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Posted: 13 years ago
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Anant and navya had their food, anant didn't tell anything while having his food, navya was worried thinkng about her preparation, if he would like or not. But still as he had without uttering a word, navya was in a confusion. She didn't ask him, ….meanwhile

Navya: anant mein tumse kuch poochu? Naaraz tho nahi hoge na?

Anant: haa poocho? Kya baath hai?

Navya: wo hume ghar pe bathana chahiye na, tumhe naukrimil gayi and teek ho ab.

Anant: (stopped eating and looked at her). Ab ye baaki rah gaya tha. Tumhe yaad nahi unhone hamare saath kya kiya, balki tumhare saath? Getting frustrated

Navya : please gussa math ho, muje tumhe kuch yaad nahi dilana tha, par mann mei ye khayal aaaya. Tho tumse poocha.

Anant: Mein sochtha hu.(looking at her), abhi karna hai ya khaana chod du?

Navya just nodded her head and continued eating. Ander hi ander she was scared ki usne anant ko gussa nahi dilaya ho.after finishing their food, anant stood and went to the other corner with navya's phone in his hand. Navya didn't ask or tell anything, she started to clean the plates and bowl from under the pipe and kept it in the carry bag. And took the candle along with her as she went near anant. She understood that anant was speaking to mohan bhaiyya from his talks. He told him about what happened after their discharge and now how he was. He knew baba would definitely have all the news with him from some of his sources, but just spoke to mohan about all happenings and told that they both are fine

Mohan bahiyya was also quite relieved to hear anant's news and told him to concentrate on his life don't think about any thing else. He adviced him not to accept defeat and return after seeing all that happened in the hospital. He asked about navya too as he had seen her love for anant in the hospital . he knew wherever anant would be in whichever state , navya would never leave him. Her love will always take him to the right track. Hetold anant that would handle every thing if any queries come in the house. And asked anant to take care of navya.

Mohan: wo tumse bahut pyaar karthi hai. khud dekha hai meine.

Anant knew her love for him.

Anant: haa bhai. Teek hai ab raktha hoon.

They bid a gud night and anant cut the phone. He looked into the dark thinking all that happened. Par in sab mei usse navya ka chehra hi yaad aaya , he suddenly remembered he hadn't told navya about his talk with mohan and as anant turned back , navya was standing behind him with the candle.

Navya looked at him , anant: lo phone kar liya, ab kissi aur ko bhi karna hai? meine mohan bhaiyya ko sab bol diya hai, muje kissi aur se baatein nahi karni hai.

(looked at navya little annoyingly)

Navya had a smile inside but didn't show it in front of anant. she knew kitna hi gussa ho anant zaroor phone karega, usse patha hai ki anant apne bahiyya se bahut pyaar kartha hai.

Navya: wo meine khaane ke bare mein pooch rahi thi? Khaana acha nahi bana tha na? tumne kuch bhi nahi kaha,

Anant: khaane ka mazaa teek se lene diya kya? Beech mei aisi baatein jo karthi ho.

She thought his mood was not ok and turned back to leave, but was happy that anant called mohan bhaiyya. Anant smiled from inside, he too didn't want to hurt her , aur apni naraaazgi se zyaada usspe pyaar aa rahha tha. He too was happy after the talk with mohan.

Suddenly anant held her hand and slowly pulled her towards him. Navya turned to anant questioningly with the candle in the other hand.

Navya: kya hua? Kuch galat kiya kya?

Anant was having a small smile on his face and puled the confused navya towards him,

Navya: abhi tho mujse naaraaz the , abhi kya kua?

Anant: kissne kaha mei naraaz tha?

Navya: phir khaane ke baare mein poocha tho ………

Anant: wo mein apni jhalli ko aise hi , yun hi, satha raha tha( with a wide smile)

Navya: jao baath nahi karungi tumse, but had a smile on her face. the candle shook a bit with his pull, navya turned to adjust her hold on the candle , ki anant brought her closer and blew it off.

Navya: arey anant ye kya kiya? Iss taraf tho light bhi nahi hai, iss liye mei ye candle leke aayi thi, kyun bhuja diya?

Anant: kyuuunki , muje hamare beech koi teeesra nahi chahiye.

Navya: teesra, ye candle?

Anant: haa ye candle , and took it from her hand and kept it aside .

Navya: acha ye teesra, tho wo kaun hai? ( she pointed up to the sky) the moon was shining . though it was not a ful moon , but it needed only just few more days to be round, it was shining brightly.

Anant: wo , chanda to hume chup chup ke badaloon ke beech se dekh raha hai, ki kaise anant apni jahlli se pyaar kartha hai. aur ye bhi dikha raha hai, ki chaandni mei meri jhalli kitni khuubsoorat hai

Navya: anant baatein tho koi tumse seekhni chahiye

Anant: haa aur pyaar karna bhi.

Navya blushed as anant pulled her too closer, and kissed on her forehead .

Ye parathe ke liye.

Abhi navya kuch kah paathi, anant ne doosra kiss diya on her eyelids….

