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Binu Shoba

@BinuShoba

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Posted: 14 years ago

#211

@Chandrika itz really nice dear..liked it.. keep writin..

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Siona

@.m.a.r.y.s.i.o.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#212

hey chandu di...that was superb one and pls do write more

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Thaniyah_K

@Thaniyah_K

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#213

Awesome guys please carry on!!

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alina30

@alina30

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#214

awsome imagnation nd keep cont

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87jpatel

@87jpatel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#215

awesome Zohr, sonia and chandrika
loves it..

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Lamia Tasnim Liana

@-Liana-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#216

Awesbloosom add& scenes gr8 going guys truely njoy this post

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Hina

@samratrocks

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Posted: 14 years ago

#217

@chandu di...woow..lovely imaginatioonnn

well written di!

do conttt

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Rashmi

@Rashu1505

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#218

zohr ye break ke ideas ste kaha se hai tujhe 😆it was so cute add 😛and update was awsum sorry i will comment late for a few days i am busy yaar 😭😭lot of work

Edited by strawberryrashu - 14 years ago

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sumaiya sultana rika

@arhirocker

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: Aarushi_mitzi
i know i cant write well bt i hav tried for u zohr...pls hav patience 2 read it dearies...
after office has completed navya calls anath..annanth waiting navyas call...happyly lifts it...here is their conversation
Navya:after office navya calls ananth
Ananth:he is waiting for her call😳.after seeing navyas call he feels very happy😃 and he lifts the call
Navya:hai ananth...hw was ur first day in the office?😊
Ananth:My first day in the office was awesomeee...bt i missed u a lot...i was waiting for ur call...and i got ur call dear...😊.navya u say how was ur first day in the office?
Navya...i missed u too ananth...i felt very much tension on entering into the office...day passed out like that...ananth shll v meet ritz appy and ranbir?it had been a long time our whole gang met...i wanna meet all of them ananth .i am missing them a lot...
Ananth:I thot of spending with u alone 2day...but no prob...u want 2 meet them all na...ya we will meet them dear...i just want ur happiness...love u navya...i m comming 2 pick u...
Navya:...love u 2 ananth...thank u sooo much...i ma very lucky2 hav u ananth😃.i will call all of them and ask them 2 meet...they will feel very happy...bye ananth...love u dear...i am waiting for u.
Ananth:love u 2 navya ...i will come in half an hour...

dearies first time i hav tried something...no tamatars and andaas please...😆

hey chandu di u wrote really well...plz cont...we r having fun...nd loving it...

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Magical_NaiRan

@Magical_NaiRan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#220

This is the continuation of navya and anath phone convo...😃

after that phone convo..ananth goes to pick up navya...ananth goes late there...navya will be waiting for ananth...as ananth will be late navya will be angry on him...😆😆

Ananth:ananth is abt to start the car...his father came and gives some work 2 ananth...annath is like irritaed bt he is nt showin dat irritation...he goes 2 see the work given by his dad...in dat work tension he forgot 2 say navya .he will come some what late...in dat driving annath is only thinking abt navya...and he is feeling very sad also ...it is very less time bt also he is feelin ssad...coz he cant wait 2 see navya...

Navya:navya near the office...will be waiting for ananth...she is trying to cal appy,ritz and rannbir...she calls appy

AppyandRitz:hai navya...u remebered us nd called...wow navya...we r in shock...u called us...(they is angry on navya coz she dint call appy and ritz)

Navya:

she is feeling bad...aftr hearing appy...she told...sorry appy...actually i m in tenson for the job...new jao...first timme and all...

Appy and Ri:its ok navya...we are sorry for being angry on u...actualli we missed u a lot...we all will talk atleat twice a dya.and meet also..bt v all dint meet since 2 days...first time like dis happnd...dats y v r angry with u...sorry navya...

Navya:i too missed u a lot guys...i m sorry..i will nt repeat dis again...

Appy and Ritz:its ok navya leav it now...v are happy dat again u called us😃...soo how was ur first day in the office navya?

Navya:it was fine...some wt tensio and all...all over it is better...ritz and appy i want 2 meet u...since 2 days v dint meet...v will meet 2day...i and annath will be in half an our ...v will meet in Mac donalds,,,,,,,,is it ok ?

Appy and ritz:they r very happy 2 hear dat she want 2 meet them..and they r all meeting aftr long time...ya navya v will be waiting for u and ananth...

Navya:thank u guys...ritz u also call ranbir and see...bye ritz and appy v will meeet there then...

Aanath :he is already late...nw he is feared abt navyas angry...coz she will be angry on him for being late...😆😆...he drives fastly...

Navya:navya waitin for ananth...and she is slowly getting angry...it is half an hour late already...

Ananth:ananth comes there sees navya in the angry mood...he already bought a choclate for navya 2 cool her...he is thinking wt 2 do 2 cool navya...

Navya:she is very angry on ananth...

annath:ananth hugs navya from the back...he says sorry 2 navya...by catching his ears...😳...and says pls dont be angry on me navya please