AvNeil FF: 'A MILLIONAIRE'S First Love Thread #3 (Upto Chap 68) - Page 63

Originally posted by: iris_diaries

Di what you have done, this is the most shocker epi I have ever read Wait, untill u read the next one.! 😉

AvNeil kiss, that too infront of everybody, and childern, too much uncensored😲😉 Hahahaha, That craked me up.!

My goodness pata nahi Avni kya reaction degi, Or pata nahi Neil ka kya hoga.!

Aap na sachmein bura ho, Important situations pe likhna band kar dete ho, so bad.😕 Tell me something i dont already know.!

I think Neil will murder Shivam.

Aur iss incident ke baad press ko nahi lagegi, un nurses hi media ka kam kar degi.😡 Hypothetically, can be a possibility.!

Hmm I can get why u said that declaring name of owner of airlines can bring much needed announcement, atleat kuch logon toh Neil ko pahechan lega.😊 I didnt get this part?

Pata hai di, pehle thread se mujhe iss epi ka intejar tha, kab Neil ko Avni ka yeh chota boyfriend ka pata chalega aur Neil kya karega.😃 There is so much potential in this scenario, there can be harmless tashan between the two boys with Shivam having his upperhand just because He has "GF" card 😆

When that portion started, I smiled wildly but soon you managed to transform it into a big 'o'. So big I almost shrieked and my brother is sure that I have turned a pagal (from my unimportant sudden laughs for the past few days)😆😆 Hahaha Sorry for denting your image.!

Agar aap aise updates kuch aur dinon ke liye dete rahoge na main toh has haske mar jaunga

Sachmein Neil ka itna gussa, ki pda ka parwa nahi kiya, jake jhatkese kiss kardiya.😉 Expect the unexpected when i am the story teller.! 😉

I am confused Neil Akash ki problem pe focus kar payegi ya nahi apne hot ajooba ko samne pakar. Haa, iss baat pe toh mujhe bhi thoda doubt hai.!

My goodness I am just thinking about the kiss and the kids who watched it. Poor kids.!

Pahli baar aisa comment kiya jahan pe maximum space bas ek concluding line chura ke le gaya. Max comments are on this line only.!

Di u are amazing, sacnmein aaj aapne writer goals prove kar diya😊 Aww, aesa bhi kuch hota hai? But anyway thank u so much.!

Eagerly waiting for a sizzling Avneilicious epi. Dont have too high hopes.!

P.s : Socha aapke health ke bareme puchugi par epi padhke laga ki aap superduper mood mein ho.I hope everything is fine I dont let my health affect my studies or creativity.!

P.P.S: If u are thinking of giving a teaser and then vanishing off toh sachmein teaser nahi chahiye .Mujhe agla update padhna ha 😛. Par agar aap aisa nahi karoge toh teaser is most welcomed. Extra dhamaka aur romance kon deny kar sakta hai.😆😉 I will really be on and off here for quiet sometime.! Somethings are just keeping me too busy now a days.!

Loads and loads of love

Take care

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

You are the only person who could bring crazy names😆lilliputian , elfin , monster uncle😆 That should be a compliment for me.! Btw you forgot Piddi and junior warriors.! 😆 Bar bar kids and kiddo likh ke mai hi bore hojati toh readers se kya expect karti.! 😉And this is the only story I'm witnessing hero to get jealous of 7 year old and heroine to get jealous of her friend as her fiance as so much time for him😆 Again a compliment.! I guess thats how you weave a "unique" story that hooks readers till the end.! Readers always hopes to read something new, whats the fun in reading vohi old ghissi pite paitre.! 😉

Take your shirt off ! Omg ! I went back to Neil's post surgery days😆This is what happens when you are so lost in moment and she was totally caught off guard . Their infamous epic Shirt Utar moment toh banta tha to brand them as Avneil.! 😉And their friends are wonderful man ! I thought someone is gonna blush watching this reunion of two so much in love idiots . But they were enjoying PDA😆I loved all her reactions to her gang whrw they were teasing😆 Thank u so much for mentioning that.! Its heartening to know when readers undersyand your characters well.! Even the supporting characters.!

When will this Ms.Ajooba realise . It's now so obvious to even nurses who had taken pleasure to decode her relationship with Neil . This girl still couldn't get . Exactly.! Even after such drastic changes in her own self she still thinks its not love.! Simebody is needed to knock some sense in this girl.!

The first kiss . If I'm not wrong isn't this Neil's dream . A well maintained secret coming out this way ! Nah ! Nah ! Mei pehle hi har manti hon if it's real . And you girl being an expert in teasing I expect this . I wonder what you have with this scene This should be a sin for u to know me so well.! I am not opening up mouth on this.! You have got to wait for the next update.!

Originally posted by: Srivanithummeti

Omg riya I cannot believe it avneil first kiss dont say its a dream of neil waiting for the next updaye pls update soon

Originally posted by: Sanyl

Awww such an adorable & cute Avneil...

