Pehla Pyaar Ka Khumaar - Page 6

Originally posted by: AnnieKittWatt

Hello! 😊

Lovely one again!! An awesome way to describe their togetherness and their Pure Love...👏

And a nice way to describe Danica's character - Shagun...

" Bhejna chaha us cartoon Shagun ko apne Debar G ke PAAS

tham gayi cartoon sochkar banna tha use ab KHAAS

apni athani akkal lagakar cartoon ghai Lipistik aur pouder ko APNANE

Apne cartooni surat ko aur bi Bhayanak BANANE😆

chahti vo chudail apne debarG ki us cartoon par ho pehli NAZAR

par use kya pata uske debarG aur hone bali debrani ke pyaar ki KHABBAR "

Hahaha...too good!! 😆

Cute lines too...

" Apni Dhadkon ko anant ke dil se milakar jab ho rahi thi Navya Anant se DOOR

Rok liya navya ko bulakar uska naam akhir apne pyaar se tha vo MAJBOOR

Chodkar zaari bandishey aur Majbooriyon ka SAATH

faisla kiya usne thamega vo apne pyaar ka HAATH

Kahe usne vo 3 ruhani lavz jiska tha hum sabko INTEZAAR

Sunkar un lavson ko navya ka dil hua BEKARAAR

beh raha tha Anya ka pyaar Navya ke motiyon ke SAHARE

Ab Anant ki zindagi se jud chuka hai Navya ke Zindagi ke SITARE

Khushiyan manao chaya hai Pyaar ka MAUSAM

ANYA ke pyaar ki Baarish mein aao bheege HUM aur TUM☺️ "

Loved it!

Regards

Annie 😊

Originally posted by: Pallavi_rox

mujhe toh aana hi tha na manoj...teri poem ho n i dont reply thats nt possible...lovely post...😃

Originally posted by: silver4karan

My name is Silver Mardhani.. 😊 n ur all shayries r amazing..!!😊 keep it up..!!

Originally posted by: snowhitepinkzz

Its was a pleasure to read those wonderful shayarisss... I love it!!!😳 Keep writing,...👏👍🏼 and btw, Manoj, we have talked, and you from Kerala na.. so how well you write those amazing poems ...???😳 a question out of curiosity!😊

Originally posted by: Tab1

wow

Originally posted by: manojshonafan

pallo tujhe mein javab nahi dun aisa kabi ho nahi sakti koi baat

aakhir hum aur tum mein itni gehri dosti ka hai jo saath😳

Originally posted by: Pallavi_rox

manoj u r a sweetheart yaar... that was shooo shweet...

luv pallo

got sumthing or u ...

Originally posted by: manojshonafan

well snowwhite ya its true i m from kerala but i had to come here in mumbai for my studies .thats the way i got in touch with hindi language before that my hindi was pathetic 😆n shayari is just a hobby .😃

Originally posted by: manojshonafan

even i have something for u pallo meri jaan .sugar free choclates n 1 big jaddoo ki jhappi