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iykyk

@iykyk_3

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+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

This is so heart-breaking... I'm already feeling so low owing to the off-air news. This just adds to it. But this one is painfully beautiful. Can't see Avni in this state. Poor girl is so broken. If someone else was in her place, they would have given up long back. Either they would have become totally insane or would have fallen into the deep pits of depression. I know Avni is strong. But how much can an individual actually bear? Avni's life is like a tragic poem, agonizing, but beautiful. God! I'mm feeling so depressed right now. Nothing I say would make any sense. So I better leave it at that.

Please do continue this one Sanju. Will be waiting to read more.

Much love!

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canzasana

@canzasana

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

😭😭🥺 so beautiful avni's pain you did justice with her character, exactly like it should be, neil realized his mistake, love sunheri, finally some dialogue for tara sitara😆poor twins. and I am glad you send avni to see ayeasha ma, cvs had forgotten that she is close to her mother. love the ending, I feel we got our old neil back who cares about her. She can fight with everyone but how can she fight the man she loves the most and lastly, I love how you use FB in your creative writing. now i dont care what they will show in episode, I will remember your RS and the emotions behind it.👏

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SilentAvNeil

@SilentAvNeil

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Wow awesome fiction. You captured what Avni feels amazingly. Please update soon.

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Nidhii

@Nidhii.3007

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Kaha gaayab rehti hai tu yaar.

Pls don't let avni forgive Neil so soon this time. He has broken her heart beyond mending. I was literally crying seeing this broken avni. Aur kitna tadpegi ye ladki .

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

She shouldn't forgive him any sooner. Even anger has limits . This kind of made anger should be taken care of . Let him plead for her forgiveness . She took the correct decision to stay at sukoon house . Iske bad bhi she is not telling him the truth . At least sunehri should slap at his face

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Sd1978

@Sd1978

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Great update...let neil beg a while...

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7
I loved it!!! So far Avni's pain is yet to be vented out. This was brilliant, can you please continue and put an end to it from your perspective... would love to know your thought..

Neutral viewer and random commenter..

Thankyou🤗

Avni will have a different way of venting it out...may be... I already updated...hope you'll like the next part..

I did got carried away...so i don't know if that's reasonable Update or not..

😃

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: AgnesFan
Neilhas to get some serious reality check to understand her . He even called her illegitimate . Last thing he could do to break her . I wish Neil doesn't get Avni .

It would never happen... yesterday's precap made me feel soo much better...i saw that on loop...

Neil needs that... seeing him restless ... worried for avni...and the way he said "BAS"... he's there... Avni's Neil is still there...

Coming back to this story sri... he'll have to work it out... it'll never be easy..for either of them..

Hope you liked the next part😳

Thank you sri!🤗

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Sd1978
Pls.dont leave us hanging..pm.when updated pls!

Updated!!

Pmed!!😆

Thank-you😃

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Sanvee_R

@Sanvee0812

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445
Kya yaar rula diya re tune.😭
I'm sorry❤️
If the writing makes you feel any of human emotions then it should be considered a compliment for the writer of how good he/she is. Same goes to u too sanju.aww thankyou nidhi🤗
Avni again running away. Ye ladki bhaagne ke alawa aur kuch nahi soch Sakti.
Bhaagi nahi hai😲 last do line padh...
Waise did u watch the random question segment of adiza
Yes i did. They are Super cute... just wish they upload the starting bit rainbow colored part. 😉 that was something...
I saw it and definitely felt the adiza vibes from it.

Thank you soo much nidhi🤗

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