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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
dear awesome OS👏👏
i just loved the dress u hav given for navyas saree and all
it was really nice
pls cntinue dear
now waiting for ur next update...😳
Edited by Aarushi_mitzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow awesome parul.. waiting for next update dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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GUYS, THANK U ALL FOR APPRECIATING MY OS AND GIVING ME D CONFIDENCE TO WRITE FURTHER

THIS IS D LINK TO D FIRST PART:

http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2678238

THIS IS THE FIRST CHAPTER OF THE SECOND PART.. PLZ READ IT? HOPE U WILL LIKE IT..

Next morning , AnYa were sleeping , navya's head being on anant's shoulder. Navya opened her eyes, moved her face a little n saw anant sleeping besides her. Anant's seems like a baby. Navya smiled and kissed anant on his cheek. Anant smiled in d sleep. Navya wake up n got ready for d aarti. At 7:30am sharp, whole bajpai house assembled in d hall, the aarti started. Navya sang the aarti and everyone was impressed (baba, om n BD were also impressed bt didn't showed it off..as expected). After that, Sunday pravachan of baba started and all his followers alongwith d bajpai family members listened to it. At the breakfast table, anant winked to navya many times while she was serving to d men nd BD.

Anant then asked baba to permit him n navya to go out for d day. Baba's expression was "gulp and stare."..many times. In d meanwhile, BD interrups n says,"ye sab is nabya maharani ka asar hai.., isi ne kaha hoga anant se ghoomne phirne ke liye..HOPJ" . AnYa got reminded of d last night talk of BD n HOPJ.

Anant: nai BD, mere paas resort ke do paas hain to isliye mera mann tha ke main navya ko wahaan le jaun, waise bhi shaadi ke baad hm kahin gaye nahin hai na..

BD: shook her head from left to right (HOPJ in her mind..)

Om: nai anant, hamare parivaar mein in sab cheezo ki ijaazat nai hai..pta nai tmhare dimag mein ye baatein kahaan se aayein?. Gives an angry look to navya.

Baba: gulp..stare..with table music in BG.

Anant understood dat, d plan is rejected..

Meanwhile, navya was at d verge of crying listening to d harsh words of BD and om and goes to her room as soon as d breakfast ends.

Navya is crying in her room, anant enters.

Anant: navya kya hua? Tum ro kyo rai ho?

Navya: kuch nai anant.. Kuch nai

Anant: mujhe pata hai, tm BD aur papa ki baat ko lekar ro rai ho na?. ek baar phir se meri wajah se tmhe sab se baatein sunni pad gai.. I m sorry navya. Pta nai, agar hm kuch tym ke liye baahar chale jaenge to aisa kya ho jayega??

Navya: anant, agar gharwalon ko ye sab pasand nai hai, to hm kahin nai jaenge. Jab sab tayaar honge, hum tab hi jaenge.

Anant hugs navya and kisses on her forehead and says "tum sab ke bare mein sochti ho na.., bas apni hi khushi ka khayaal nai hai tmhe"

Navya: sab ki khushi mein hi hamari khushi hai anant.

They continue to hug passionately...

During d day, loonies did not behave properly with navya and pass comments on her sanskaars..

Listening to them, navya runs to her room n cries badly. Anant becomes very angry and runs behind navya to deir room. Seeing the tears of navya:

Anant: navya, utho... chalo mere saath (navya is still crying)

Anant: navya tmne suna nai? chalo..(navya does nt answers n keeps on crying..)

Anant holds her hand and takes navya with him..(anant is very angry..)

Anant takes navya down d stairs through d hall n is walking out of d house.. BD sees all this n shouts.."anant, kahaan ja rahe ho nabya ko lekar". All loonies come out n call anant back.

But anant does nt listens to anyone, brings navya out of d house, opens d door of his car n make navya sit in d car.

Navya: anant ye tm kya kar rae ho? hm kahaan ja rae hain..?

Anant: navya, chup? ekdum chup?.tmhe mujhpe bharosa hai na??

Navya: haan? lekin? anant: navya chup?

Anant sits in d car n drives out of d bajpai gate.

IN THE CAR:

Navya: anant ye sab kya hai, tm ye kya kar rae ho?? Ghar pe sab kya sochenge..?

Anant: navya, bas? ghar? gharwale? wo gharwale, jo tmhe char baatein sunaane se pehle ek baar bhi nai sochte.. nai navya? ab tum nai ro gi, jo hoga main dekh lunga.. trust me navya.. main sab sambhal lunga

Navya smiles a bit, stops crying, bt is still sad.

They come very far from bajpai house near to an isolated location. Anant stops d car near a waterfall. Navya smiles seeing d lively atmosphere.. anant gives her a romantic cum naughty look.

