RS: 7th DAY of Navya In Bajpayees QUILLA...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was dinner time and Navya being quite aware that the ladies in
that quilla dont eat together with gents except BD along wid
bahuriyas was serving dinner...


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BD;accha laga jyada kuch nahin lekin
in 7 dino mein tumne itna sanskaar to sikh lia ki bahuwoh ko ghar ke beta ya
sasur ke sath bhojan karna shobha nahi deta...aabb ye baath jan liya he
toh apne ghar ja kar ye bhulna mat..samji na tum Navya???ab kuch mahino baad
tumey phirse isi ghar mein aana he woh bhi hamesa ke liye...hum nahi
chahte ki tumne in 7 dino mein jo kuch bhi sikha he woh phirse yaad dilana
padhey...abb tum ish ghar ki choti bahu banney wali ho...Anant ki
patni!!!!!!!isiliye dhyan se kaam karna...


(anant
smiles n feels proud wen BD says "ANANT KI PATNI")



Navya: ji bua dadi mein ye yaad
rakhungii..ap logo ko sikayat ka mauka kabhi nahi duingii...


(every1
smile even Angry papa( but not Rama)...this is called Navya's
effect)



BD;
HOPJ



(BD,baba
om finish their dinner and go to their respective rooms...Anant and
Mohan still in dinner table)


Mohan;
arrey Anant aj dining table chodne ka maan nahi he kya???


(nimi
n navi come there)



Nimi;
kya karien Bhae...aj Bhabi ka akhri dinner he na hamare sath i mean shadi
se pehle ka...kal se to bhabi apne COOl family ke sath dinner karenge woh bhi
saab ke sath beth kar...kyu bhabi.aap bahut khush ho na??



Navi;haan...kal
toh mein(rama comes there)



Rama;ap
log abhi tak dining pe hein...Nabbya se bath hi karna he toh usko sath
leke jayiye...humey toh khana khane dijiye(A n M leave dinig table)



rama
murmurs herself jab dekho tab NABYA NABYA NAbya ...



and
now its turn for ladies to have dinner...


sugandha:
kal to navya jayegi. beta, tumare begar ye ghar bahot suna
lagega...



Nimi;toh
taiji ab jaldi se bhabi ko is ghar me le aayena bahu banake...



suganda;
tu thik keh rahi he nimi...ab toh 6mahine
intazar nahi hota...



chachi;
ab ye 6 mahine 6 saal ki tarah lambi lageki...


(navya
was smiling troughout the converstion while Rama's temperature was raising
high)



Suganda;hamare
Anant ne bahut hi pyari bahu chuna he hamare liye...



<p>chachi:
isne toh sirf Anant ka hi nahi ham saab ka dil jitliya he...

Nimi;
lakho mein Ek he hamari Navya bhabi


(Rama
about to burst)...


(dont
get shocked guys its Navyas effect that ladies started chatting in dining
table)

Updated in comments post below..


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Posted: 13 years ago
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IN Nimi's Room………….

Navya is excited that finally next day she is meeting her family.she shares her happiness wid Ritz and Appy.Nimisha is very sad,Navi notices that and cuts the phone!!!!!!!!

Navi;Nimi, kya baat hae??tum itni udash kyun ho??Nikhil ji se jhagda hua kya??

nimi; nahi…..

navi: toh phir ka baat he ghar mein kisi ne kuch kaha kya??

nimi; nahi…………..ap ja rahi ho na kal isiliye…ap to bahoot khush ho lekin mera kya??mein aap ko bahoot hi miss karungii…….jab tak ap yeha thi kitna aacha lagta tha……..Nimi cries

Navi(smiles); mujhe to laga tha mere jane se sabse jyada khushi tumey hogi??

Nimi(surprised); kyu??woh kyu??

navi;kiyuki…ab tume Nikhil ji se batein karne ke liye mere shone ka intazar nehi karna padega……tum jab chaho tab is kamre mein Nikhil ji ke photo se batein kar sakti ho…………..aur ye kya tum to roh rahi ho ??pagli!!!!!!!!

nimi hugs navya;bhabi mein aapko bahoot jyada miss karungii

navi::mein bhi………..tumey utna hi miss karungii

pata he bhabi aapke jane se ghar me sab log dukhi he………….pata nahi bhae par kya bit raha hoga………aj to woh subha se ghumsum he……….

navya feels sad…………meanwhile nimi gets Nikhil's call and goes in corner.navya also tries to call Anant but his mobile is switched off..navi more sad…………

navya 2 herself;;hamesa kuch na kuch bahana banake mujse milne aata tha phir aj hi kyu nahi aaya???or uska phone bhi off he…………Anant!!!!!!!!!plzzz……. tum jante ho na idiot mein tumse kitna pyar karti hoon..tumhe kitna miss karungii…………plzzz Anant aajao………….atleast phone toh karo!!!!!!!...

Its already midnight Nimi has slept while Navya also slept waiting Anant!!!!!!!!!...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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and Finally Majnu comes in,he slowly goes towards Navi n shuts her mouth wid his hands..Navya is scared and happy as well…………

Anant ask her to follow him.but Navi doesn't so he threatens her in low voice

A;tum mere sath aa rahi ho ya phir tume uthake le jau???

navya acts as if she dint listen,,,,,,,,anant about to lift navya..

N; anant chodo ye kya karahe ho??mein aarahi hoon……….

anant closes navi's eyes takes her to his balcony ask her not to open eyes goes to the door locks door,switches off the rooms light n returns to d balcony and……

A; ab khol sakti ho apne aakhein………

Navya was mesmerized to see the decoration in Balcony..everywere there were candles lightened and rose petals scattered……………*.Anant asks Navi to look up in the sky………….

navi sees I LOVE U………..I MISS U flashing simultaneously one after other….*

BG BEKABOO…………..and Navi also totally Bekaboo seeing all this…………

she was soo happy that he was doing the barish of I LOVE U…….. I LOVE U………… I LOVE U………. I LOVE U sooo much ANANT and finally she even kissed Anant in cheeks………..

