NAVYA SHAYARI CORNER 2 UPDATED Pg no 75

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Dharshini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

hey.. very nice.. then ur rating is too gud.👍🏼

thnks fr ur PM..

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rituloveskmh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

you got awesome talent dear!!!:o)keep it up!!!

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Deadlydynamite

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: pixiegirl
Hey Manoj, great shayari as always, was missing it for a while. Glad you made a post today and yes the AnYa scenes were really cute.

And I agree, they shud shut up this bai for good now, that her deed has been done.

thanks pixie even i missed my thread happy to be back will be here often atleast for some time 😆

that horrendous bai is as torturous n boring as the loonys we have the namunas in bajpaye house as well Navya 's native place at kanpur Navya's house was left the cvs filled the loony void there with this obnoxious bai 😡

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Deadlydynamite

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: shanukit007
Manoj ji, Maan gaye,
Pura epi iss shari me shimta diya, aisa kar ke mazaa dilva diya...

& '+ points' r goodly written which show ur ability to express d felling in words...😃😃😃

overall, Nice post👏

thanks shanu i m happy u liked my attempt 😃

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Deadlydynamite

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: MistyColours
Congrats for ur second thread👏
Nice post as always...

thanku misty glad u liked my post😃

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Deadlydynamite

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: shamya1
Congrats for ur second thread Manoj...i always loved ur shayaris...though i was a silent reader those times...
Awsome as usual...dear...

thanks a lot shamya(whats ur real name?) i m glad my post ceased u from being a silent reader plz do share ur views liking disliking criticism whatever u feel .i ll be all ears 😃

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Deadlydynamite

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: navyaalex8
Good one!👍🏼 Glad u got time to write a shayari ! Thanks for the PM buddy!

(But the idea of Meeta not doing any work other than interfering in Navya's love life is a bit 🤔 IMO...I do hope u r joking 😊!)

thanks nisha gald u liked it

well abt meeta i was being sarcastic as a mother she has full right to ask Navya abt her love life but she shud not control her dominate her decisions meeta is not even giving Navya a chance which she rightfully deserves which is wrong on meeta's part .so i was just asserting that she can have a say in Navya's matter but she shud give her the freedom to decide not to make her dance at her whims .she is not ready to listen Navya but is always tongue tied in front of that obtruding bai which irks me a lot 😡😒

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Deadlydynamite

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: zara990
Congrats for your 2nd shayari corner🥳
Awesome shayari as always

thank u zara😃

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Deadlydynamite

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Aanchal15
As always, a luminous shayari,from you, Manoj.👏👏

Renu's anguish, Meeta's predicament, Papa Deepak's empathy, Mandbhuddhi's daydreams,AnYa scenes mesmerising me, and transporting me ,into a different world... Navya was so, adorable, the trio's friendly banter, Mohan-Rama's endeavour, and lastly Anant, efforts, to not chaperone,the ladies, to the wedding, ...an ordinary episode, with a ,decent measure of, everything👏👏.

Agree, the only thing,that irked me was, the helper...extremely, obtruding..😲😒

Thank you, for the, pm,...😃

ahh the magnificent writer is back ur charm is infectious i just love the way u play with words are u in literature or something i see a well good maturity in ur posts dear that is always lacking in mine certainly anyways

thanks a ton .i m in awe at ur nimble mind n

keep writing