*Updated* FF: Pyaar, Ishq aur Mohabbat (Page 54) - Page 37

It was mesmerizing, gripping,scintillating, never putting down fiction. I was a huge romance novel fan. Devoured Mills&Boon, Harlequin by the dozen. This fiction was pure amazing.

You have a great writing style which makes the idea and flow easier to grasp and keeps me wanting more even when it is over.

How I wish the entire Kanpur incident shown in your fiction happened in Navya. This is what we wanted to see, all the rasams like mehendi ki rasam, sangeet ki rasam etc. Your writing is flowing yet imaginative. Why could the CV's, directors who ever show us all that. Even 50 % of what you had written if it was shown, Kanpur would not have been a fiasco.

I still wish the Navya team come and check this post as they can get some ideas for cute ANYA scenes for the future.

See this is what is missing in Navya. The excitement of being together with each other followed by romance. The behaviour of ANYA as 2 youngsters in love, the chori chori chupke chupe milan etc. I am not saying that means that we should get heavy on romance but am asking for cute scenes.

Better stop now and say Kudos to you Ritch and your beta Soumya. Cannot wait to read more.

Kudos, to you..⭐️

Your post is ultra romantic yet subtle with innocence intact.😳.I loved the mehndi part with the little detail about Renuka's bitter half😆

And loved the kangan scene..super duper..👏

Thank you and hope to see more of you 😊

@Preet- Thanks babe! No worries, the altercation between Anant-Meeta won't be tooo dramatic like what we saw on the show, that I can assure you!

@DivaAnYa- Thanks babes!

@Binu- Thank you so much!

@Neelu- Thank you so much babes! Glad to know you liked it! IDK when can I update next, cause kal se I'm gonna be MIA!

@sifarah -Thank you so much. Won't be on IF for a week (starting tomorrow) for personal reasons, so should hopefully be able to update after the 12th!

@Isha- Hey babes! Thank you so much for liking the FF, I'm glad to know you liked it and compared it to the show, its the love and support of you guys that motivates me to write more! I too am a die-hard romantic, but I read stuff like Meg Cabot and stuff, chick flicks types, and a lot of HP FF, and that's where I learnt how to write! I hope you'll continue to like it either! On behalf of Soumya, and from myself too, thanks a lot for liking our effort!

@Nidhi- Thanks hun! Yeap, the Renu track will be explored in the near future, but as of now all you're gonna see are a few hints here and there! The Nimi-Nikhil track is also coming up next, so stay tuned for lots of drama and romance!

@Zara- Thanks! There will be no OTT dramatic reactions, cause *spoilers* someone is gonna come and handle the situation before it gets worse!

Soumya

Loving Navi being so candid with Renu, and Anant 's assurance to Navi by adorning her hands with the kangan...that is the beauty of your FF..every character swarming the plot has a very well defined job to do...promises and positives are renewed , there is hope and faith in coming times...👏👍🏼

Waiting for more coz my craving is not yet slaked 😳..

And if you do not mind, could u drop a PM whenever you update??...wud save me the travail of skimming through the melange of posts..😛.

@Soumya, appreciate your effforts, hun..🤗

@Aanch- Thanks hun! I really have to sit with a dictionary open next to me whenever I see your comments on my stories, the vocab you use! My my! And once again, thank you so much for appreciating my work! As an ardent follower of the show, and thanks to the detailed analysis that I read and write myself, I've noticed the flaws and shortcomings in the show and characters, and I try to ensure that those shortcomings are not there in my story, so that those of us who're frustrated with the way the characters are being brutally assassinated, can have some solace in reading a small work of fiction! Once again, thank you so much for the appreciation, and have a nice holiday!

@Nidhi and @Aanch- Yeap sure, will do so, DW about that! And will also mention it in the adda along with one of the posts, so that way you all can check it out there as well!

@Shantanu- I assure you the next chapter won't be scary, and we won't have a Meeta-Anant altercation like the one we saw on the show. Thanks for all the support dude, and hope you keep liking the fic!