Thanks dear for mood freshening update...

Originally posted by: docritu99

Hey buddy,
So i guess you are the one who was very excited about Neil-Shivam Interaction, and so i hope u have enjoyed it.! I enjoyed it to the fullest
Thank u so much for ur valuable review.!
Means a lot to me.!

Much love.!

Originally posted by: docritu99

Hey Sri,
Thank u so much for all the showers of compliments and goody good words.
They simply added extra light to my dull day.!

Much love.!

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Mark it ! I will send my ghost to knock sense into Avni if she is not gonna realise soon . Seriously.! Should i be scared.? Also we are reaching that point too, very soon.! And yeah I'm gonna have you on gunpoint when my ghost is giving some enlightenment to Avni . Else I know you will brainwash my ghost too *sticking tongue out and runs away*😈 Sounds to me like some allegation.! Remember i am seedhi sadhi and bhooli bhali.! I wont do such things.!

See I know you😎

Who will be that punya aatma to make her realise it ?! Hai koi.! All i can say is You have Apaar prem for that Person.! 😉 *HINT TIME.! 😉

Originally posted by: iris_diaries

<font color="#ff00ff">Actually Di previous comment pe jab maine puch tha ki agar ailines ke owner ka naam samane ajayega toh people will make two and two and all will uncerstand that the super clandestine miss pareikh is their very own avni pariekh. Toh aapne kaha this all can bring the much needed announcement. Toh maine socha ki kuch log toh neil ko pehchan lega and their job will be much more easier after the kiss. Ohkay.! Lets go step by step now.! Firstly, AP are just initials, for outsiders it may not necessarily relate to Neil Khanna's Love Life. Chalo man lo Neil's followers are crazy like Adiza shippers who relate everything to his Love life and get to the point that AP are actually the initials of his Fiance deciphering P stands for Pareikh, Then They are left with Miss A Pareikh now.! They still can lay their hands on Avni as an individual.! Their can be many Girls with A Pareikh name in India, right.! Plus bonus is Avni is Not a Famous Camera personality.! So they are very much Clandestine even After AP Airlines go onboard untill and Unless Its Actual Owner's name remains hidden which Neil will make sure of.! About the kiss and its aftermaths, picture abhi baki hai mere dost 😉</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">Aaj subah phirse ek baar last chappy padha aur laga ki kahin yeh Neil ka dream toh nahi. Kya humara sharif banda sachmein itna besharam hojayega.😆 Actually, ur llast line can be pondered over deeply.! </font>

<font color="#ff00ff">Aur aaj maine notice kiya ki iss epi ka shirt utaar moment ke bareme likhna main bhul hi gaya.</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">And Neil tried to save some girls purse. An act of goodness.😊 A true gentelman.! </font>

<font color="#ff00ff">And the way Avni clinged to Neil's shirt and Neil taking in her scent. I just got cute teddy vibes, jaise hum bachpan mein teddies ko pakadke sote the.😳 Ahh, they do behave like one.! </font>

<font color="#ff00ff">Pata hai aaj mujhe aisa laga ki agar ek naamkaran season 2 start hota n with the wonderful cast based on this story, jo daily nk dosage hum miss kar rahe the na woh pure ho jata. I have no hopes of NK 2 but happy that u considered this cast for it.! Thats big.! </font>

<font color="#ff00ff">Inn cvs ko samajhna chahiye tha, har wakt story ko aage badane ke liye aur trp bhejne ke liye bura bura leaps, lambi lambi seperation tracks ki koi jarurat nahi hoti hai Iske baare me complain karte karte pura NK nikal gaya.! </font>

<font color="#ff00ff">Iss story mein itna positivity and its getting so much readers attention.👏 Even Positivity is worth a shot.! 😉</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">Saabko samajhna chahiye,Agar society mein, stories mein ,tv shows mein sab jagah itna negative character bad gaya toh kiskisko accha lagta hai.</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">Accha teaser kab derehe ho app. Jaldi dena And here u conclude with ur demanding style.! 😆 I love it.! Will try my best for it.! </font>

<font color="#ff00ff">With all my love</font>

Originally posted by: docritu99

Hey buddy,
Thank u so very much for ur wholesome comment.!
I am glad that enjoyed Avni-ali-DD moments too.!

Much love to u too.!

Originally posted by: mayurg2010

What on Earth just happened? Like really?? Kuch toh hua hai, kuch hogaya hai.!

And you stopped right there where you shouldn't? Hahaha 😆 Evilness Redefined.! 😉

Not fair at all... I wish I could read your ff for eternity.. I so wish. Aww, thats such a cute compliment.! Thank u so much.!

How can someone write so much pure love story yet be romantic at the same time? I am considering it as a statement and not a question and also shamelessly taking all credits on me.! 😉