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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sami! i love your update, Neil and Avni working on same case, I love how Avni was cool and clam but inside her there is a fire. I cant wait anymore!! suspense is killing me!! please update soon. i want to know what happen to Avni and her past. i also want to know how they will communicate with each other. Avni that we know dont take any orders from anyone.😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sugar_candy15

Sami aap story ko itna suspense mein chod dete ho.

Please jaldi update karo what happened to Avni?

Awesome update with brilliant poetry.❤️


Mujhe pehla insaan ne aap bulaaya hai!!!😆


Avni has nightmares! Read the preface once again! Someone else also has nightmares!


Sorry for giving u a hint!😆

Thanks for appreciation for poetry!



Suspense toh mere khoon mai hai!!! Rago mein dodta hai!


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: canzasana

Sami! i love your update, Neil and Avni working on same case, I love how Avni was cool and clam but inside her there is a fire. I cant wait anymore!! suspense is killing me!! please update soon. i want to know what happen to Avni and her past. i also want to know how they will communicate with each other. Avni that we know dont take any orders from anyone.😆

What???? Who doesn't take orders?



Thanks. Avni has a hidden fire , which will be soon revealed. Suspense abhi dekha kaha tune, meri rago mai hai, mere khoon mai! Itni aasani se nahi, tham jao. Avni ki kahaani toh abhi dikhayi hi kya maine!



Communicate ka toh pata nahi, but you read as the chapters go!


Love,
Sami
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yay! Finally a Senior Member!! For this , i will give a treat!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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reserving this place for myself.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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#3 -A Step Closer!

'A New clue,

To the destination,

To find the hidden mysteries,

Of this maze,

A Step Closer,

To the hue,

Of the Beautiful phase.

Connecting the dots,

To find the leak,

In the haze.'


A beautiful yet hazy sunshine gives warmth and light to the people, a new ray of hope to the survivors.

Arya , she was a survivor and a fighter, and she grew up with a very old myth all her lifetime that woman are not strong neither they should be. Or even act to be. She was used to receive a wrath every time she asked the reasons why was that told to her.

She was used to wake up early, as sleep was taken away with that incident 5 years ago.


With a cup of tea, she smiled looking at the sun, as finally she was going to get justice.

After years of sorrow, depression, and a war with herself, she has finally got upliftment, she has finally come out of the hassle!



She smiled as her brain spoke such!

She did not realize the heart speaks the truth, no matter what the brain says.

Neither she did not knew another disaster was waiting for her.




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Same day, Avni's House


I woke up today, freshened me, and my horrors today i had no nightmares! Why. For the first time after that chain of horrible incidents , i never felt them, neither had nightmares! This was never destined to happen to me! Why i felt an optimistic aura around me? The questions were left unanswered and i came out of my thoughts, not knowing my fate is to change soon.




'Wind blows ,

Comes forth and back,

Wind blows,

Goes to and fro,

It oscillates,

And brings,

The breeze and aura,

Of an optimistic being.'





"Arya" .


Yes


Do you have any contact details of Rithvik?


As such i remember, i deleted all contacts with him.


Avni, we need a person who can find all his details, and i know a perfect person for that.


And who is that person?


'Abhay Aggarwal'.He can find all his profiles, but we need a hacker to gain more information.



With a smirk, she smiled back, with a blazing fire in her eyes. 'Ain't i assigned for the work? I am a pro at hacking. Fetch me those details and i will switch to my work.

Neil, in the mean time, find any clues regarding him. Meanwhile i will bring the case files...


Avni gets busy in arranging and getting the files from the messed up shelf. She observed carefully, that the things kept there had a lot of dust,and in a total mess!

She carefully kept the things at one shelf, the books on other, and the files arranged in a organized way.

A thin file made its way out of the pile.

She was going to put it in when Neil Called her-

'Avni, I think we have found a new clue , a missing piece to solve the puzzle'



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Ritvik Aggarwal- The Most Famous Businessman in today's world. His Family lives peacefully in the sheets of comfort life, but he has disappeared 5 years ago since the rape case including him closed.


"He has disappeared. Which means either he is hiding or he is dead"


Let's find more tomorrow, there is so much to the suspense!


Yeah, let's go to our homes.




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So , Here's the update.Word limit - 600+

Do find something that u are curious about. I am though, for my own story!😆😆

I want u all to think about every single clue i gave away. AvNeil missed something. But u should not. Anyway , I will be having an off on wednesday, due to boards, so i may give a double update.


Teaser coming up soon.


And , my index would be uploaded soon so u can check all my stories.



Love,

Sami




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Posted: 7 years ago
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I love your poems
They are so apt for their paragraphs.

Bahaut suspense hai.
Let's see aage kya hota hai.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey guys,

So i wanted to know that do you want just a teaser or an update with the teaser?
The update might open some mysteries and teaser will reveal something from the future.




Also, please try to see and review about the update. As i am Sending pm's and updating index, notifying for every chapter but response is getting less.



Do check the last chapter. And next will be updated soon.




Love,
Sami





A/N : I have 2 collaborations going on. They will be updated soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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another disaster is waiting for Arya. Avni didnt have nightmare, is she making peace with this case, interesting, they find another clue!! Mr.Aggarwal is missing so much to explore, sorry for late review, with show going offair or getting extension and things with it. should I make peace with it or rant about it. you know what I mean.. well thank you for PM. and congrats for becoming senior.🥳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: canzasana

another disaster is waiting for Arya. Avni didnt have nightmare, is she making peace with this case, interesting, they find another clue!! Mr.Aggarwal is missing so much to explore, sorry for late review, with show going off air or getting extension and things with it. should I make peace with it or rant about it. you know what I mean.. well thank you for PM. and congrats for becoming senior.🥳




Be in peace girl! So only u and no other comment. Gah! I won't give u updates. I will give u all even lovelier updates. But no review. This is so bad!


Arya , diaster. Socho Socho. Avni is trying to solve mystery, while she is getting entwined being herself a mystery. I will reveal a lot in next openly. Pm toh hamesha bhejti hoon, bas padhte nahi log.


Mr. Aggarwal is a big mystery himself. U will have a long way till u reach there...

Yeah senior member...

Endless to explore in my world!

Tata!




Love,
Sami

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