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Ramya_anya

@Ramya_anya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#551

Hai chandrika🤗
Wow!!!very nice imagination dear...
Awesome dear👏 Keep writing dear..

@coolzohr Awesome breaks👏 Liked all ur breaks.. great job👍🏼

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soniadutta

@soniadutta

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#552

zohr ...lued dis add...sach mai yaar ANYA ke scene dekhane ke baad to ladoo hi ladooo phutte hai

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ZOHR

@coolzohr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#553

hey guy's that i had posted in rewrite a scene contest by harika

the scene is the karvachaut wala scene where navya break's her fast alone but its rewritten in this way

IN college after anya have a fight in the garden of the college...

WHAT I WANTED 2 HAPPEN

Anant get's up n goes 2 the canteen n there he see Ranbir Ritz n Appy sitting on a table n Ranbir eating that sandwitch tht he had made 4 Navya ...N get's more angry n rushes toward's the table shoutingg RANBIRRR

Ranbir notices tht anant has seen him n is rushing 2ward's him get's nervous n say's

Ranbir:arre yaar anant tu aagaya Navya kahan hai...

Anant:us madam ka naam mat le naajaane uski problem kya hai..mai ne ..mai ne usse itne pyaar se manaya..itne pyaar se jitne pyaar se aaj tak mai ne kisiko bhi nahi manaya tha..aur woh madm nakhre dikha rahi hai

Ritz:Anant ab aisa kya hua ke tum uss par itna gussa ho rahe ho..

Appy:ha anant aisa kya hua

Anant:mujhe kyu pooch rahi ho tum dono madam ji ko hi jakar pucho na...

Ritz Appy n Ranbir look at each other n thn Ritz n Appy get's up frm there chair n start's moving toward's the canteen door

Anant:arre tum dono ab kaha jaa rahe ho

Ritz:tum to itne gusse mai ho ke hamari baat to suno ge nahi na hi hamme batao ge ke baat kya hai issi liye hum Navya se hi jaanne ki koshish karne waale hai

Anant:ha ha aur uss madam ko samjha bhi dena

APPY N RITZ [2gether] ;Anant tum bhi na

[thn smile n go out of the canteen 2ward's the garden}

IN THE GARDEN

navya is sitting in the same place

Appy:ritz tujhe pata hai kiya ke anant kaha hai

Ritz:nahi appy mujhe kaise pata hoga ke MR .Bajpai kaha hai woh to MRS.Bajpaai ko hi paata hoga na..

Navya [angrily] :mujhe nahi pata ke kaha hai woh..woh hi jaane.

Appy:ooohoo itna gussaa

Ritz:uhmm uhmm kyu navya aisa kiya hogaya ke tu uss se itni naaraaz hai

Navya:chodo na ussko..humare paasss aaur kuch nahi hai kya baat karne ke liye..aur waise bhi exam's aane waale hai 2 hum padhaaii ke baare mai baat kare

Ritz tujhe kitna aata hai computer's mai tera 5th lesson hogaya kiya..

Ritz:Navya pehle too mera 1st lesson bhi hua hai ya nahi pata nai aur tu 5th lesson ki baat kar rahi hai

[THN RITZ N APPY START LAUGHING N SEEING THN NAVYA ALSO LAUGH'S]

Appy:chalo tu hasi to sahi mai ne to socha tha ke ab tu saara din yeh roondu sa chehra bana kar bethi rahe gi[THN REMOVES A CHOCOLATE FRM HER BAG ] chal issi baat pe kuch meetha hojaye[BUT AS V KNW NAVYA WAS FASTING

4 ANANT }

Navya:nahi nahi mera mood nahi hai

Ritzz:mood kyu nahi hai Navya appy ne teri fav chocolate lai hai aur tu mana kar rahi hai ..nahi navya tujhe khana hi hoga

Navya :nahi ritz appy plss nahi

Ritz n Appy:ha ha ha chal kha

[N BW THIS} navya sys's mai nahi kha sakti warna sab beekaar hojaye ga

Ritz:kiya bekkar hojaye ga

Navya:kuch nahi {shy shy she is blushing}

Appy:bol na navya

Navya:aacha thik hai paar tum aur kisi ko nahi bata oo ge na specially anant ko

RITZ N APPY:ha babaa nahi batayenge

Navya:promise

appy:ha baba promise aur ritz ki taraf se bhi promise ab bataye gi

Navya:woh mai..mai ne na anant ke liya karvachud ka wrath rakha hai

N AS U KNW

Ritz :kya paagal to tuune usse bola kyu nahi

Appy:woh saab chod mai abhi anant ko call karke batati hu

Navya [snatches appy's phone ]:Nahi tu ne promise kiya tha ab tu nahi ataye gi

thn navya get's Meeta's call

meeta :tu kaha hai jaldi ghar aajaa yaha ghar ki decoration me teri help chahiye...tujhe yaad hai na aaj karvachut hai

Navya:ha mai wo mai

Meeta:tujhe jo bolna hai baad me bolna abhi ke liye tu jaha hai waha se jaldi ghar aaja waaise bhi college ka tim to khatam ho gaya na to jaldi ghar aa

Navya:ok maa mai aati hu

N NAVYA LEAVES

NOW RITZ N APPY DOORAING[MAKING RUN] THEIR BRAIN

ritz:ab kiya kare ..yeh navya bhi na..anant ke liye wrath[fast] rakha aur hume usse batane bhi nahi derahi hai..