They go near to d waterfall..

Navya: anant, kitni khoobsurat jagah hai?...Mumbai mein itni khoobsurat jagah maine aaj tak nai dekhi.

Anant: ma'am? hamare saath rahengi to aisa hi hoga... Both smile.

AnYa kiss each odr, hug each odr n recall their special moments: valentine day first meet , picnic nyt moments, navya's bday.. Their marriage etc.. hours passed n its 7 'o' clock in d evening.

Navya: anant, chalo ab ghar chalet hain.. sab bhut pareshan ho rae honge

Anant: uff oh navya! Tmhe abi bhi unhi ki fikar hai? hum abi nai jaenge

Navya gives an angry look.. anant: PLEASEEE!!!!!!

AnYa goes very close to d waterfall n r enjoying d drops of water sprinkling on dem.

Suddenly, navya's leg slips n she falls into d water.

Anant: navya.. navya.. n jumps into d water.

Navya is still struggling with d waves n crying out anant's name. anant swims out to reach to navya, holds her in her arms and swims and comes out of d water. (now dey are on d opposite bank of d water from where dey were standing).

Anant: "navya.., navya.. utho"

He was patting navya's face with his hand.

Slowly slowly navya gained consciousness n opened her eyes..

Navya felt erself in anant's arms.. she saw him..n said "anant"... N hugged him tightly n cried..

Anant: navya.. navya I love u.. agar tmhe kuch ho jaata to? n kissed all over her face and neck

Navya: I love u too anant, aur jb tak tum mere saath ho.. mujhe kuch nai ho sakta...both smiled n hugged tightly again..

Anant's hand was moving all over navya's back.. n navya's hand was moving on anant's back..

Anant loosened d grip, moved his face towards navya's face.. looked into her eyes .. navya was too looking into anant's eyes.. anant moved close to navya, navya closed her eyes.. anant too closed her eyes..anant kissed navya on her eyes, her cheeks, on her neck n sipped d drops of water on her neck..

Navya felt a sensation all over her body n opened her eyes... She too kissed anant's cheeks n sipped d water drops on his cheek.. feeling this, anant again hugged her very very tightly dat even air cannot pass through.. anant was holding navya's hair very tightly n water seeped from her hair? he pulled navya's hair to bring her face near to him...navya was breathing very fast.. anant moved closer to her n kissed her on d lips...

Post d kiss, AnYa bahut shy feel kar rae the...an eyelock followed n both smiled

navya: anant yahaan se chalein..

Anant: navya.. par hum jaenge kahaan, yahaan se baahar nikalne ka raasta to door-door tak nazar nai aa raha hai.. ab to kal subah hi kuch ho sakta hai...

Navya: hamare phone bhi paani mein bheeg gaye... call bhi nai kar sakte..

Anant gave a naughty look n said, "navya, ye to bilkul hamari college picnic wali situation ho gai.. ghar se door, sunsaan jagah pe.. jahaan pe phone nai...wowww...

Navya hit anant n said " tum bhi na, aise halaat mein bhi tumhe mazaak soojh raha hai.."

Anant: navya, waise tumhe wo picnic ki raat yaad to hai na?? n smiles..

Navya blushes..."anant ab bhut ho gaya, yahaan se baahar kaise nikalna hai vo socho.."

Anant: ma'am, yahaan se to ab hum kal subah hi nikal paenge...tab tak, hum yahaan is sunsaan jungle mein do pyaar bhari baatein kar sakte hain...

Anant holds navya's hand n dey both walk in d woods, talking to each other...

NOW, FINAL UPDATE IN D FINAL PART...

PLZ COMMENT DID U LIKED IT OR NOT...

Edited by parul_anya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Very nice parul, awsome one, lovd d actn anant tuk against loonies.. t wuld b a treat 2 watch on serial ths scene..
Edited by DivaAnYa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
wowww too good👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
wow!!! parul dr superb👏⭐️
u made my day 😍
hope same in navya...plz cvs:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice parul there's so many anyallicious moment loved it
doo continue u r doing great
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow so romantic anant takes navya out with out bajpayees permission lovely hope this happens is the show tho maza ajayega loonies ki shakl dekhne wali hogi
Superb update👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
wow parul lovely...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
hey hey parul i would say this is the awesome os till now wow yaar atlast you brought the anya lip kiss scene☺️
thats very nice and what a creaative mind you have hats off to that👏 really yaar this was really amazing one agar aisa story real mein aajaye toh 😉
trp ki tsunami hojaye gi 😃
kash tum hamaari cv's hoti i just imagined while reading your os and i was like wowo awww so cute 😍
once agin dear awesome one keep it up🤗

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