(bg pehla pyaarrr………….)

Anant gets a big shock.his mouth and eyes opened wide and his hands were stuck in his cheeks…………then Navi realizes wat she did and was blushing like anything………

she runs towards room……….

Anant holds her in his Arms from behind………kisses on her shoulder then on neck..turns her around and kisses in forehead,cheeks and was about to kiss in lips…(he realisews that Navya was totally devoting herself for him………he was extremely happy to see his lady love fallen for him to that exent)…………..their lips were soo close that they were feeling each others breath….. but den suddenly lights TURNED ON………Navya opens her eyes and moves away from Anant………..

it was Anant who turned on the lights………

this time Navya was feeling guilty her eyes were full of tears and she cudnt face Anant…….

Anant holds navya's hand and make her face him

A; Itna pyar karti ho mujshe??itna bharosa hae mujh par???

navya keeps her eyes down,tears rolling down her eyes……..anant wipes the tears(wid hand hah

)

A; idhar dekho Navya,tum roh kyu rahi ho??tumne koi gunha nai kiya,tum mujhse pyar karti ho..mujh par bharosa karti ho,ye koi paaap nai hae..aur tumey itna guilty feel karne ki koi jarurat nai!!

waise vi ab to bas 5 months n 3 weeks baki he uske baad toh na ye lights,na hamari gharwale humey disturb kar payengey……humey kisi bhi nahi darna padega,tumey ish kamre mein aane ki puri aajadi hogi mujhe itna papad belna nahi padega………….

Navya laughs………..anant takes her to the window….

A(showing up in the sky): oh chand,tarey aur ye asmaan dikh rahi ho Navya???tumey pata ye saab hamari zindagi ke sabse khubsurot raat ke gawah honge….ye Hamari shadi ki raat ko apne majudgi se aur bhi khubsurat aur yaadgar banyengey……….saree kayanat hum eek karangey,us raat hum ek hojayengey "TUM or MEIN"………………mujhe bass abb us lamhe ka intazar he Navya……………..he hugs Navya!!!!!!!!!!

there total silence for a while………..
Anant staring at Navya continuously wid the eye full of tears…………..

Navya nods her head and ask him wat happened(widout uttering sound)

A;I am sorry Navya………..mei tumara Dard samaj nahi paya,aaj jab tum Kal ja rahi ho ye soch kar mera dil bhar aaya or Ma,chachi or Nimi ko rothe huye dekha tab ja kar mein samaj paya………..

n;kya????

a; yehi ki apno se dur jana kitna muskil hota he,tum bas 7 din ish gahr mein thi lekin tumare jane se yeha saab ko kitna dukh ho raha he………tumare gharwale ke sath toh tum itne saal thi unse dur hona tumhe kitna muskil hota hoga na???apne pariwar,apne ghar saab 6odkar tumey is ghar mein aana he jaha saab kuch naya he saab ajnabi jese he..tumey kitni taklif hota hoga ye saab!!!!!!!! I m sorry Navya, ye saab mere liye na????

N; nahi ye saaab hamare liye………aur kisne kaha yeha saab ajnabi jese he.ish ghar mein toh woh rehta he jo mere dil ke sabse karib he,,,,,,,,,jo mere harek saans ko khud mehasus kar sakta he………..jo pyar mujhe mere Maa,papa…dadi milkar karte hein utna pyar toh woh akele karta he………..aur uska ghar mera bhi toh ghar he na………….

tum nahi jante Anant mere har muskil har taklif ki dabah ho tum………….sirf tumari Mrs Anant bajpayee baney ki khayal hi mere liye sari duniya ka khushi se badkar he……Maa papa ko 6odne ka daar pata nahi tumare khyal mein kahin gum hojata hae………..

tumari tarah mein bhi tumse ek hone ke liye betaab hu………….ek ek lamha ghinti hun main bhi……………

Anant totally Lattoo over Navya's confession he was just staring at Navya widout blinking eyes…..navya notices this and says

N;anant….anant………..abh mujhe jana chahiye

A;ja toh rahi ho…………..KAL……mujhe 6odke………….kuch ghante mere sath nahi bita sakti ho??kal subah sabke uthne se pehle tumey Nimi ke kamre tak 6odunga..abhi ke liye ruk jao plzzz…………plzz Navya….

Navya cudnt deny Anant's request………..they were in sofa chatting till 3 am……….and finally they both fell asleep there in eachother shoulders………

AT 5 am……….alarms rings..Anant wakes up……….he was happy to see Navya sleeping in his arm………..he tried to wake Navya but again cudnt disturb her as she was sleeping so calmly………..so he Lifts Navya in his arms and then takes her to Nimis room…………but as he was about to keep her in the bed Navya opens her eyes…………..Navya was surprised and happy as well……………Anant places her in the bed and was about to leave Navya holds his hand and Kisses……………………

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Posted: 13 years ago
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FRENS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I m really very very sorry for long post………..Guys plzz do comment and ur critical analysis is heartily open u can criticize and suggest me as much as u want………..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited my post almost aftr 4 months..nebody interestd can read
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow lovely lovely imagination plzzz do continue it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow.. welcome back..pls keep visit na yaar..we need active members .. wonderful RS ...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautifully taken...Loved ur RS... keep writing...
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👏👏👏👏 superb dear.. Jst awesome..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was a wonderful RS!!
really loved the dialogues which anya said to each other...
keep writing...will love to read more of it!

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