gal is wit who so ever guy she ll hav to dance wit him fr next fifteen mins..

ranbir pulled anant to dance floor..all the guys wer in a circle wit everyone havin a partner..the beginning stage ranbir had appy as his partner..anant had some random gal as his partner adi n navya wer together..rits again had some random partner..

the song began

pehla nasha..pehle khumar..
naya pyaar hai..naya intezaar..
karlu main kya apna haal..
ee dile bekarar..mere dile bekarar..
tu hi bata..

navya n adi wer quite romantically dancin wit each other..anant was kinda nt interested in the dance n the gal wit him was irritatin..she was hell behind him..askin him abt his life..his richness n stuffs..appy n ranbir became gud frenz in no time..ritz shared a silent moment wit her partner wit just few smiles..

song changed..ritz was wid adi..navya wit a random guy..anant wit appy..ranbir wit a random gal..

dil kyun yeh mera shor kare..
idhar nahi..udhar nahi..teri ore chale..

adi was actin really decent as ritz was navya's best fren..so they had a normal chat..the random guy was admirin navya n her beauty at its best..she knew ths guy was admirin her..isilye zyada haav nahi diya..appy was droolin over anant..but she had her standards..anant spoke to her nicely..matlab a normal hi..how are u chat..ranbir is mast maula types...he had ths smile all tym in his face..so all gals enjoyed his company..

again song changed..navya wit ranbir..ritz wit anant..appy had a random guy..adi had a random gal..

jo haal dil ka..idhar ho raha haii.
woh haal dil ka udhar ho raha hai..
janeja dilon pe pyaar ka..ajab sa asar ho raha hai..

adi was busy firtin wit the random hot chick..appy had atuf tym wit her partner..anant kinda liked ritz as his partner coz she seemed decent n innocent too..ritz also fr the first tym felt comforatble wit a partner..they shared few talks too..ranbir was aww soo droolin over navya..she felt gud spkin to him..ranbir asked navya abt anant..n she was super shocked tat they wer friends..

song changed..n nw anant n navya wer partners..ritz n ranbir wer partners..

~~~CHAPTER 3 END~~~

K guys..ths is a cliff hanger nw..😉well suspense to banta hai na..nw u guys will hav to wait fr the next super romantic update..hit the like button n do comment..n ya sorry fr nt updatin the titl k..i ll do it..😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
lovely update..eagerly waiting for the next one..😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
Hehehehehe neethu, beech me latka diya na hame nw u als hav to wait 4 my coment til ua next update, hahahaha 😆 🤣 😛
Edited by -diva-shamya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
lovely but what is this update soon neethu plzz plzz ..
Edited by rashi_anya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
Waw... really really superb dear,,,, 😊 hehe u r right.. im at the peak of excitment... 😊
Do the update as early as possible... 😉,
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fantastic yaar...plz plz plz update soon and a request plz get that Adi out of the picture ASAP sorry just can't tolerate navya being wid a guy like that.But really excited for the next chapter. 😛

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