NP SS: Ajeeb Dastaan (Chapter 1 Updated) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...

Agar teri es SS mai purab nai hai or -ive hai 2 then mai read nai karun ge 😡

Oye meri Bichua Rani mujhe thodi na pata tha ki tu yaha hai.
Don't worry Purab hai.
But yeh ive koun hai?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...

Oye hoye
sundori meray ko q nai bataya tou NP forum pe bhe Jalwa dikha rahi hai

Aaj hi suru kya..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PROLOGUE:

Bhajauli, Panjab, India-

He is running. Not actually running but jogging if you want to say properly. But doesn't he want to? Hell yeah. Every day he woke up in the morning he wishes to run away from here and go back home. Every time he sees Bebe his mind screams that what a big cheat he is. Every time he sees Meher he remembers her. He still can smell her magical fragrance. Her carefree laugh. The sound of her bangles. He smiled. No one can keep her away from her bangles. He still can remember the way her eyes used to twinkle each time she saw him. He wonder what will be she doing now. Is she also remembering him the way he remembering her? Probably. People say everything is fare in war and love. He smiled a bitter smile. Only he knows what a big fat lie this is. He stopped under a tree. He was panting hard. He gritted his teeth. It's his entire fault. If he can get him in hand just once. He will cut him into pieces. People no he cannot be called people but creature. Creature like him doesn't deserve to live. But his hands are tied. He punched in the tree. Damn it!! He will have to find out a way. Soon. He promised to himself. Soon he will free himself.

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Meher always wakes up early in the morning. Today she got up extra early. Today she is going to make food. She wants to give Sameer a surprize. At the mention of Sameer all smile went away from her lips.

Meher (to herself): Yeh tujhe kya ho gya Sameer? Mera dost Pajama Sing kaha chala gya? Aur usske jayga yeh koun ghus gya tere andar?

She hugged her knees to her chest.

Meher (to herself): Tu to pehle aisa nehi tha. Mana ki tu jimmedar ban gya hai. Lyek banke aya hai. Par sath hi sath tune yeh jo gambhir wala roop lya hai na yeh mujhe nehi pasand. Aisa kya hoga ki tu itna gambhir ban gya? Aab to tu pehle ki tarah mujhe dekhta bhi nehi hai. Ekbar bas yeh shadi ho jane de. Chun chun ke badla lungi tujhse.

An adorable smile spread across her face.

Lahore Central Hospital, Pakistan-

Slowly very slowly he was gaining conscious. He slowly opened his eyes. A very pretty face was watching him intently. He tried to recall the face but could not. Is it Meher? He called out in a weak voice.

He: Meher?

Girl: Main Meher nehi hoom. Main Nafesa hoom. So jao. Tumhe aram ki jarorat hai. Haam badmein baat karenge.

He wanted to protest. He wanted to ask few no a lot of question. But what were those questions? Everything seems so foggy. An image of being shot flashed his mind. Before he could make a grab darkness enveloped him again.


Guys please hit the like button and do comment. Your comment encourage me to continue..

Edited by EashaYousufzai - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Prologue- Page 2
Chapter 1- Page 4
Edited by EashaYousufzai - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
wow judaa premiyon ko mila do yaar...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
nice start with a nice change... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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-ive mean negative darling beta start ke pages check kar aur introduction wala thread mai yahan show ke start se houn but just 4 nikhil aka purab.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hmm
nyc, acha he hoga 🤣
mai ne ek nazar dakha start se end tak yeh part mujay purab ka name nazar nai aya so mai ne read nai kea u knw this is my speciality jahan meray ko apna fav charactr dikhai na day mai woh part skip kar daiti houn 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...

Hmm
nyc, acha he hoga 🤣
mai ne ek nazar dakha start se end tak yeh part mujay purab ka name nazar nai aya so mai ne read nai kea u knw this is my speciality jahan meray ko apna fav charactr dikhai na day mai woh part skip kar daiti houn 🤣

Okay.
Purabne jo kia so kia but he will change.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: sharmatanya

wow judaa premiyon ko mila do yaar...

Itni bhi jaldi kya hai yaar..😆😉
Khel to sirf suru hua hai..

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