APPY:idea uss ne kaha ke hum anant ko nahi bolenge par yeh nahi kaha ke usse likh bhi nahi sakte

RITZ CONFUSED

Ritz:tu kiya bol rahi hai aapy mere kuch samajh mai nahi aaraaha

APPY REMOVES HER MOBILE FRM HER BAG NGOES 2 HER MESSAGE APPLICATIN SELKECT'S NEW MESSAGE N TYPE'S ANANT'S NUMBER THERE N SEND'S HIM THE NEW'S ABT NAVYA'S FAST

ritz:appy tu ne kiya kiya

Appy:mai ne anant ko message kar diya

Ritz:arre wah appy

Appy:thank u thank u

N THIS COLLEGE SCENE ENDS

now anant in his house in his room

u may wonder how he reached there while this trio convo was going on he left 4 his house n now he is in his room

Anant's mobile recieves the message tht appy had sent him...he open's the new message n gives tht masti;happy;excited...etc etc wala smile on his face n thn bring 's a plan wala smile on his face

AT NAVYA HOUSE [night]

the phone bell ring 's tringgg

n daadi pick's up the call n it's anant who had called

DAADI:hello kon

Anant:daadi mai anant

DAADI:accha mai navya ko bullati hu..

Anant:nahi nahi daadi mujhe aap se hi baat karni thi

DAADI:kyu bhaiya navya ko chod kar tumhe humse ke baat karni hai

Anant:woh daadi kya hai na wohh mai yeh..metra matlab navya

DAADI:arre ab kaho ge bhi ya wowo hi kartye raho ge

Anant:wo daadi aaj karva chaud hai na...to navya na mere liye wrath rakha hai..paar use nahi pata ke mujhe pata hai

DAADI:Accha to iss budhi daadi ki maadad chahiye thi...

Anant:ha daadi ji woh kya aap navya ko koyi bahane se 10 min me neeche bhej dengi ...taaki

DAADI:thik hai thik hai ..bhaiya..ab hum yeh bhi kardenge...

n thn notices tht navya is coming out of her bed room n keep's the phone

saying:ACHA BABA HUM NAVYA KO BHEJ DENGE AAP KI DUUKAAN MAI WOH LE AAYE GI AAP KI DUKAAN SE HAMARI ZAAROORAT KI CHEEZE

Navya:kya le aaon daadi

DAADI:arre woh meeta neh harsh ko kaha tha kaarvaachaud ke liye woh channi le kar aane ke liye paar woh ladka toh apne dost ke ghar mai hai aur woh dukaan wala keh raha hai ke uss ki dukaan me koi nahi hai abhi ke woh channi hume bhej de to mai ne keh diya ke 2 chali jaeegi

Navya:par daadi

DAADI:kya par var..yahi paas wali dukan hai kuch 5 min lagenge tujhe waapas aane nai to jaa kar le aana

NAVYA{SADLY bcoz as v laalll knw she 2 has 2 break her fast]:Theek hai daadi

N goes out of the door

n thn goes 2 tht shop n buy's the channi, whn she is returning n reches the building gate notices anant standing there nnn smilesss

N Anant cum's near her n hold's her hand n say's :Tumhe kiya laaga tha ke aagar tum mujhe nahi baataaoo gi to mujhe pata nahi chale ga ke tum ne mere liye wrath rakha hai..

n thn turn's her n show's her the moon in the same way as he did whn they were on the bajpai house terrace

nt hn as u knw navya has the channi so she turn's n look's at anant with it n thn anant bring's a bottle of minersal water frm his car n makes her drink it n thn removes the chocolate frm his pocket n makes her eat it..thn hold's her face in his palm's bring's it close 2 him n kisses her on her forehead..

thn navya sys I LOVE U ANANT

ANant[smiles] n thn say's : I LOVE U 2 NAVYA

thn navya sys :accha ab tum jaao ..aur mujhe bhi jaane do daadi ne jaldi aane ke liye kaha hai maa ko iss channi se apna wrath chod na hai to mai chal ti hu

thn anya see harsh coming n thn anant leaves navya..n navya leaves 2ward's her house thn turn's n smiles at anant

anant also smiles n goes to his car smiling n thn

both of thm leave 4 they houses

n the episode end'sss

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navyaaddict3

@navyaaddict3

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#554

@ zohr- i had high expectations from the show in that particular karwachauth scene but navi had to broke off her fast by looking at Anant's photo as a result of which i became exasperated. But now on reading your scene i am again jubilant because the scene is absolutely anyalicious. It is just perfect- Anant bringing the mineral water bottle- it is so romantic. Thank you zohr for highlighting the scene in a completely different angle by involving anya.

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ZOHR

@coolzohr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: piyali237
@ zohr- i had high expectations from the show in that particular karwachauth scene but navi had to broke off her fast by looking at Anant's photo as a result of which i became exasperated. But now on reading your scene i am again jubilant because the scene is absolutely anyalicious. It is just perfect- Anant bringing the mineral water bottle- it is so romantic. Thank you zohr for highlighting the scene in a completely different angle by involving anya.

awww my pleasure di tht's soo sweet of u n even i had expected a lot frm tht karwachaut wala epi really this is wht i had thought😭😭😭