Ye aaloo aur matar ke liye

Navya smiled now, khaane ke bare mei poocha tha she asked

Anant: wahi tho batha raha hoon. Itna acha tha ki………looked at her , she was looking like an angel ki he slowly moved his lips…

Anant: aur ye sweet ke liye and was about to kiss her lips...

Navya: (stopping him ) anant ye kya kar rahe ho? Ye terrace hai, koi aa jayega…

Anant stopped and with his naughty smile

Anant: acha , tho chalo (teasing her) muje bhi terrace pe yu khada nahi rahna hai, sona hai.

Navya: haaan raat bahut ho gayi hai, lagtha hai baarish hogi, bahut badal cha gaye hai tumhe kal kaam bhi hai…..

Anant: ha hai, par ab muje cot pe nahi sona hai,… mujee….. necheee……

Ki anant apni baat poori kartha navya ne usse dacha diya aur bhaag gayi to take her bag

Anant too ran back , suddenly it started drizzling. They came down to their flat

It started raining heavily. Anant changed his clothes and was standing near the window gazing out at the rain. Navya cleaned the kitchen, filled water and came up to him.

Navya: kya hua kya soch rahe ho?

Anant: kuch nahi, bas yuhi baarish dekh raha hu.

Navya: acha kya hai , kuch khaas hai kya?

Anant: ha haina… tum wo table lao, obama ne kal muje baarish ke bare mei baat karne ke liye bulaya hai… tumhe sona nahi hai?

Navya: anant tum bhi na, jab dekho romance…..

Before navya completed the sentence.. anant lifted her…

Lagtha hai, tum kabhi nahi sudrogi… muje hi tumhe sudaarna padega… and held her tighly in his arms and went to near the switch board

Navya: anant , ye , neeche utharooo

Anant gestured her towards the switch of the light.. navya looked at him questioningly

Anant: tume light se problem nahi hai tho, ok , muje koi problem nahi hai

Navya blushed a lot and switched off the light…

Mumbai ki baarish bhi , kabhi kabhi pyaar karne walon ke saath hotha hai…mano jaise ki khud bhagwaan apni saari khushiaan un dono ke liye barsa raha ho ,jo dil jaan se ek doosre se pyaar karthe hai... sweet dreams

Next day ,morning opened up too early. Anant was stil sleeping. Navya kept on calling him in between her work.

Navya: anant utto , (shouted from the kitchen) dekho aaj roti mein kya bana hai?

Anant: (in half sleep) muje sone do navya… please

Navya: anant tum aaj late ho jaoge… tumhe time patha hai.

Anant was still sleeping… navya made the breakfast and came over to see anant lying sound asleep. She suddenly told a little louder

Arey papa , aap kab aaye? Kanpur se?

Anant suddenly opened his eyes and sat up right. Navya laughed as she had fooled him.

Anant got up and knew that he had been fooled with an annoying face and went straight to the bathroom without talking anything

Navya went to the ktchen to keep things ready. Anant forgot to take his towel and dresses : navya (he shouted)

Navya: kya hai? came near the door

Anant: muje towel do ,aur dress bhi

Navya took the towel and dress and gave it to him. She made his breakfast ready and brought it

Anant came out after bath and navyaaa……!

Mera comb kahan hai

Navya took it and gave

Again navyaaa!

Before he opened his mouth, she gave him his wallet and hanky. He smiled and took it from her. Navya went to serve the food again navyaaa….!

Navya brought the socks from the string and gave him, meanwhile he had a bite of roti.

And navya now gave fed him

Anant: roz aise hi khilaya karo.

Navya smiled. As anant wore his shoes. He looked at the time. He finished his breakfast and then navya went to the kitchen to keep the plates….. navyaaa!

Navya now was surprised , everything was readily given to him, but now what?

Navya came up to him … shook her head asking him what?

Anant pointed his cheek… navya smiled and gave his usual one . he hugged her : aaj raat ko kya kilaogi?

Navya was about to tell sumthing , their door bell rang. Anant released his hands and navya opened the door. It was Deepak and meetha ma.

Navya and anant: papa . aap ? aap kab aaye Kanpur se? (they both asked together)

Anant: aayiye na anderaayiye…

Deepak and meetha came in.

-ParamHolic- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
wOoW di...Such a cute update...👏
Loved it...:)))
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww di such a beautiful update, u knw while reading last part n as they came frnt of my eyes its juz superb, felt like watchng usual hubby-wife daily routine.. juz lovd it.. great going.. cant wait 4 d next update.. continue soon di..
Edited by -diva-shamya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update, awesome romantic night betwn ANYA. sooo cute ... thank u...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Neha_SHaMYa

wOoW di...Such a cute update...👏

Loved it...:)))

thank u neha, reading yr update now,😊
smivas thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
seat reserved kya?😊
smivas thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bharathi.ks

lovely update, awesome romantic night betwn ANYA. sooo cute ... thank u...

thank u so much😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update, loved it. Anant calling Navya and she gives him the required things- this is so cute. Terrace romance portion is also beautiful. Liking it very much.
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Posted: 13 years ago
romance mast tha dee...loved it..u r rockin:):)

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