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Posted: 13 years ago
y no updating?????????😒
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for the delay in updating. especially sorry anammika and @ nancy as i am in my cousins house for his marriage so totally held up. will give the update in another two days . time. really sorry
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for ur update i really like it so plz when ever u get time update god bless u dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey yaar smita...i thinkur inbox if full...wen i sen du a pm its showingrecepient limit exceeded..plzz empty it...

n update it soon...we all are missig ur updates

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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for the late comment dear.oh,how I missed this cute update. lovely world of Anya😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
shall be waiting for your updates
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesme update dear !!!!!!!!!!! m sry m late !!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u all for reading the updates and commenting on it. and a big sorry for the new late update...as i was totally held up in some work at home. i dont know how it has come out but have tried by best ... sorry once again...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Anant and navya went to change their dresses for the reception. Navya was taken to the room by anjali and she told that she would come and call her in another half an hour .navya too nodded that she would be ready by that time.

Anant in his room opened the pack that navya gave him. It was a golden cream sherwani and pajama with a few silver coloured works on it., and a maroon shawl . a simple one . It had a note in it…

Anant muje patha nahi tumhe ye pasand aayega ki nahi. Par muje patha hai ki tum issme bahut ache lagoge. Aur bahut pyaare bhi.(navya left that note for anant thinking that he was attending it all alone)

Anant had a sweet smile on his face seeing the dress that navya had got for him. He knew navya wud be soo happy to see him in it. He got dressed up fast as his mind was full of navya and the designer saree that he had got for her. He was restless as he wanted to see her in that, he didn't know if she likes it or not but knew very well that she would be like a princess in it.

Here on the other hand navya opened her packet and took the dress out it was a dark chocolate brown saree and embroideried blouse that had silver works on both of it which added the beauty to it , it too was a simple one with only the required amount of embroidery work. Anant had also got matching silver mixed jewelleries for it. Jhumka with dark brown dropings on it..., a sweet necklace and of course bangles…

Navya liked each and every piece very much, more than the colour and jewellery she was too happy that anant had got something for her of his choice and that too in a surprise way, without telling her till the moment they reached here that he too had a surprise for her. Anant had bought many things for her within thesedays but this was very special for her as she loved every bit of the moment today that she is spending with anant. She too wanted to meet him badly now.

Pyaar se laye hui cheez kissi pyaar karne wale ko agar pyaar se diya jatha hai

, aur jab wo pyaar se pehena jatha hai tho pehan ne wala bhi bahut pyaara dikhtha hai….

navya ne jab apni dressings puri ki tho ek pari dikh rahi thi, bilkul anant ki pari. Yahan anant itna betaab tha ki wo ek jagah teek se bait nahi paa raha tha. Yu hi who baatein kar raha tha , logon se mil raha tha , par usski aankhen navya ko hi doond rahe the.

anjali called navya and navya also came out after finishing her dressing… arey wah bhabhi aap bahut khooobsurat dikh rahi hai…. yeh saree bahut khoobsurat hai. navya had tied the saree beautifully and very decently . The pallu of that had cute silver works on it. She had left her hairs open and a small stone studded clip was put on the hairs at the back. She was looking pretty. Chaliye bhabhi sab log neeeche hai and they came down ..as navya was cuming down the steps.. anant eyes caught her……he just stood still for a moment. He didn't ..rather couldn't take his eyes from her….he was just looking at her..

usski navya aaj bahut cute aur khoobsurat thi. Jaise jaise wo neeche uttarne lagi anant ka dil aur bhi dhadakhne laga ..navya ko paas se dekhne ke liye ..usse apne bahon mein lene ke liye….. Hawa ke jhonkkhoon ne uske balon ko yu saraha ki anant dekhthe hi rah gaya.

Navya was also searching for anant in between her steps. Anant knew her eyes were looking for him, he suddenly went behind a big pillar that stood there in the hall. The hall was flooded with people… all greeting and talking to each other. Anant eyes followed her , he was admiring her beauty. He didn't want to go in front of her al of a sudden, so he remained where he was.

Navya couldn't find anant anywhere , as she came down she looked for him around.. anjali asked : bhabhi aap kisse doond rahi hai?

Navya: wo (looking at her) main anant ko…..

anjali: shayad anant bhaiyya bhai ke paas hoga, chaliye hum jake dekhthe hai…

Navya was feeling a little hesistant to go there as she wanted to see anant first , to ask him if she was fine in that dress and that too she didn't knew anyone there.

