OS: The Aftermath ~ 06-05-2018

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Sd1978

@Sd1978

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

U are a very good writer..shldve applied to be one with nk!

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

This was heartbreaking! Truly!

We don't realize that a strong person can & does have a breaking point too. There are only so many hits a person can take before they too crumble down...it doesn't matter if you don't hear a sigh of complaint from their mouth ever...but they too hurt & feel pain.

It was strange to read Avni having a total breakdown like this...considering that the girl has always come out fighting against adversaries...but then like she had said on the show...how do u fight against someone who has actually stood besides you in all your previous struggles?

Any chance of continuing this piece? Showing us how Neil is gonna mend his broken Avni piece-by-piece...

Edited by paayaal - 7 years ago

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

This was so heartbreaking. I had tears .

There is always a breaking point for evena strongest person . I have always wondered what will be Avni's breaking if not Mowgli being taken away . If I were her I would have given up on life much before or lost my mind . Neil had many ways to vent out his emotions be it anger or mourning but Avni ! God she had bottled up so much that if breaks open the damage will be so devastating . It was so hard to read this piece . Avni in her own imaginary world with her doll whom she assumes as Mowgli . How will it be for the child who has grown up with his mother who is failing to recognize him? 😭

Are you gonna continue ?

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

This is heartwrenchingly Beautiful ashi..

God! no one should go through this. No one.

Seeing the person you love the most in this state, knowing you are responsible for that...is heartbreaking

If possible, consider giving us another shot where Neil gets back his avni..

Love you for writing such amazing shots...!❤️

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Nidhii

@Nidhii.3007

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Ashi🤗

Sorry for being late.

This felt so real. As if the scene is playing in front of my eyes.

I cried reading this one. And when my mother saw me she said are u crazy why are u crying? And I said I don't know I just felt like crying.

Awesome piece of work. But u know I am also selfish and greedy and want some more works like this from u. Emotional one . Thank u for paying heed to my request.

Once again thanks a lot.

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Wingsoflove_2

@Wingsoflove_2

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Can u pls continue this?

I want to see how neil get back his avni.

Its a request

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SupriyaC

@SupriyaC

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

You are an amazing writer. Had tears in my eyes while reading. Like the entire story played in front of my eyes... such a powerful plot and so emotional... keep writing more!!!

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docritu99

@docritu99

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

What was that.!!!!!!

I have no words to describe the pang my heart endured while reading this.! It was enormously emotional and Heartbreaking.!

I am in awe of this piece. It stirred my heart gravely.! Avni had stockpilled all the sufferings she has endured and bottled up all the emotions, so much that it led her towards a dead end of her own sanity.!

Beautifully written.! Kudos to you.!

I wont demand a continuation of this.! It will loose its charm, and yes i can understand that.!
But plz try giving up something else on a happy and good note.!

Much love.!

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canzasana

@canzasana

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

I have tears in my eyes, so emotional story, Neil and avni's pain... beautifully written. i didnt lose connection with them , feeling sad for Mowgli since at very young age he is witnessing this trauma, do write more👏