Navya : nahi tum jake dekhke aao, mei yahi rukthi hoon, shayad anant yahan aa jaye…

anjali; teek hai phir bhabhi aap yahi rukiye , mein dekhthi hu, anant bhaiyya ko yahan bejthi hun

And she left looking for anant. Navya was feeling all alone there. She smiled at those who smiled to her and walked forward looking for anant ,,

People smiled at her and she smiled back but she was totally worried for not finding anant …itne anjaan logon ke beech mein …mein akeli….. just then an old lady , very heavily dressed came to her…. Beta tum kaun ho?

Navya : (she didn't know what to say ) then suddenly told: ji mein navya…ajay ki dost ki patni

Lady: acha acha….. tum kahan se ho?

Navya: ji hum Kanpur se hain par Mumbai mei rahthe hai

Lady: kanpur? Kanpur pe kahan? ..and she started her talk ,,,navya had no choice she had to continue her talks as the lady was taking all the space for talking…

Finally it came to be known that the lady knew navya's grandfather , she was one of his distant relatives ..and so she even more tightened her talks. Anant was enjoying this whole situation were navya was fully helpless in front of that lady.

He was in between admiring her each and every gestures……she was looking more and more pretty in her tensed state. Her eyes were still searching for anant as if she wanted him to be there for her rescue from that lady.

Anant understood this but didn't want to go and introduce himself to that lady as he knew she wont spare him also.

In the meanwhile a middle aged woman came there in search of the lady to take her for food, the lady told navya to wait for her by the time she gets her food as she wanted to talk more about her dada and dadi. Navya felt a little relieved for the moment and she too nodded and she again started looking for anant.

Anant also started to move and he reached near a big wall that was decorated with beautiful curtains that were waving in the cool breeze and the fans wind. Anant sumhow managed to escape her eyes and reached near the walls . as navya was looking for him she didn't notice the hand cumimg towards her. Sumbody pulled her suddenly towards the back of those curtains ,navya was scared for a moment but felt relieved when she saw anant .her eyes were widened in surprise and scare , anant kept his finger on her lips before she screamed out of scare.

anant held her towards him and made her stand near the wall. The curtains waved too as if they knew that their work was now to hide these two birdies from others…

Anant was looking at navya with all cuteness…. His eyes reflected his feelings ,,, he was totally lost in her

Navay 's surprise gave way to admiration as she too was staring at anant now,, whom she searched for all long. Her eyes reflected many feeling s with in a moment,, feeling of relief ,love and admiration…what not …she was totally lost in his eyes

he was looking tooo handsome in the dress. And she was looking tooo pretty.

They didn't utter a word but was totally lost in their eyelock . their eyes spoke for a moment.

It was Anant who broke the silence and murmered in a low tone ; tum bahut pyaari lag rahi ho. Ji kartha hai tumhe aise hi dektha rahu…,…….navya was still lost in him….she heard his words but didnt want to move her eyes from him

Anant: navya……..caled her sofltly ……

Navya came back to her senses and smiled shyingly at him , her head down as she was not having the courage to look at him.

Anant: bending his face to hers: kya hua navya ? achanak sharma kyun gayi?

Navya just nodded her head gesturing a no,, nothing.

He now blocked navya by keeping his both hands on the wall and navya inside it.

Anant: bolo na navya ?

navya looked up to his face.
anant: tumhe patha hai…… tum bahut khoobsurat ho iss saree mein

Navya: looking at him : aur tum bhi bahut handsome lag rahe ho…… and gave a sweet smile to him.

Anant came more closer to her now. His eyes were speaking more this time he was totally lost and came to near to her, navya's heart also was pounding faster……..

Anant came closer to navya : whispered to her : in her ears : muje ek kiss milega?

Navya was surprised to hear anants demand….she looked towards the hall with a surprised and alarmed eyes and then towards anant…. Teling her helpless situation through her eyes…..

Anant smiled and nodded a no with his head and pointed his finger to his cheek

Navya was more hesitant now but she knew anant wouldn't let her go if she didn't give…………

She slowly came closer to him closed her eyes and suddenly kissed him on his cheek…

The kiss and the sound of an mein yahijali came together……navya bhabhi….navya bhahbi…. Kahan ho aap

Navya held her breath , she thought she saw them…. She didn't know what to do…….

But anjali passed that wall and walked forward looking for her……..

Navya: anant wo muje doond rahi hai….. jao na please ….. tum kahi aur se aa jao na..she said panickingly as many people were there attending the function …..

anant too understood her tension but didnt want navya to leave.
Anant : tum jao navya …….(a bit sad) mein kahin se bhi aa jaonga...

Navya was more tensed but some how gained confidence...she was feeling awkward rather than scared

kissi aur ki shaadi aur hum dono yahan aise...
now felt she would go out of the curtains and will telll some excuse to her…..and she walked forward ki anant held her hand from back. Navya turned to him gesturing : now what?

anant: tumhe nahi chahiye? And pointed his lips……

navya didn't know whether to blush or smile or go …….anant chodo na…… wo aa gayi tho…. The corner of her lips showed evidently that she was feeling shy.

Anant: acha tho jao……. left her hand forclingly

Phir ….baad mein……… dekh loonga and looked at her with his naughty smile…

Just as navya came out anjali saw her from the other side… bhabhi kahan thi aap? Mein aap hi ko doond rahi thi…….

Navya: wo anjali …..mein …(she was searching for reasons) …mein sareee ki pallu teek karne gayi thi curtains ke peeche…….giving a sigh...

Anjali: teek kiya aapne…mein madad kar doo?

Navya : nahi ,,(,all of a sudden.).. teek ho gaya….

Navya was not sure whether anant left or not, par wo inta samjdhar tho tha hi, ki kissi ke nazar mein pade bina hi nikal gaya tha.

Anjaali; chaliya na bhahbi..bhai ke dost batha rahe the ki anant bhaiyya wahin pe tha, jaake dekhthe hai……and navya too accompanied her…….. she was having a smile on her face ..ki usse patha tha anant kahan tha……..

Anant was busy talking with his friend's realtives jab anjali and navya came there.

Anant: ho gaya navya. Mei yahan pe in sabse baatein kar raha tha.

Navya nodded a yes …uss yes mein sare matlab the …muje patah hai ..tum kahan the…

They were introduced to every one over there by his other colleagues. Itne mein wo old lady bhi wahan aa gayi…navya tum kahan rah gayi thi…meine tumhe bahut doonda…..

Navya : wo aunty ji mei……

Itne me uss lady ki nazar anant pe padi…… ye kaun hai? tumhare saath?

Navay: ji mera pathi --anant.

Lady ; oh acha tho ye tumhara pathi hai….

Anant said a namasthe to her.

Lady : beta tumse milke bahut khushi hui….tum bhi mumbai mei ho?

Anant: haan ji...aur sirf mumbai mein hu aur mera koi sir name nahi hai... mein sirf anant hu aur shaadi pe aaya hu aur ajay ka colleage hu aur navya meri biwi hai…..acha namasthe hame ab nikalna chahiye….and managed to take navya from there. he said all those in one go...

The lady was stunned to hear al answers at one stretch. Anant somehow wanted to escape from her as he had seen how navya was struggling in her talks……..

Navya: anant tum kahan ja rahe ho kya kah rahe the tum?

Anant: kya kah raha tha mein……. Paused a bit ….. and asked navya ; kuch zyaada ho gaya kya?

Navya: anant tun bhi na…and they both laughed together…….

They went to the dice and wished the newly wedded couple , had photos with them and then went for dinner. Anant disappeared in between for a moment while navya was having dinner. And returned soon….and shrugged his shoulder went navya enquired about it. She didn't knew why anant was in a hurry to leave now as he had told they would stay in the near by hotel for completing his presentations….. final touch ups for the next day. But anant finished his diner fast and then went to bid a bye to his friends…..

Ajay: arey yaar tumhe abi jaana hai kya?

Anant: haan yaar abhi nai nikala tho….tumhe patha hai na, kal ka work kitna important hai…

Even ajay had helped anant a bit in his work so he knew how important it was for anant, so he didn't stop him ..

Anant and navya bid a gud bye to every one and left in the car ……

Navya was totally confused as to where they were going; anant tumne tho kaha tha ki hum yahi rukenge aur kal jaldi niklenge…..

Anant was concentrating on his driving as the road had lots of hairpin curves as it was mounting a small hill…

Anant: haa navya kaha tho tha, par wo kya hai na….. mera kaam ho gaya hai..tho socha ki jahan hum jaa rahe hai wahi tahar jao…….. please ab zyaada sawal math karo…. Bahut raath hone se pehle mein wahan pahunchna chantha hu,,bas thodi der aur zyaada dur nahi hai…..

And he drove….navya remained silent as she knew that disturbing while driving was not correct but stil her mind was confused thinking achanak anant ko kya ho gaya hai?...

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Posted: 13 years ago
as usual nice update, the romantic scene is beautifully depicted, waiting to read the next.

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